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Seanzo 06-04-2014 08:05 PM

Ron Jereurghmy vs Prelec
 
Let's go.

@Ron Jereurghmy
I'm sorry but I don't see squares they're too two dimensional
c^2 two dimensional did I mention you'll too die mention a
Lame in my radius, aim in my radius
My team a take over the radio- call it the radius

He bitchmade how much this bitch made
Being bitch maid? I think this bitch may die
Thinking this bitch made heíll get his bitch May
Switchbladed switch blades to skin maiden

Bitch may owe me that aioli you such a po boy
This shrimp needs lettuce, in between bread you a po boy
I'm not saying you're a snitch but what I know bro
You're not saiyan but you were trained by Mr. Popo

My games off the handle can't stand all my mathematics
Donít make autos guns angry you canít handle my mad matics
Two sigs sit on my hip like they siamese sisters
Them black bitches kicking all crazy then itís solange jay-z

@Prelec
STOP SAYING MY RHYMES SUCK D:

Today I wanna break stuff with a reason for that
Hey, I can use this fake stuffed cheap pig to wreck
this is Ripoff Ron, lets beat up this fag
SLOOOOOOWWWWWW ITTT DOWNNNN
I rip off Rons legs and beat m with that

Im the king (Liu Kang) of wordplay so look at(lucas) this(diz) <OMG GET THE FUCK OUTTA HERE

You Nicki minaj look alike, this season youre dead
Ill catch everyone who tries to sting me, bees in the trap
COMPARISON TIME
I had a decent threesome on easter Ďn shit
You keep on creeping cuz you need it to fap

Donít make jokes, Im already teasing this man
Ron and his family are shit, YOU PIECES OF CRAP
And your mom called, she really is mad
Cuz when you said you had fans that blow, she tried to have a meeting with them

GET IT CUZ IT WAS A FAN THAT BLOWS WIND TOPTIER WORDPLAY OMG

Now stop being a liar ron, cuz youre eating so fast
You donít diet, youre still being realī fat
The only goals you set are on a GTA map
Now tell me, are my rhymes really that bad? (probably but idc)

Prelec 06-04-2014 08:11 PM

I enjoyed reading your verse, Ron.
But watch your rhymes, Ron.
You rhyme radius with radius, made with die and maiden, boy with boy and sister with jay-z.
Besides that I iked your verse.
Keep up that cool wordplay you got going on right there

MFtastick 06-04-2014 08:20 PM

@Ron Jereurghmy
I sorta liked how you were going with the synonyms and whatnot but they really werent landing to well. and alot of the time you rhymed a word with the exact same word. and that closer was weak imo. like extremely weak. but i digress. good stuff.

@Prelec
lol you my g bruh. i can trust il be entertained reding your verses. i liked alot of yours, but that liu kang bar was pretty weak g. maybe i just didnt understand it but yeah. i said it once il say it again. prelec makes top 5 pg battler in my books

W goes to prelec for me. dope shit yall

Prelec 06-04-2014 08:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MFtastick (Post 300697)
i liked alot of yours, but that liu kang bar was pretty weak g.

That was on purpose a badbar haha, thx 4 the vote

Lebron Jereurghmy 06-04-2014 09:40 PM

true dat I'm still workin on it enjoyed your verse as well def some punches in there I had to give a nod. I wasnt trying to rhyme sister with jay z I rhymed crazy with jay z sister was just incidental and partially rhymes with sig hip etc. Also I was saying the same words over and over in purpose like "po boy/poor boy" but yeah like I said still workin on it

Tbh doe my solange/so long jayz bar wouldve had ratchets catchin vapors if it was delivered irl

Dank Schrader 06-04-2014 11:28 PM

gave this on to pre, king of the slow it downs, had a good few lines that made me for real lol

ron, im not a huge fan of the style you used, although when its done well it does work, i wasnt feeling the first 2 sections of 4, but the 3rd one was nice. the last 4 was a nice idea the structure just needs some work, i dint pick up on the crazy/jay z rhyme until i saw it mentiond in the thread. you are right some stuff like that would sound better spat live, but you have to tailor your shit so the reading audience can keep with the flow otherwise it can lead to people missing stuff. despite not loving the material, the flow on the bitch made/maid shit was real nice, but the maiden finish to the scheme was an off rhyme and it just sort of ground the momentum to a halt.


good first showing though, things to be worked on but your on the right track

Clarke KillingSouls 06-04-2014 11:47 PM

I gave the W to Ron for a easier read and enjoyable.

Prelec, I dont if its a habit, but please stop that slow it down crap, and you need polish your writtens.

Dank Schrader 06-05-2014 12:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clarke KillingSouls (Post 300861)
I gave the W to Ron for a easier read and enjoyable.

Prelec, I dont if its a habit, but please stop that slow it down crap, and you need polish your writtens.

yeah prelec, you need polish your writtens, no good at writing is you:rolleyes:

barz2AM 06-05-2014 01:12 AM

I like the mad matics line..

HEXANE 06-05-2014 02:11 AM

like the bitch made scheme too, but the end rhyme threw me off like i was sitting next to double o 7

Prelec 06-05-2014 05:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clarke KillingSouls (Post 300861)
I gave the W to Ron for a easier read and enjoyable.

Prelec, I dont if its a habit, but please stop that slow it down crap, and you need polish your writtens.

I lost you at ''a easier read and enjoyable''

Normal English pls

PS @Altair's Carnage do you get the slow it down, quan chi fatality, omg get the fuck outta here bars4days

Altair's Carnage 06-05-2014 03:56 PM

Yeah that was pretty sick lol. Prelec got this easy for me. You need work Ron...thats all Ima say.Polish yourself.

Juicemw 06-05-2014 11:25 PM

sometimes the shit @Prelec says its so cringeworthy its almost on purpose I think. That slow it down rofl. Ron, I think you had the right idea, just things weren't hitting as well like others said.

Lebron Jereurghmy 06-06-2014 01:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Altair's Carnage (Post 301322)
Yeah that was pretty sick lol. Prelec got this easy for me. You need work Ron...thats all Ima say.Polish yourself.

I polish myself daily

SuckaFreeCashier 06-06-2014 02:15 AM

This is a difficult battle to judge. I was glad to see both battlers take a different approach than the norm (even though thats prelecs thing already), definitely makes things more interesting around here. I felt like a lot of Ron's lines were stretched and the rhyming was off in a couple of major spots. But your flow was on point in certain sections and I liked the play on words you brought. I thought Pre was just a bit off his normal comedic game. For you to get my vote, you gotta make me laugh all throughout the verse and that just didn't happen this time. Voting Ronald.

Skunk Hogan 06-09-2014 08:39 AM

Close battle, but I was feeling @Ron Jereurghmy a bit more, he had some nice angles so he gets my vote.

Go check my battle vs barz2am and let me know what you think


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