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Battle RMBVA Presents The Revival 2: MrMumbles905 vs. Memphis


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MrMumbles905 4 25.00%
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Old 10-28-2016, 02:22 PM   #1
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RMBVA Presents The Revival 2: MrMumbles905 vs. Memphis

@MrMumbles905

Like a bad drunk,Iím not one to go to bars with. 16ís will kill you at that length with ease/
I know my age is an easy target, and you got some dumb joke about how I havenít made it and elderly//
Well your rhymes are dog shit man, how yall think he ever could put an end to me/
End of the road whether boys to men its Memphis always on bended your knees//
See unless you want your life in jeopardy, then please donít Send for me/
Think you cold? I punch through the Ice like a trained Black Belt 10th Degree//
Your little threats are truly dead to me, and I canít take serious nothing from you that is said to me/
When I see Ur girls eating other niggas groceries, you still loving that woman tenderly//
Non of your rhymes really meant for me, cause you aint ready for the war mentally/
Boss of the bars like Sam, so cheers, as You getting smoked like a century//
First the site had no respect for me, Now They begging me please let him be/
U taking straight Shots and not meaning Hennessy//
No Forgetting this,no matter how hard this guy tries, ass whooping burned into your memory/
Popping up as the time flies, when you feeling safe again like herb Remember me?//
Please just remember G, I got some violent tendencies/
They say pussies got 9 lives, So how many deaths facing Memphis? Ten I See//

@Memphis

Before we start this battle, let us pray, you about to get ya head wrapped and I ain't talking sway

kuz I'm bout that pistol play, long guns I keep the K, and one word to describe my clips ........snake way,

so make way,

kuz I'm throwing bullets, hail merry's Like a good quarterback you can't fuck with my passes,

Kuz when I'm focused my lines magnify like an Asian with glasses,

And now you getting yo assed kicked .............kuz you's a punk,

The type to go back in time and get your ass beat again..........you like future trunk

Mumbles you a nerd, so me + guns + you, man you better figure out that equation fast,

For thinking you sick I'll let that glock cover your mouth like an Asian mask

This gutta shit, freestyle blunts rolled sippin gin and tonic,
You can try to fade till I'm Cyborg with that cannon man my shit bionic
and I'll send a couple shots your way that'll get rid of your whole squad like the Supersonics
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Old 10-28-2016, 02:44 PM   #2
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Voted memphis. Mumbles was really consistent with the rhymes but that really was the only thing worth mentioning. Seems like you were too busy rhyming every sentence with each other that you forgot to throw in some punches


Memphis wasnt really consistent but had some funny moments in there. the asian with glasses line sticks out for me.

Please for the next battle fix your formatting(both of you)
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Old 10-28-2016, 04:03 PM   #3
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I keep seeing mumbles getting better and can tell that nigga is a problem I was waiting on that "you got a way with words, I got a way with murder" haymaker to win the battle for you but didn't see... you had a lot of good bars and great flow just needed that one line to put you over the hump

Memphis is a vet and did what vets do great battle tho voted Memphis
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Old 10-28-2016, 05:12 PM   #4
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Memphis is not the worst person
Are we allowed to post in our own thread or are y'all cracka's still on that hoe shit


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Old 10-28-2016, 05:27 PM   #5
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genuinely hurts to vote mumbles

no focus on cohesion or rhyming more than one syllable but he had sk

memphis was just super boring too tho

idk i dont feel like any1 got this.
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Old 10-28-2016, 11:52 PM   #6
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yeah, it's okay because you need to vote to even see the discussion.


we should be allowed one "no one" vote per event so we can still discuss

cus now i have a mumbles vote under my belt and idk how to feel about this
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mumbles - your all one multi thing was cool I guess, but the obvious problem with your verse is there are like no punches anywhere. It read nice, but at some point you have to have something. The Ten-I-See was pretty much your only attempt at wordplay and it wasn't very good tbh.

dunno what memphis was goin for here, I've seen him be alot better than this, maybe didnt try this time. I mean you at least had some bars in here, but it was really weird to read, and some of the lines could have been bad bars tbh.

pretty much a tie in my books - if you combined your strengths into one verse maybe it would be better. it's preference, but i voted mumbles pretty much just on readability...
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It's cool to keep up the rhyme scheme but I really couldn't get into the lack of punches and long winded lines (20+ syllables before the rhyme). Really fucks up the flow of the verse for me. Selling spree, referee, centipede, pedigree...I dunno. Pretty easy rhyme scheme to do.

Memphis had some...I dunno. Punches, I guess. Lots of asian jokes. Also, magnify like asians with glasses? What? Maybe I'm missing something, but that makes no sense to me.

Slight edge to Memphis.
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