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Old 03-23-2015, 03:20 AM   #1
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RBL Season 2 Week 4: WestGotBars (0-3) vs. mirvmirvin (1-1)

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Old 03-23-2015, 04:14 PM   #2
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thesaurus on twitter. he always uses really cool sounding descriptions for really mundane tasks. he's like:

beastmode at the grocery store

crushin' it at the airport

rampaging all weekend *lil pic of him playing online poker*


it's endearing
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Old 03-25-2015, 09:05 PM   #3
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After what Tom did to Dank, you winning against em was out of the discussion/
So you ducked, now you wanna test yo luck wit west? then lets get class in session/
Give me the wrong impression and I'll slide yo head back till you get brain concussion/
Serial killer- yup that's my profession, you goin stay wit the fire like human combustion/
You bustin? nah, you and Cole, both ya'll some bitches, yeah I said that so what?/
I mean even if you wanted to strap for real both you bitches still wouldn't show up/
See mirv me and you two different mirrors, you grew up watching family feud/
But me? everyday was a family feud, 2 tray's on me, I'm just tryin serve me food/
The streets I've been through, what chu know about pullin a gun for a pair of shoe/
When shit got real the only life savin device I had was to let these pair shoot(Parachute)/
You aint know nothin, so listen If you got any goodz on you, you best watch yo back Bambi/
Cuz when I surf thru yo block all goin see is dots when I reach out that Camry/

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Old 03-27-2015, 12:16 PM   #4
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Old 03-27-2015, 02:19 PM   #5
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Vote is for West. He had better/more bars, better structure...well, maybe not better, but definitely more structure...

Wasn't crazy bar heavy but a consistently good verse.
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Old 03-27-2015, 02:31 PM   #6
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@WestGotBars verse flowed pretty well, i liked it. ending the 2nd bar on 'session' was maybe not the best call imo, didnt really fit in with the other 3 bars (even though i see you did rhyme with it in between the bars - internal rhyme schemes are nice, but i feel the closers should rhyme with other closers)

A few bits could be tightened, the pair shoot/parachute could be changed to pair'll shoot/parachute and would instantly work better (it may have been done before, idk)

No really crazy moments but it was nice throughout and you were talking that shit, good work!
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