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Old 04-06-2015, 02:46 AM   #1
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RBL Season 2 Week 6: Yagerbomb (1-3) vs. JShazo (3-2)

@Yagerbomb

This my apology to y’all, they mad about the antics and the bad flow,
Without Yager on top of the bars, the glass looking half empty im feeling bad yo,
So now here I am, back on the grind ride up quick but clap slow,
Damn tho, soon im stepping to Ah Di Boom, fuck am I doin with shazo,

But onto shazo, all I heard about boi is that he’s the flat out weakest,
But y’all think he beating me, nah I ain’t buying that like blackout sneakers,

Fuck y’all, I motherfucking hate rappin,
It ain’t nothing if I decide to have the tre clappin,
Gun so big, if I see jay walking you’ll see jay flattened,
Boi I can get you bodied for a few bands like a straight jacket,

But shit you shooting, nah you just a fuckin queer,
But if he clapping, who the first pick if J miss (Jameis) I bet he getting bucked in here (buccaneer)


@JShazo

Tried to watch your battle with funeral nick for ammo to come up with lines
No punch, I ended up pissed, that I wasted seven minutes of my fuckin time
Show up to his next battle,tuckin my heater,.waiting in line eager
That chopper'll turn bomb block red as soon as I hit it,minesweeper
Quick slice to his windpipe cause a decrease in oxygen like hypoxia
My fist nice so he can get caught wit a hook,no prez mafia
That.38 extend.. woo y'all should feel sorry for Yager krenz
Shots graze his chin and send em to heaven wit a appearance to make ya savior cringe
Old tool,sin cara move they'll be flippin bomb if I grip n palm
See I'm Goku, all I gotta do is lift two arms to raise ya spirit, bomb
And you've always been low tier, so against me how you think you gon last
We different just think kid, I'm Minkus always find me in the front of my class






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Old 04-08-2015, 11:26 PM   #3
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@JShazo i would say flawless victory but to me, the whole 2nd half (even some of 1st) was more of random bars when u started off super strong making it a battle
not cuz u use personals but had a relevant theme going

first dude to make me actually laugh out loud so far this round (first 2 bars)

@Yagerbomb to me ur writing is most unoriginal (not tryna be mean i like u) seems like no content, u go just for the rhymes

...and the rhymes u go for are all cringeworthy (k i guess im tryna b mean) typical wigger talk lmao...
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all ur end rhymes are words every1 who has been writing for a decent amount of time completely avoids cuz its the go-to when ur new
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Yager took a while to get going. Kind of felt he wasted the first four. Blackout sneakers and the straight jacket lines were nice. Shazo was punching. Opener was funny. Pretty consistent and good throughout. Minesweeper line, Prez Mafia line, spirit bomb lines were stand outs.

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Old 04-10-2015, 07:03 AM   #7
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nice that yager showed up and wrote some actually bars other than yaki yaki. maybe my expectations were low but it thought it was decent.

"if I see jay walking you’ll see jay flattened,
Boi I can get you bodied for a few bands like a straight jacket,"

this was on in particular that was pretty good.

shazo is just guaranteed to throw a punch that is somewhere on the scale of pretty good to great every second line so it's really hard to keep up with. my only negative feedback would be some wordiness (like in the minesweeper bar) but in general some cool concepts. i thought that shazo just out punched in this and got it.
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Yager started off way too slow. Nothing landed for me until the final four (no march madness). Shazo was hitting throughout and had dope punches with minesweeper and prez mafia. Laughed at the minkus bar, boy meets world one of the goats.
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Old 04-10-2015, 04:52 PM   #10
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Yager's blackout sneakers line was one of my favorites of the week so far. Straight jacket line was decent too although the concept is a bit played. First four bars were filler however and the closer was a plain reach. Good to see Yager put some effort in though.

Shazo was relentless.

Quick slice to his windpipe cause a decrease in oxygen like hypoxia
My fist nice so he can get caught wit a hook,no prez mafia


Straight filthy.

The minesweeper and Boy Meets World punches were dope, and the bomb flips were solid too. Good to see Shazo become more versatile and not only rely on name flips.

