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Old 10-26-2014, 04:17 AM   #1
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** VOTE NOW ** RBL Season 1 Week 5: JShazo (2-2) vs. Numbersix (1-2)

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@JShazo

Looking like its war time so I keep that arm handy
Let that can spit, bullets'll brand Six like Tom Clancy
That blade'll cut six in his core thats an ab routine
Gun so big one shot'll put syxx in chyna like a sean waltman porno scene
Now he not pullin no bitches, what you thought he was mackin?
These hoes stay playing Number like a lottery addict
12 line limit they aint book me for a long time,so fuck the preshow, lets let that wheat grow, in 2D hoe
soooo its reading time, I type up, I got got lead hurr(lettrs) for number like a roman nume ral
Let me find out you slanging packs, I'm stumble on ya corner like "How much that rock go brother"
Slump em under the street light and leave Syxx wrapped around that steel post thats the bronco buster
Mean with the right, but i"m nice with that mac too
Putting Number in a bag...like a raffle

@NumberSix

finally caught the luck of the draw, this time i'm gonna win i'm going in,
turn around and face the wall.. im son of sam, im going ham.
green eggs and all.. you're O and ten, someone clue this fucker in
cuz he dont know what flowin is, still bufferin,

im loaded and i got you in the crosshairs when i pull the trig
bullet split the air and then your mullet hit - skull is split,
just hair and hemoglobin bits, mixed with the exploded tip,
shoulda known it when you got matched up with this bully shit

i'll put a bullet in your widows peak, just to hear your widow speak.
cuz she's lookin good in all black, plus i heard she's a little freak
i call that bitch taco, cuz she got those carne asada flaps
and after an hour, a side of sour cream, plus her bottoms wet.
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Old 10-27-2014, 11:03 PM   #2
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Old 10-29-2014, 12:23 AM   #3
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Old 10-31-2014, 07:17 AM   #4
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shazo with a nameflip festival as usual. pretty good shit though 'stay playing Number like a lottery addict' stood out to me. I think it's hard to flip number without sounding lame, but this one was good. The number in a bag one was pretty tame imo. lead hurr felt real stretched to me, but liked the concept. overall this is a standard shazo verse - all flips - some of them fire, some of them not really hittin.

n6 - first 4 bars i had to read a couple times and not really sure what was goin on there. i mean eventually i could make it flow ok, but there is not much in the way of content that made sense to me. the widdow/speak wordplay is nice, I think that it could have been used more effectively though like 'im here/hair pointin at your forehead if your widow speak' or something.

overall i gotta give it to J for the non-stop flips/punches. n6 had some bright points but they were too few and far in between.
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Old 10-31-2014, 08:35 AM   #5
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Apart from shazo using 2 x pac bars (should have just stuck with the second one imo) the rest of his verse was easily enough for the win, the lottery and raffle bars were nice and that so its reading time killed me.

Six was ok, just not enough solid punches and some of the structure/rhymes were
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Old 10-31-2014, 01:02 PM   #6
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J really decent, creative ass punches, I was dying wen he flipped AyeVerbs showtime in to reading time. (Dat Lead Hurts line was kind of a reach doe, but da pucnch n it still worked out) wasn't really feeling da "how much a rock brotha/bronco buster line either. Everything else was koo tho.

#6 smh I ain't gonna lie bra I expected way better u seemed like sumbody who knows bars but 4 sum reason u came pretty amateur like on dis one. I gotta give J da W
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I actually laughed at the gun so big/chyna line. I thought that was pretty slick. Lottery addict was rad, the raffle seemed unfinished. Just tossed on there. Overall you went the name flip route which I like, and it worked out for you. Cool verse bruh.

NumberSix I actually did catch the flow in your first four, and I enjoyed it. That being said though there just wasn't any real content to make it hard hitting. And that sort of carried out through the verse. It was cool for just a general open-mic type thing with no real directed shit, but wasn't feeling it for a battle.

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Old 10-31-2014, 01:43 PM   #8
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** VOTE NOW ** RBL Season 1 Week 5: JShazo (2-2) vs. Numbersix (1-2)

Both had a little hit and miss bars, but I enjoyed the lottery addict line, for number that green eggs and all line made me laugh, wasn't a fan of the your last 3 bars. Edging to shazo



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Old 10-31-2014, 05:16 PM   #10
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Kind of expected a crazy battle, to me it was Shazo but neither were at their best. Too much weird wording or formatting in six's verse or something.
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Old 11-01-2014, 12:19 PM   #11
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Shazo got this with no prob..he namedfliped the fuck outta six's name.
He got this convincingly..
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Old 11-01-2014, 06:00 PM   #12
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I remember Shazo saying somewhere that he basically keystyled this verse.. it sorta shows.. There was a few good lines though.. Likin the lottery addict shit and the bronco buster line was alright. A few wording issues here and there though and the closer was a legit bad bar lmao.

Six's opening 4 wasnt anything special. Middle 4 bars started off alright but had no real punches and ended off kinda light.. Closer was kinda funny but still weak punch-wise.. Shazo gets this battle pretty easily.

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I got 6 on this one, off preference. Yeah his first 2 bars are a little off but I liked his flow and the bars just hit a bit more for me. both had some not-quite type shit and I had 6 winning by a point on my Fatman Arbitrary Judging System
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Old 11-01-2014, 10:34 PM   #16
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I could tell Shazo rushed his verse, but it was still dope. He had more than enough for the win. That lottery addict bar was dope. And that Aye Verb "showtime" shit was

NumberSix had some crisp rhymes and the flow was on point, but there just wasn't anything impactful enough to pull off an upset. I did like the widow's peak/widow speak wordplay, but it didn't turn into anything too heavy.

Shazo takes this one.
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Old 11-02-2014, 03:25 AM   #17
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Six' verse was actually really good, but damn @ Shazo keystyling & still showing out. Just goes to show how quick & clever a writer can potentially be. Kinda weird i pretty much keystyled my verse for Six too. I'm edging this to Shazo though, probably on the strength of the wrestling bars & his rendition of "showtime" shit was hilarious
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@JShazo wins, @NumberSix cannot participate next week due to posting no links
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