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Battle RMBVA Chalked Out Presents: Popjorn vs. cripplesunday1


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Old 03-20-2017, 11:49 PM   #1
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RMBVA Chalked Out Presents: Popjorn vs. cripplesunday1

@Popjorn

I wish you well dude - what I shall do? Iíll up your confidence; thatís a morale boost
It ainít sonís day to test, Iíll leave Sunday to rest - I like my good olí Christian values

Let me tell you, Iíll raise the roof - now rentís due, or get someone to represent you
Pay up, Iím giving Cripple this work and not Ďcause thereís a quota I have to attend to

Iíll end you, leave you with crippling depression, you canít fight or hurt this tiny nerd
Iím cooking the way these lines are merged, Iím your daddy, Cripple - thatís Heisenberg

But youíve got a lot to prove, even Yagerbomb didnít have the energy to take a shot at you
So whatever youíre mixing or concocting dude youíll end up at the bottom of a bottle too

And thatís tough to chew, so time travelled like Doctor Who but thereís still no spot for you
Busy casino - no slot for you, nobody cares about Sunday like ďIíve got vacation for the next month or twoĒ

But youíre number one for God, so wooh! But before you lighten up, Iíll flip the switches
Throw a little bitch fit - Youíll Cover, thereís a Metal to this Client Ďcause itís strictly business

Please - Iím a machine with it, Hasta la Vista, a barista, steam bringing
Iíll hold up a skull after this performance - thatís Shakespeare, what we readís different

So kill my famí like Chris Benoit? You know how that dude just died? Right, suicide,
Ruined pride, but if you hang your head up high you might just end up with the coolest tie

I recommend for you to try, my point of view? - youíre sketchy like Newtonís eye
You wanted to body me but youíre Apollo Creed, losing to the newest guy

I feel like Peter Parker, I put a body on this web shit, so talk your threat shit
But his life, did I end it? Or does he barely have any left itís, your choice - itís all subjective

@cripplesunday1

I wish PopjornÖwas not born. he wanna lock horns? what for? is he transgender? iím not sure.
Kid acts hardcore, gets loud like a fog horn, but this pussy ainít getting crazyÖ.......soft porn.

I wanted to put money up. but the pussy said no, what ya acting like a bitch for hoe?
The way he folded on the dough, was like he was makiní a calzone.
Whatever this imaginary 50. reach, thats my cals zone.
Fuck what you herd, i can do this shit til the cows come home.

You joined this forum hoping ya gain fans and ya brand expand.
But your short, your midget arms throwing punches thatíll Netherland.

Your rap styles imitation, language barriers cause limitations.
guilty of cultural appropriation, looks like he opposes immigration.
Your a try hard beg, i couldnít care less, there is no correlation.
Still catch me fucking up Dutchmans hometown, like the Nazi occupation.

Your a melancholic sap, iím a diabolic lad. A Cripplesunday punch hit harder than a alcoholic dad.
Prick you wanna scrap? Admiral Ackbar It's A Trap! Iím throwing life enders. heís throwing happy slaps.

If he pulls a blade, small man, you donít bother me.
If i pull a blade, body parts flapping like a nudist colony.
If he want Gwar, he ainít gon stop me. end up dead like David Brockie.
Girls describe him as kinda stalky, nowt he types is gonna rock me.
Iím an A bomb, you Nagasaki, ninja wit the blade, no Kawasaki.
This spacky bitch, ainít saying nothingÖÖÖÖÖÖÖYAK!I YAKI! YAKI!
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Old 03-21-2017, 06:36 AM   #2
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Good shit Jorn. Fun read.

Sorry about the nazi occupation bar. I feel terrible
If it helps the yagerbomb bar cut deep
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Old 03-21-2017, 07:05 AM   #3
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Fuck you guys voting Sunday for jorn killed that shit
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Old 03-21-2017, 08:26 AM   #4
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Popjorn

"Iím cooking the way these lines are merged, Iím your daddy, Cripple - thatís Heisenberg"

Cute

"Busy casino - no slot for you"

Alright. Alright.I see you.

"youíre sketchy like Newtonís eye"

GODDAMN!

Cripsunday

"Still catch me fucking up Dutchmans hometown, like the Nazi occupation."

Dope.

"he ainít gon stop me. end up dead like David Brockie."

As a Va boy the Gwar bar pulled my heart strings.

Popjorn had better less consistent punches but weaker structure and flow which is why I ended up giving it to crip.

Very similiar "p nut/madflex" like styles. Enjoyed reading it.
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Old 03-21-2017, 08:51 AM   #5
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props to popjorn since he's writing in english which isn't his primary language, that being said some of his writing patterns hurt my brain trying to make them fit, example right out the gate: morale boost, good ol Christian values but I did like the I'm your daddy cripple heisenberg bar

cripples on the other hand had much better flow patterns out the gate, also his angles seemed a bit more effective and applied well, over all not too bad

edge to Cripple but as I said props to Jorn for his efforts
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Old 03-21-2017, 09:39 AM   #6
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Fuck you guys voting Sunday for jorn killed that shit
*goes and votes for luke*
if it helps i voted for jorn, not cuz i thought he won, just thought that was what you were supposed to do

heres a throwaway that didn't make it

'you canít beat me ya dutch lame, my self deprecation games is insane
while you and Prelec out here looking like Pinky and the Brain. that have debatables with Nick Vayne'
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Old 03-21-2017, 09:50 AM   #7
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*goes and votes for luke*
if it helps i voted for jorn, not cuz i thought he won, just thought that was what you were supposed to do

heres a throwaway that didn't make it

'you canít beat me ya dutch lame, my self deprecation games is insane
while you and Prelec out here looking like Pinky and the Brain. that have debatables with Nick Vayne'
hahahahah nice
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Old 03-21-2017, 11:39 AM   #8
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hahahahah nice
Haha facts, Popjorn sucks tho.
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Old 03-21-2017, 12:46 PM   #9
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Just re-read and I dont get how you voting for cripple no offence but jorn got a clean win here
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Old 03-22-2017, 02:48 PM   #10
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Pop started iffy but after the first few bars he hitting with some fire
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Old 03-23-2017, 03:24 AM   #11
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Popjorn impressed me here. Didnt expect much with english being his second language but he did have some fire lines in there. Really good rhyme patterns and multis too. #1 dutch battler on here atm lmao prelec and nick gotta step aside. Newtons eye and heisenburg lines were nice. Keep it up and show out for next events.. honestly I can say I didnt expect much but you did pretty good.

Cripple started a little slow but his last half of the verse every line was hitting. That nazi occupation bar was fire sheeeesh.. liked the cal zone scheme too. Really liking how that shit reads too.. flowed real well.

Close battle here but I got Cripple with the W on having the best punch of the battle. Punch count was about the same but cripple was a little stronger.. Popjorn was right there with em just another good punch or two away from taking it tbh. Good battle
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