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Old 05-17-2014, 04:17 PM   #1
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*Main Stage One Off* Riffic vs Throwback Mike

If this battle was 4 months ago, the collective response would've been "who vs who?" such is the meteoric rise of both competitors. Riffic, after a semi-final run in Flossed Out II, recently had a victory over the one of the best spitters on the board in SonnyDaze. He's known for his clever punches, jokes, and concise but precise points on the board; he's not only a top tier battler, but he's one of the funniest members of the board.

His opponent, Throwback Mike, despite having a very thoughtful style, managed to make it to the finals of Time Crisis. His word play is unmatched by any other on this board, and is constantly improving. The rise in his performances on here is unmatched by almost anyone outside of Dank Schrader, and this is another verse where he delivers.

Battle of the soon to be University graduates, but who's graduatin' from the school of hard knocks (preparing for my bad bars battle)?

Let's fuckin' go.


@riffic
Took an L to thatguy; don’t think I’ve lost my focus or concentration
Fuck a themed battle, today’s theme will be total domination

All that forced wordplay you love? Something Yogi is incapable of—UN-BEAR-ABLE
Your whole style is like Big T in a tight shirt—it SEAMS TEAR-ABLE
Surprised you let your verses see the Lyt of Day; probably should’ve left the quill at home
‘Cause even when you chance upon a good bar, this kid’s still a clone of Chilla Jones

Plus I heard this clown rat, but I got a mouse trap and a house cat
So I won’t be missin’ my high notes when I’m layin’ him down flat
‘Cause my whole crowd clap, and it ain’t at a screen; might
Travel your block, masked up like Halloween night
Lookin’ for trouble, if my clique gets this bitch in a street fight
They’ll all be Jay Gatsby—raisin’ arms once I give ‘em the green light

No gats? We can scrap; your punch won’t phase me, even if it lands
You ain’t the monster from Pan’s Labrynth, you can’t see me with the hands

Word to Ricky—I’m a broad slayer, heartbreaker like Don Draper; think your broad’s safe?
Bring her along, player; I’ll put that girl on her back like a star gazer
Try lookin’ to the sky for help, Orion’s Belt when these three dots get poppin’
Comin’ to this battle with that nerd shit—I bet you beat off to Hopsin
You’d take Jack and Jill over Mass Appeal and think I’m A Little Teapot is knockin’
While the way my verse gets the real heads hyped you’d think that Detox was droppin’

Please stop this nonsense; there’s a cloud of shame that surrounds this lame normally
I’m here to hand Mike an L so you can pronounce his name formally
Totally bankrupt morally; ungodly the type of shit I do through these verses
Fam’ll be at your funeral service like “What the fuck did he do to deserve this?


@Throwback Mike
They say I’m one dimensional… Well, let’s make it unusual, I hope it’s suitable
I’ll bring work to this square—that’s a cubicle
Wanna “write raps about screennames”? It’s a mistake when you choose me, dude
Watch Mike murder his (Mic Murderaz) wack name like Poopie Doo

For runnin’ his mouth I had to smack him ‘round
I stole on his neck without a cap and gown
If I bring gats around, clap him down, it could get hectic
I’ll hit riff’ legs if I need (kneed) the hammer, it’s just reflexive
But he ain’t got the nerve to go and get weapons
When I move, lead is around (letters around) like I’m dyslexic

He reps that Boston flag? Bet he sounds like the family from the Hopper ads
I’m a copy cat? If I picked anyone’s brain, it sent ‘em where Trotsky at
Do him Gaddaffi bad, the iron cross his chest like a Nazi badge
Body bag! The shotty blast, rock his abs—Pilates class

I’m camped out by his crib, he'll get hit with the Sauer
The can’a (canna) pop up in his yard like a perennial flower
Get riffic devoured. A million buck shots, watch his skull remove the casings
They keep poppin’ in his head like he’s got problems ruminating

Riffic wanna ball wicked (wicket), but it’s cricket(s) when a killer’s on his lawn
I let it sing (Singh) and go ham (Hamm) with this “Million Dollar Arm”

Be real… You love my style. If you say it’s overdone, I’ve just cooked ‘em too long
He’ll change it up after this verse like a hook on a song
It’ll be music to my ears if you say I’m wack, your top ten list broke your cover
I’ve got a synesthete’s (pronounced: sin-us-teet) tendencies, riff showed his colors

*Illmac voice* You love my shit!
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Old 05-17-2014, 04:43 PM   #2
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Old 05-17-2014, 04:43 PM   #3
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Jesus this was pure heat, crazy it's a one off lol

@riffic did you mean to shout out Ricky with the broad slayer line ?? Lol
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Jesus this was pure heat, crazy it's a one off lol

@riffic did you mean to shout out Ricky with the broad slayer line ?? Lol
the pussy aficionado? hell yes I did!
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That's what I half assumed lol good shit bro
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Old 05-17-2014, 05:48 PM   #7
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Jon Hamm references in both verses. You both win.
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Old 05-17-2014, 06:15 PM   #9
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Old 05-17-2014, 06:22 PM   #10
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Good battle fellas... I think riffic edged this won..
I felt like he had stronger punches then Mike.
Also fell as if he punched more than mike.

