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Old 05-09-2016, 11:33 PM   #1
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Drake - U Wit Me? (Bar for Bar Breakdown)

I did a Bar for Bar Breakdown of Drake's U Wit Me? From Views.
I broke the track down entirely from a technical perspective. I take a look at his flow, structure, rhyme schemes, etc.
I wanted to show aspiring artists that this shit isn't hard to do! I can't believe people think that this is the pinnacle of rap writing.
If I missed the mark on any of the bars, please let me know. I'm down to discuss our interpretations of the song.
I plan on doing more technical artists down the road. Let me know what you think.
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Old 05-10-2016, 08:22 AM   #2
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Just gonna be honest, I skipped through to get an idea of how you were approaching the concept and I'm interested... I just don't give a fuck about Drake so it makes the actual video itself uninteresting to me.

I'd be really interested in seeing more of this (checked your channel for more, it seems this is your first). Do you have any more artists / tracks in mind for future videos?

Vid quality is on point, too, as a side note.
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Just gonna be honest, I skipped through to get an idea of how you were approaching the concept and I'm interested... I just don't give a fuck about Drake so it makes the actual video itself uninteresting to me.

I'd be really interested in seeing more of this (checked your channel for more, it seems this is your first). Do you have any more artists / tracks in mind for future videos?

Vid quality is on point, too, as a side note.
Thanks for checking it out. (or checking out parts of it.)
I honestly used Drake's song to get some views and to show newer artists that they shouldn't be intimidated by songs like this. It's not a good song in my opinion.
I have a lot more planned. Some coming breakdowns include, Royce, Chance the rapper, lupe, etc. Then I have an Iron Solomon vs Diz breakdown coming. I'll be doing some rap tips as well. Showing some of the Loaded Lux/QP word play techniques.
Do you have any suggestions for breakdowns or rap tips?
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