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Battle We In Here III Presents: WallaceBread vs. JShazo


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Old 01-30-2015, 01:35 AM   #1
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We In Here III Presents: WallaceBread vs. JShazo

@WallaceBread

He's got a name flip addiction, this is J's obsession
Bet he got more "bread" lines than the Great Depression
I've seen Shazo rap, it was a messy display
You're just upsetting to hear, like "Is Pepsi okay?"
Don't test me today, I prepared intensely and I swear I'm deadly
I will stomp J out, this a D.A.R.E. assembly

Your Cartoon Network bars ain't as filthy as this
I play the villainous role like Willem Dafoe, you should really just quit
I'm professor now, so take a syllabus, kids
I'll still be killin' this shit until senility hits

He let one ring? Got the vest that this weasel won't break through
This ain't Tolkien, J, so the eagle won't save you
J thinks he's the tightest, but this kid will not beat me
I got him in hot water, so his lid comes off easy
I'll kill Shazo and his crew, you'll never see these carcasses
This embarrassment get buried quick like E.T. cartridges

@JShazo

Plot on me, J generous with that shotty so homie you can recieve these bucks
Few shots to his core'll leave pieces of Bread scattered on the ground like feeding ducks
Show em what these arms for,got goons that'll run up on Wall that's parkour
Head shot'll make his top pour when we spray cans on Wall like marking our turf
40 with that beam folk,talking shit'll just get your whole team smoked
That heat I got will make Bread rise and no one in the kitchen fixin yeast rolls
Attack the obvious,all I do is gun bars and nameflips its known so that angle wont phase me
J the truth, that K'll shoot and leave clips all on Wall street like Martin Scorsese
Back to back with the bars, i'ma make em regret agreeing to this "return of the legends" shit
So I'm the under dog? I'm not sweating it, cause dude wont that nice even when he was relevant
This battle a extra off Ren and Stimpy you peep this direction this will go fam
Thinking you fucking wit me, please these punches'll put a body on Bread like powdered toastman
This not a situation you can coast fam, hollows in that .357 chrome with the pearl hand
Try n run and i"ll have these bullets sticking to Wall like nervous kids at a boy girl dance
But I dont always gotta buck and pop,gotta barong that'll make ya jugular drop
Legend my ass...I just ran through Wall easily, bitch "I'm the juggernaut
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Old 01-30-2015, 03:02 AM   #2
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thanks for voting so far, we need some votes on this one too!
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but con go line made a don demarco come out my speakers for no reason
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Old 01-30-2015, 03:07 AM   #3
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i was promised a willy battle.. this is the second time u guys book this guy and he no-shows. i want my monay back

if ur gonna be a proffesional text league, get ur shit together
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Old 01-30-2015, 03:11 AM   #4
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Wallace flow was straight bonkers. Read perfectly imo. Villainous role like william dafoe, DARE assembly, great depression were all dope. I really liked shazos parkour, wall street/martin scorsese, boy and girl dance and the closing two.

Real close battle. I've got wallace with the better flow / structure and shazo with the slightly harder hitting punches. Edging to wallace
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Old 01-30-2015, 03:31 AM   #5
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Old 01-30-2015, 03:33 AM   #6
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Ahh good shit @WallaceBread

You too man, this is a good one
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Old 01-30-2015, 03:59 AM   #7
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i was promised a willy battle.. this is the second time u guys book this guy and he no-shows. i want my monay back

if ur gonna be a proffesional text league, get ur shit together
willy isn't gonna no show I don't think. he's probably just lagging like me

im writing right now tho, boss @KBomb
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Old 01-30-2015, 04:26 AM   #8
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Man this was real good....when I get to a pc I wanna do the vintage 3 bar...

