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Battle Altair's Carnage vs Ron Jereurghmy


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Old 06-08-2014, 04:06 AM   #1
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Altair's Carnage vs Ron Jereurghmy

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@Altair's Carnage
Ron Jeremughmy, do you think you have a big cock? Well your girl isn't impressed with that/
How do you have a big cock? Cuz when I fucked her, she screamed so hard the next 3 neighboors Windows turned into broken glass/
In fact, she told me she fucks you she doesnt feel a thing/
When she fucks with you she asks "Is it in?'/
You fuckin prick
Your mother is a fat whore but she's so nice and precious/
Slow it dow
Your mother is a fat whore she's nice but like looks like she's PRECIOUS/

I mean really, if you powerslam her in a bed, you will break the floor and kill the neighboor downstairs/
But it'll be hard to mess with that hippo slob/
Because he could probably end my fuckin life with a vader bomb/

My family and therapist said I'm a mental Case, they tried everything antipsychots, ritalin and zoloft/
You are a disgusting motherfucker, your girl looks like Marilyn Manson with a mohawk/
When I see every bitch in your family my dick gets so soft/

Whatever dude, your girl cheats, she whores herself out to redneck truckers, she makes their dick squirm/
Disgusting, word is they look inbread, like those guys from Wrong Turn/


@Ron Jereurghmy
Iíll send goons like Doug ďThe ThugĒ Glatt

To where your plug be at yo cuz we strapped

With heavy arms you need to rev up hard to get em started

Ironically when I put lead in your chest, youíll be the one with the heavy heart

Die you clown go on ride arounds Ice C u Be Kevin Hart

Bitch I track marks when things get dark like at Peopleís Park

You trees all bark, itíll bite when the pieceíll spark

And I scatter every piece apart til it seems like a piece of art

You wanted a peace apart he must think itís a pizza party

Iíma chuck, he cheese with the bar schemes

Dominí Ďoes, Iíll pop a john for the parmesan G

Hit up your pizza hut with the choppas on me and pepper on he

He acting like heís got his slice of the pie but Iím like do he though?

Iíll spin this guy in the sky like Deweyís dough

Even in the studio, cool it bro- when I set up plots

any where he move he/movie getting shot
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and jewish people dont eat beef so ur definitely not right on that 1
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Old 06-08-2014, 04:08 AM   #2
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I'ma just make half this battle irrelevant by saying I don't have a big dick or a girl

but I laughed at "I mean really..."

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Old 06-08-2014, 12:21 PM   #3
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Yeah good shit G you went in with solid bars..all I can say is I came with my style...
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Old 06-08-2014, 01:27 PM   #4
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Ron got this one.. He had all around better bars.
Carnage first couple bars about dick ??
You lost off gate..

Ron i got u on the vote...this time..lol
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Old 06-08-2014, 01:39 PM   #5
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How much time did you guys spend on these verses? I didnt feel any single line.
No offense to both of you but this was below your levels.

Carnage, watch out with you flow. Its quite bad in this verse and your bars do not really make up of it either. I know you can do way better then this so try to spend more time on your verse and get back to your original schemes you always have. Even though the mohawk line made me chuckle.

Ron,please dont put spaces between every line, its quite annoying.
And tbh I still slike the piece of art/piece apart/peace apart he/ pizza party stuff, try to make more of that. Its entertaining.
Apart from that I didnt feel your verse either.

Voting for Ron but both need to step up their games next buttle because I know both of you, and especially carnage, can do WAY better.
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Old 06-08-2014, 01:42 PM   #6
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Take nothing away from Ron because he is probably better at this than me anyway but I wrote this in like 15-20 minutes. I wasnt really into this battle. I prepared more for what was to be my final 2 battles against Clarke and Loc

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Old 06-08-2014, 02:50 PM   #7
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How much time did you guys spend on these verses? I didnt feel any single line.
No offense to both of you but this was below your levels.

Carnage, watch out with you flow. Its quite bad in this verse and your bars do not really make up of it either. I know you can do way better then this so try to spend more time on your verse and get back to your original schemes you always have. Even though the mohawk line made me chuckle.

Ron,please dont put spaces between every line, its quite annoying.
And tbh I still slike the piece of art/piece apart/peace apart he/ pizza party stuff, try to make more of that. Its entertaining.
Apart from that I didnt feel your verse either.

Voting for Ron but both need to step up their games next buttle because I know both of you, and especially carnage, can do WAY better.
lol cmon bro you trees all bark? Ima chuck he cheese? thats classic shit. as for the spaces that was more for me I was counting the bars as I sent them to seanzo

thnx for the vote of confidence though ima try and put a couple extra days into my bars from now on this past few Ive just been using the first ideas that come to my head
@Altair's Carnage I hear you I can tell you were fuggn round for this one Im sure if you had been focused you wouldve had a way harder hitting round
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Old 06-08-2014, 02:53 PM   #8
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Altair just solidified his spot as top-tier in my eyes
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Old 06-08-2014, 02:54 PM   #9
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Altair just solidified his spot as top-tier tbh
Dick bars.. something I gotta deal with
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Old 06-08-2014, 04:24 PM   #10
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Ron you're good bro I'd like to see you and Juice go at it. I'm going to finish strong against Loc (since apparently Clarke doesnt want to battle)
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Old 06-08-2014, 04:36 PM   #11
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Yeah I agree with pre for the most part, not a good showing, if your not looking to put in a bit more effort there's no point really. Ron got the win but only because carnage came with one round of plays mum girl and dick jokes.

Again this battle really lacked much personals on the opponent which is kinda the point of battling people otherwise you might as well just post these verses in the cypher threads.

Finally, didn't mention it last battle, but the spacing on rons bars is a bit annoying, at least every 2 bar that goes together should not be spaced out.
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Old 06-08-2014, 04:43 PM   #12
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Ron got it down, I was just trying to have a little fun, I knew he was probably going to just run over me in this battle.
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Old 06-08-2014, 04:47 PM   #13
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Yeah I agree with pre for the most part, not a good showing, if your not looking to put in a bit more effort there's no point really. Ron got the win but only because carnage came with one round of plays mum girl and dick jokes.

Again this battle really lacked much personals on the opponent which is kinda the point of battling people otherwise you might as well just post these verses in the cypher threads.

Finally, didn't mention it last battle, but the spacing on rons bars is a bit annoying, at least every 2 bar that goes together should not be spaced out.
Like I said befo the spacing wasnt really that intentional but yeah Ill try and be betta wit ma format

Still I know yall in denial about me right now I can tell yall aint want to see me bodybag the whole game
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