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Old 04-21-2014, 04:43 PM   #1
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*The Come Up II Aftermath* SuckaFreeCashier vs Psycho Mantis

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Heís weak trash. If this b passed I wouldn't pour out water from a free flask
You think you can see that? Nah, Iíll poke out both your eyes like a ski mask
See, heís got that nickel and dime flow full of gimmicks and my quotes
Got blood running down the drain when I cut to the middle of Psycho
You really are a psycho, Buffalo Bill, treating all your bitches like cattle
Gettin off, handing them the computer, like Ďit presses play on the battleí
You want to play the part, then a psychiatric ward is where Iíll choke and leave him
Ironic youíre the mantis but Iím the one dropping bodies like moulting season
First Bells, now Dank, Psychoís been taking Lís from some lame ass queers
Homie if you wanted that to change then you came to the wrong cashier
Psycho has made the boards his home, but just realize that whatever you try to say
Itís not about the name beside the face, but rather the face behind the name
Either that mask was a poorly designed game or you were trying to hide your shame
Of the person who lives in the hollowed out shell where you feel confined to stay
Iíll address the real reason iím here now that the money has been made
Itís time for my reign/rain to begin, thatíll be the end of sonnydaze/sunny days

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Old 04-21-2014, 04:54 PM   #2
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Mantis has a real good flow and his wordplay is on point aswell, he got my vote
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Old 04-21-2014, 04:57 PM   #3
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sucks mantis aint show, but SFC had some nice shit here.

"Ironic you’re the mantis but I’m the one dropping bodies like moulting season

good shit, def one of the better verses I've read from dude
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Old 04-21-2014, 05:06 PM   #4
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Lame ass queer?????

Auto L psycho with the body






On the real though this was dope ill do you a breakdown later on, that psycho blood down the drain shit...someone had a real similar line at vendetta can't remember who but I though it was hot when I heard it last night an this was just as good



Lame ass queer though?? Sfc askin for death like cage at his dealers
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Old 04-21-2014, 05:21 PM   #5
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Lame ass queer though?? Sfc askin for death like cage at his dealers
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But at least KOTD balances its unscrupulousness with some equitable intentions, like providing a few working-class men with a lawful income, whereas in this era more and more channels and media outlets are nothing but predatory tabloidesque trouble-makers.
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Old 04-21-2014, 06:05 PM   #6
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yeah psycho brought it. but ima have to give it to sfc. it was close tho. if psycho brought more gifs he could of maybe edged it.
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Old 04-21-2014, 07:48 PM   #7
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But at least KOTD balances its unscrupulousness with some equitable intentions, like providing a few working-class men with a lawful income, whereas in this era more and more channels and media outlets are nothing but predatory tabloidesque trouble-makers.
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Old 04-21-2014, 07:52 PM   #8
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Old 04-21-2014, 08:20 PM   #9
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your rhymes were tight but i think you need way more punchlines. if you'd had an opponent with three hard hitting bars you'd have taken the L.
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Old 04-21-2014, 08:33 PM   #10
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your rhymes were tight but i think you need way more punchlines. if you'd had an opponent with three hard hitting bars you'd have taken the L.
this. felt like it was bout rhymin and not dissing. i mean i fucking hate the text battle analysis shit about "you had no punches and the other dude had some"... i think theres a lotta shit to go by on a battle. overall stylin, clowning, humor, wordplay on a nother level - so much shit other than just a punch.

but just to go by the basic punchline count method niggas do when judging text battles... that's about it. but i feel like the judging here is complete shit and really nobody should go bout changin their styles to get a more text battle-esque style... coz that shits bs lol
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Old 04-21-2014, 08:49 PM   #11
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I appreciated the criticism guys. Normally I try and work out a nice flow and rhyming pattern and pack 2 or 3 haymakers but I'll definitely work on incorporating more into my next verse.
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Old 04-21-2014, 08:57 PM   #12
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That's was a real dope verse my nigga..
didn't think the closer was as strong as the rest of the verse tho.
mantis would have a hard time getting the w.

Good shit homie.
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Old 04-21-2014, 09:02 PM   #13
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Old 04-21-2014, 09:38 PM   #14
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@SuckaFreeCashier
Heís weak trash. If this b passed I wouldn't pour out water from a free flask
You think you can see that? Nah, Iíll poke out both your eyes like a ski mask
solid stuff, maybe not the best opener though, id go mroe direct with an opener but a good couple bars non the less
See, heís got that nickel and dime flow full of gimmicks and my quotes
Got blood running down the drain when I cut to the middle of Psycho
dope, punch is on point an i really liked that fulla gimmicks and my quotes
You really are a psycho, Buffalo Bill, treating all your bitches like cattle
Gettin off, handing them the computer, like Ďit presses play on the battleí
wasnt feeling this
You want to play the part, then a psychiatric ward is where Iíll choke and leave him
Ironic youíre the mantis but Iím the one dropping bodies like moulting season

First Bells, now Dank, Psychoís been taking Lís from some lame ass queers
Homie if you wanted that to change then you came to the wrong cashier
solid....you gonna pay for it down the line though
Psycho has made the boards his home, but just realize that whatever you try to say
Itís not about the name beside the face, but rather the face behind the name
Either that mask was a poorly designed game or you were trying to hide your shame
Of the person who lives in the hollowed out shell where you feel confined to stay
real good angle, funny as well that he has no showed like he really does have somethign to hide (getting bodied by me will do that too a man....remember that sucka )
Iíll address the real reason iím here now that the money has been made
Itís time for my reign/rain to begin, thatíll be the end of sonnydaze/sunny days
i like the cockyness off this closer ( i feel like youve got a top 3 verse here...but if you dont end up with sonny this could bite you in the ass), the set up was pretty forced too, id say thats a part of your game you could work on linking set ups to punches. for the most part in this the lines were good as stand alones so it didnt matter too much that they didnt link to the punch, but thats defo something you could work on to rasie your game
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Old 04-24-2014, 10:28 PM   #15
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Old 04-25-2014, 06:45 PM   #16
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Its a shame Mantis couldn't have come through on this one. He might have been one of the 3 spots. Pretty solid verse by SFC though Mantis might have taken it if he stayed consistent with some good material. Dead @ callin bells and dank lame ass queers. Also that mask/hide your shame scheme was nice.

Still lookin forward to King John vs SFC tho, We In Here II is gunna be bodybag all around
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