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Old 08-17-2014, 10:43 PM   #1
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Infrared. vs. Marcristo

@Infrared.

bitches tell u to fuck off w/ ur booty calls, u never did a coochie raw
u've taken so many hikes u could be in the nfl as a center passing QB balls
bittin bars the shit u bout, try steal my lines n a hits out
w/ the blade i'll leave ur hand half-off soon as u try to pull that 5 finger discount
got hands like mayweather to rape this ho....i hate his flow
faggot my fists are bomb yo, i'll give M-80 uppercutts till his face explodes
ur face'll eat my knuckles tryna son mines, fuck ur dumb rhymes
i'll fuckin hit Ma more times than all the seasons of milf hunters combined
ur wifey luvs my dick she calls it the best fam, im bustin on her breast man
shit dawg, that bitch Klingon my balls more dedicated than startrek fans
try to hit me & my crew jumpin u w/ out thinking, leave ur mouth leakin
im godly, u could never touch I like u tryna put a contact in w/ out blinking

@Marcristo

So I'm in the bed with infrared's missus and she's giving head
I'm taking steps, just got the bitches digits, what does she expect
The sheets are wet, her smile only grew, truth she's having fun
Fuck infared, when i finally blew, tooth is covered in cum

Fuck Infrared's ray's, i prefer to use ultraviolet
I'll Lana Del Rey, subject infra, to ultraviolence
Only God Forgives, and I'll hammer him like Gosling's Driver
Casket's lead lined, my dead mind, kill him like a nihilist

Thats no emotion, now the radar can't detect the signal
I'm keeping focused, hide the body, i don't have to face jail
I fucked your girl and left you in the ground, what you expect man,
Like infrared, I wiped your off the fucking colour spectrum.
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Old 08-17-2014, 11:45 PM   #2
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i think you both did great here

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Old 08-18-2014, 12:01 AM   #3
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^^Those were not my words at all
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Old 08-18-2014, 12:03 AM   #4
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i think you both did great here
KBomb editin!!!!

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Old 08-18-2014, 12:07 AM   #5
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I was gonna try to do a breakdown but I kinda didn't want to. So yeah.

Infra had 3 runons. Marcristo's last 4 bars didn't rhyme.

Infra had 2 bars I liked. Marcristo had 1.

I'd give it to Infra. Didn't really like either though.
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Old 08-18-2014, 06:53 AM   #6
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lmao this is utter trash
what was i thinking
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Old 08-18-2014, 12:21 PM   #7
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lmao this is utter trash
what was i thinking
That is exactly why everyone votes for infrared

All jokes aside, you should probably have a longer deadline next time.
Not only will that improve the quality of your verse but you you'll probably get more votes aswell since people arent really willing to read ''utter thrash''(those are your words)

AND now you have to wait a week before you can do another battle.

You should look around the Main Stage and proving grounds, so you can see what most of rmbva is into when it comes to writing style.

If you're good enough you can get yourself a Mai stage one off battle too!

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Old 08-19-2014, 08:21 PM   #8
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fuck takin a week to write a verse
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Old 08-19-2014, 08:35 PM   #9
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fuck takin a week to write a verse
Then fuck taking 1 minute to read your verse
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Old 08-19-2014, 08:53 PM   #10
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Then fuck taking 1 minute to read your verse
then dont no one sayin to, read urs an i wouldnt either
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Old 08-19-2014, 08:59 PM   #11
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No one will if you don't take the time to write something worth reading.

It's not like you are writing every god damn minute of the whole week you dumb fuck

You just take the time and come up with stuff slowly.

You can only battle once a week so there's no point in making it due the next day when you are only allowed once a week...


I try to help you new guys but don't be dumbasses
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Old 08-19-2014, 09:52 PM   #12
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nobody writes for a solid week, i tend to write a 16 pretty quick and then throughout the week if i think of anything better ill switch stuff in and out, but if your not gonna put effort in and just come with shit like this dont bother in the future
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Old 08-21-2014, 06:00 AM   #13
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next time, take more than 30 minutes to write, this was not worth reading
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Old 08-25-2014, 02:33 PM   #14
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i was gonna vote but poll is closed lol
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