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Old 05-21-2019, 04:56 PM   #1
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Aftershock vs Jayohh| Beastmode Battles

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EnNqC...dhmAqtUOlsujiU

I haven't done one of these in two years, I thought it came out pretty well.

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Old 05-21-2019, 07:04 PM   #2
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Take the s out of the http buddy, nice to see your still battling
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Old 05-21-2019, 07:06 PM   #3
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Take the s out of the http buddy, nice to see your still battling
Done, not sure it made any difference, did it?

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Old 05-21-2019, 07:11 PM   #4
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watched this a couple days ago pretty good shit
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Old 05-22-2019, 09:17 AM   #5
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Old 05-23-2019, 09:07 AM   #6
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just got round to watching, that was pretty brutal shocks, murda
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Old 05-23-2019, 01:31 PM   #7
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Aye, many thanks ya'll - I was a bit nervous going into this as again, I haven't done one of these in a few years and tried to change some shit up. Glad ya'll are rocking with it.
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replace the 90% filler placeholder lines with something of substance. your rhyming ability is not sharp enough to carry the same scheme for as long as you try and you wind up saying nothing for ultra long stretches. you have a clean delivery and perform well, u just don't say shit. take the first concept on the scheme that kickstarted your 12+ bar borefest and scratch the rest if the lines are not strong enough to stand on their own.

ur notably trash cuz ur flowin is wack and ur homies will gas cuz ur known as a fag and ull hope to get laughs blah blah

literal generic filler that says nothing. i refuse to believe u can't write something better than that.

the way you interchange almost but not quite multis sounds like u sat ur phone next to aspire freestyling and hit voice to text

hey i said pillage a village for fun like atilla the hun BITD we can be bros

fill me with slugs
attila the hun
gripping the pump
lifting his cup

none of those rhyme at all bruh

anyway holla
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Old 05-25-2019, 01:36 AM   #9
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really upset at the lack of junk box lunch box tbh
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Old 05-25-2019, 01:59 AM   #10
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try and incorporate compound words into the schemes and not uniquely generic stuff like "noticeably trash" or "folks will be gassed" that are all blah. the former lends itself to connecting with the listener as they're recognizable words/phrases their brain insta-clicks on. and perhaps more importantly, depending on what u want out of ur battle verses, they make it 10x easier to create a solid punch.

example a:

smash his face, y'all
we actually may brawl
slang with gay drawl
blastin paint balls

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paddy's day crawl
masquerade ball
cassius clay brawl
magic 8 ball

the last 4 are much better and u can immediately envision punches to them imo, its worth cutting out filler multis and spending time trying to find solid ones before u develop the scheme, then u can see the overall skeleton ahead of time of the structural possibilities. and adding in lil extra shit makes it cuter like half-multis for lil back to back internals

when police need a tip he's the rat that they call
cuz hell get shook and answer questions like a magic 8 ball
my jabs hit em at zabs rhythm, i cassius clay brawl
pour it on em like a baptism and this a bath with st paul
throw shots n transition like a paddys day crawl
blacken half his face when hands stick em like a mask at a masquerade ball

nothin amazing but enough substance and technical writing to be ok. even tho i added the gay 8 ball shit in for the crowd and got crickets and found out charron said somethin like that but w/e the points remain
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Kinda agreeing with irvsgkeg here. Shock doing good, but a lot of the multis are filler, especially in the first.

Liked Shock's second, nice to see him experimenting with a bit more comedy. Jayohh had some good Marvel bars though. Probably Shock's best round.

Haha! Not sure that going to Japan for a couple of years is really something to brag about. That entire thing missed for me. Jayohh really didn't have much either. Kinda edging Jayohh on that one.
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Old 05-29-2019, 10:45 AM   #12
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how u kinda agree wit that

big shocks i give u da creme da la creme advice and u snub me it hurts my heart.

emancee u know junk box dont u
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oh hell yeah i just guessed itd be DS fudg eya
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oh hell yeah i just guessed itd be DS fudg eya
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Yep, a few times.
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I just watched that Junk vs Aftershock battle after seeing that Daily Spice video on this thread. Who was Junk?

The battle seemed pretty lopsided in favor of Aftershock while Junk was being another Canadian rapper doing his thing in the Aspire style of terrible forced rhymes, animated hand gestures and facial expressions, and over the top racism and rape fantasies - and all the comments on the battle are about how he got robbed.

The Jayyoo battle was pretty lopsided for Shock, too.
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Aftershock you should PayPal me twenty bucks for teaching you how to write properly
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Here is one of your verses

You're thinking you dope off the top, homie you're not, that's why none of your shit gets quoted a lot, before you get a throne at the top, I'd rather suck both of our cocks, I'm the dopest from Oakland to Prague, that's why I be flowing a lot, fuck your entourage, I do e, yeah I'll be rolling a lot, but straight up, Sloan wasn't hot
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Lmao aftershokz reaction to that dude fucking up junk box is priceless. LOL just a very mild not of his head hella nonchalant and then continues. The shit before that is like the most classic example of his garbage filler
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whoa whoa whoa, hey now, Sloan was bangin'
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That was you fammo

What was the one chick after her that was hella crazy and looks like Smeagol I hella a big head

But for real, take my advice, I bared my soul to share the secrets
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That was you fammo

What was the one chick after her that was hella crazy and looks like Smeagol I hella a big head

But for real, take my advice, I bared my soul to share the secrets
oh the mousey looking chick? yeah she was no bueno
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LOL ya the ratatouille psycho but yo let's keep it a buck as the kids say you'd get in that junk box lunch box til ya tongue pops Amirite
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They've been dating for like 12 minutes and she's like I'm Eric what's up with this Vince guy who's hitting you up all the time you need to get rid of them I'm your new mousy looking Broad
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That show is so fun for the first like two seasons when it was them just banging out hot ass chicks and then I got horrible real fast LOL Vince hey man I'm just a broke ass kid from Queens Boulevard, you can take away all this and I don't give a hot damn as long as I got my boys with me, Avenue is banging out Sasha Grey, LOL she's a dirty girl am I right fellas
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V buck shots I don't care if you're dang not strapped you getting bang stang's trust Bluffton the parking lot to your tongue pops
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idk, I still dug it up until the second last season or so....the movie was largely trash.
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It fell off before the second to last season but yeah the movie was unbearable. Dexter fell off after like the third season or some shit. After Trinity.
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It fell off before the second to last season but yeah the movie was unbearable. Dexter fell off after like the third season or some shit. After Trinity.
Yeah you mean the Fourth season which was one of the greatest seasons of anything ever. The third season is widely seen as one of its weaker ones.
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Yeah whenever. it went bad after that. Qas 3rd Julia stiles?
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Yeah whenever. it went bad after that. Qas 3rd Julia stiles?
I think that was five which actually wasnt such a terrible series. Three was the one where a weird Latin dude became his copycat killer.
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Onnhel bahhteesta? Dexta mwahgen ah you da ice truck killa

Ya I liked Julia Stiles season
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