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Old 10-12-2018, 04:58 AM   #1
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would you guys listen to my EP?

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thanks...I hope you like it...and if you don't thanks for giving it a listen anyway
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Old 10-12-2018, 12:34 PM   #2
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10,000% honesty - this is extremely average. You asked for opinions on an open forum. I couldn't even make it through the first track. The beat was weak, and your delivery and lyrics were subpar. I'm not here to shit on you at all, and I'm not saying I could do it better. Just honest critique. Also your rap moniker is really bad (yes I know my user name is also ridiculous, it's just something I've kept since I was in my teens).

Anyhow, keep it going. I hope it works out. I promise you this isn't a negative post. You asked. I answered. Cheers.
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Old 10-12-2018, 06:42 PM   #3
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Old 10-12-2018, 08:29 PM   #5
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thanks yall! preciate the feedback
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Old 10-12-2018, 08:32 PM   #6
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10,000% honesty - this is extremely average. You asked for opinions on an open forum. I couldn't even make it through the first track. The beat was weak, and your delivery and lyrics were subpar. I'm not here to shit on you at all, and I'm not saying I could do it better. Just honest critique. Also your rap moniker is really bad (yes I know my user name is also ridiculous, it's just something I've kept since I was in my teens).

Anyhow, keep it going. I hope it works out. I promise you this isn't a negative post. You asked. I answered. Cheers.

I don't think you could do better...if you keep listening there is probably something in there that you'll like...
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Old 10-12-2018, 09:04 PM   #7
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I don't rock with the lame-little-maggots, the ones in the trump administration-these-bastards that wanna take out health care and trade-it-for-caskets, peep the middle finger that they gave-to-the-masses


so whats-next-you-tyrants im dumb-stressed-im-trying but my blood-pressures-rising while their RAISING-THE-TAXES


fuck these fake-little-rappers that love-testifying and claim-their-the-baddest that's just-death-defying

as crazy-as-that-is I remain-in-this-rap-shit to upset-the-giants come-test-a-lion


I rock-on shitted on dot-com yall can hear I drop-bombs like funk-flex-when-rhymin

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bruh you think those rhyme schemes are SUB PAR???? mannnn you can't rap like that dog lmao
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It’s good, beats remind me of beautifullest era Keith Murray in parts + you remind me of John Smith (from Peanuts & Corn) who I’m a fan of, kill everybody’s theme similar to Lif’s - ‘Live from the Plantation’, don’t know if by design.

Only comments, just elevate production and recording quality, vox felt a touch loud and distorting at points (maybe try a good dynamic mic like Shure SM7b or EV RE-20?) + bass little light or maybe too heavily compressed on first few instrumentals (partic on psych ward)?

Keep it up sir, good work yo.

You’re writing is direct and not unnecessarily complex which is a good thing.

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