The structure was really clean for both, real easy to flow and get through.... that great depression bar was filthy

Shazo crazy azz gun bars as always ..nice flow too... will be back

Was worried about you for a min Wallace glad to see u back in top form
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Old 01-30-2015, 04:43 AM   #9
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willy isn't gonna no show I don't think. he's probably just lagging like me

im writing right now tho, boss @KBomb
i was wrong

he already showed
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Old 01-30-2015, 04:44 AM   #10
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Old 01-30-2015, 07:25 AM   #11
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Dammm Wallace was insane to me. I think J is dope but everything wally said was refreshing and new to me not to mention dope AF , very easy to read. Good shit fellas
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Old 01-30-2015, 01:49 PM   #12
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Old 01-30-2015, 10:39 PM   #13
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Edging to my dude WB in a really close battle. Shazo had some dope name flips, but Wallace kind of negated that approach with his opening bars, which were both strategically great and strong on their own merits. The Pepsi line was really amusing to me; though I thought the middle lagged a bit, he brought it back hard in the last bars (I'm a sucker for Tolkein references, and that shit had me screwfacing). Shazo had that Wall Street line and the feeding ducks hit for me as well, was just a little less impactful given the pre-emptive approach Bread took.
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wallace with the clean polish
good shit though J
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Old 01-31-2015, 03:10 PM   #15
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Real neck and neck battle. I think this was Wallace's best performance yet. He came with an extremely clean and well structured verse where the only slight dry spot was his middle 4 bars.

Shazo cemented his spot as one of the top name flippers- if not the best on the site- and brought that raw shit from start to finish. I was feeling the first 8 bars a bit more than the last 8, but it was still a very good verse.

Had to barely edge it to Wallace for just being a tad more consistent, but this was the most competitive battle of the event for me and a great look for both of you.
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Old 01-31-2015, 10:25 PM   #16
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Old 02-01-2015, 05:46 AM   #17
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Wallace 3/4th of his verse I didn't get so I'm a just call it trash

shazo bread line was crazy and toastman line made me laugh

Very lack luster from both



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I got shazo taking, his flow and his punches,were too much for Wallace in the end.
I didn't see anything from either,that was super cold cold, but a couple were cold enough.
And them bitches, came from jshazo.
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jesus christ this battle was crazy, wallaces opener was dope, the is pepsi ok line made me laugh, dare assembly was fuckin fire, next 4 had a sick flow to it, final punch could have been harder but still villainous role like willam defoe >>>> netx 4 were all ok, and then the closer was again bonkers. flow through out on point, real good shit

j started off a little weak for me, feeding ducks just wasnt doing it for me, that parkour line was sick as fuck though, shame the line that followed it didnt hit harder and also just didnt rhyme for me. yeast rolls seems like a weird way of saying bread, kinda forced. clips on wall street was dope, powdered toast man was fire and i liked the boy and girl dance bar too. the closer again didnt rhyme too well for me and the bar didnt hit as hard as the other wall flips.


really good stuff from both, hard to chose, shazos hardest bars probably hit harder, but wallace was more consist ant and i had the problem of a couple of shazos lines not rhyming imo so by the slightest margin im voting wallace
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Old 02-02-2015, 03:51 PM   #20
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This is a crazy battle. I've had to read it so many times just to come up with a winner. It's one of those where, after reading each verse, I feel like that person won, but then change my mind when I read the other person's again. It was that close.

Wallace came out swinging. Those first six bars were fire. All the punches were landing. The next four didn't really measure up for me though. The writing was crisp and it read well, but didn't have a whole lot of impact. The last six were dope though, but still not quite on the level of the opening six. I was definitely feeling the Tolkien bar. I was gonna write something similar once, but couldn't come up with a good way to word it. That was the highlight of the last six bars since I thought the last two punches were cool, but nothing too crazy.

Shazo came with a lot of name flips as Wallace was smart to predict, but it doesn't really take anything away from their impact when the punches are as heavy as most of the ones in this verse. I thought Shazo started off a little slow though. The feeding ducks bar was cool, but nothing crazy. That parkour line was hard, but the following line didnít rhyme, so it threw the whole thing off. The verse really picked up after that though. The next four were all solid and the last six were fire. That Powdered Toast Man punch had me going going crazy. Ridiculous. The ďbullets sticking to Wall like nervous kids at a boy girl danceĒ bar was wild too. And the closer was dope.

So, this was really a tossup to me, but Iíve gotta pick a winner, soÖ.














Iím going with Shazo. His best punches were just too good. Wallace was going off too though. This is an RMBVA classic. No one really loses.
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