Fun read but one verse out classed easily.

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I liked Yager's sneaker bar but he'd have to have been punching all the way through this to keep it close. Buccaneer bars were done a bunch by schemers a while ago and if I recall sports punch lines they're probably over done.

Shazo's Stuart Minkus bar highlighted what I wish people would do more of here: reference hilarious shit that actually has stuck with you for years. Sometimes Shazo goes out there for references that I don't know are really that good (just 'cause I don't know the source well enough to comment, I mean), but anyone in my age group has seen Boy Meets World and, even if not getting it immediately, will have a "ohhhhh" moment when they think about it.

vote: Shazo. I liked the rest of the verse too, but that stuck out for me.

So, vote: Shazo.
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Yager was pretty dope though, but it wasn't enough
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Shazo was cookin, minesweeper/prez/minkus
Yeah this was a bag for shazo imo..but

@Yagerbomb i wouldnt buy those blackout sneakers either(niggas doing too much)

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Shazo won this, just more consistent and mostly better than Yager's stuff.

But I have to say, bodied for a few bands like a straight jacket is fucking

Definite bar of the battle, but shazo got this clear for me.
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I know some were digging Yager's punchlines, IMO they weren't really hitting. Shazo's stuff at times I felt could've been formulated a bit better but it was still really good. Minesweeper line had me wishing I did something like that first lol. I liked the DBZ shot out and as everyone else mentioned, Boy Meets World references >>>>
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I liked yagers opener, didn't attack shazos it still nice, next two were meh, blackout sneakers was ligit funny and one of them lines that is so simple i can't believe it's only just been though of. Next few were filler but th straight jacket l punch was ok, closer was decent but the set up was a bit lazy

Thought shazo got off to a slow start, opener was meh, but the minesweaper shit was bonkers. Prez was solid, didn't like the next two, kernz and cringe is a super stretch of a rhyme imo. Bomb flips were decent, closer was solid.

All in all shazos haymakers were too much and he was more consistent. Shouts to yager for not phoning it in though
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I thought Shazo took this clearly. Yager was pretty solid, but didn't have anything that really stood out. The Blackout sneakers line was good though. And I really liked the J miss/Jameis wordplay, but that bar was a mess.

Shazo brought the heavy punches as always. That minesweeper bar was crazy. I really liked the Prez Mafia and spirit bomb lines too. I did think Shazo went back to being a little too wordy in some places again (the hypoxia setup to the Prez Mafia punch, for example), but it was a really good verse overall.
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Yager good to see you trying again but there were really only 3 punches in the verse, and while I liked the first 2 a lot, I think the closer was just ok, and there was too much filler here to compete with Shaz. Good verse though.

Shazo went ham, all of the nameflips were CRAZY, plus the closer, Prez Mafia, and savior cringe bars were good too.

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the straight jacket part of yager's verse was pretty cool. nothing else really hit though and the wording of the closer made it flop for me. shazo took this handily. i really liked the prez mafia bar.
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Yager, try to incorporate a bit more content into the writing, rather than just the rhyming syllables themselves... Not that im great or whatever, but u gotta do more man.

Shazo got it and I wont really break down why as its already been done. Again with the links though, I really dont know why people link stuff in battles (am i being nitpicky?)
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shazo had a lot more punchlines in there but yagers flowed a lot better and sounded more natural, and also had a few nice punches including the blackout sneaker one which was my favorite of the battle

i personally feel like when a verse is punchlinepunchlinepunchline, people tend to just skip through it and mentally check off in their head 'ok, thats a good metaphor, +1 for xxxxx"... i think when that happens it lessens the impact of the heavier punches- i see it like throwing a bunch of shit on the wall and seeing what sticks (no diss, most of the lines were good, and none were really bad), but meaning out of all of them, you know the readers are gonna really enjoy a few, and just ignore the others.

i'd personally prefer well written filler than a punch for the sake of punching... leading up to, or in between a few very deliberate punches that you rely on heavily... this post essentially is my breakdown for the way i judge most battles, not just this one, and also the standpoint from which i write my shit, for those wondering why i don't 'punch' enough

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