Mike verse was dope af..but i dont think he had enough to take the w.
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Plus I heard this clown rat, but I got a mouse trap and a house cat
So I won’t be missin’ my high notes when I’m layin’ him down flat
‘Cause my whole crowd clap, and it ain’t at a screen; might
Travel your block, masked up like Halloween night
Lookin’ for trouble, if my clique gets this bitch in a street fight
They’ll all be Jay Gatsby—raisin’ arms once I give ‘em the green light
yeeeeeeeeeeesh
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holy fuck!!! both these cats went in. i still got that scrunchface irl from riffic's verse all around

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Do him Gaddaffi bad, the iron cross his chest like a Nazi badge
Body bag! The shotty blast, rock his abs—Pilates class

I’m camped out by his crib, he'll get hit with the Sauer
The can’a (canna) pop up in his yard like a perennial flower
wow these types of rhymes/bars are usually played out but mike made it work REALLY well here somehow

tbh i think riffic won this one but throwback mike defly wasnt playin around either
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Oh snap, I didn't even know this was happening, I'm at work for the next few hours but ill give it a good read or several once I'm home.

In the mean time if you know anything about wrestling go check my battle with smoke in the pg's
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Took an L to thatguy; don’t think I’ve lost my focus or concentration
Fuck a themed battle, today’s theme will be total domination
ok let's go

All that forced wordplay you love? Something Yogi is incapable of—UN-BEAR-ABLE
Your whole style is like Big T in a tight shirt—it SEAMS TEAR-ABLE
Surprised you let your verses see the Lyt of Day; probably should’ve left the quill at home
‘Cause even when you chance upon a good bar, this kid’s still a clone of Chilla Jones
ok I can't tell if this was just bad bars as a joke or an impersonation of mike's style. If it's the latter then that's not really what mike does - he's more like caeser/sees her every 3rd word - so the chilla line was on point, but i wasnt really feelin the first 3

Plus I heard this clown rat, but I got a mouse trap and a house cat
So I won’t be missin’ my high notes when I’m layin’ him down flat
‘Cause my whole crowd clap, and it ain’t at a screen; might
Travel your block, masked up like Halloween night
Lookin’ for trouble, if my clique gets this bitch in a street fight
They’ll all be Jay Gatsby—raisin’ arms once I give ‘em the green light
this type of flow gonna get me every time but unfortunately the reference in the punch is lost on me. I read the book a few years ago but I never watched the recent movie and I can't remember the context of the green light thing you are talkin about

No gats? We can scrap; your punch won’t phase me, even if it lands
You ain’t the monster from Pan’s Labrynth, you can’t see me with the hands
I've 100% heard this but fuck if I can remember where..

ok so for real I just spent like 30 minutes trying to find it with no luck. my google search tells me that at one time it might have been in @sleeping dogs sig at one point. The line is:

"I'm Frank Booth crossed with Frank Dux I mask up then Van Damme your shit. You couldn't see me with the hands even in Pan's Labyrinth"

someone help me out here!

Also found this otbva thread but this dude seems to think he came up with it so i dunno. btw this is no knock against riffic it's just really buggin me that I cant remember who said it.


Word to Ricky—I’m a broad slayer, heartbreaker like Don Draper; think your broad’s safe?
Bring her along, player; I’ll put that girl on her back like a star gazer
mm

Try lookin’ to the sky for help, Orion’s Belt when these three dots get poppin’
Comin’ to this battle with that nerd shit—I bet you beat off to Hopsin
You’d take Jack and Jill over Mass Appeal and think I’m A Little Teapot is knockin’
While the way my verse gets the real heads hyped you’d think that Detox was droppin’
omg - dude you just have to do this in every set of 4 and youd never lose my vote. flow nasty

Please stop this nonsense; there’s a cloud of shame that surrounds this lame normally
I’m here to hand Mike an L so you can pronounce his name formally
Totally bankrupt morally; ungodly the type of shit I do through these verses
Fam’ll be at your funeral service like “What the fuck did he do to deserve this?
damn

@Throwback Mike
They say I’m one dimensional… Well, let’s make it unusual, I hope it’s suitable
I’ll bring work to this square—that’s a cubicle
Wanna “write raps about screennames”? It’s a mistake when you choose me, dude
Watch Mike murder his (Mic Murderaz) wack name like Poopie Doo

didn't get the punchline - googled - found this gem of a battle. im only through one round so far such a bodybag


For runnin’ his mouth I had to smack him ‘round
I stole on his neck without a cap and gown
If I bring gats around, clap him down, it could get hectic
I’ll hit riff’ legs if I need (kneed) the hammer, it’s just reflexive
But he ain’t got the nerve to go and get weapons
When I move, lead is around (letters around) like I’m dyslexic
wooow the dyslexic shit cold as fuck

He reps that Boston flag? Bet he sounds like the family from the Hopper ads
I’m a copy cat? If I picked anyone’s brain, it sent ‘em where Trotsky at
Do him Gaddaffi bad, the iron cross his chest like a Nazi badge
Body bag! The shotty blast, rock his abs—Pilates class
mike snappin here!!

I’m camped out by his crib, he'll get hit with the Sauer
The can’a (canna) pop up in his yard like a perennial flower
ah not feelin this one too much
Get riffic devoured. A million buck shots, watch his skull remove the casings
They keep poppin’ in his head like he’s got problems ruminating
mmm

Riffic wanna ball wicked (wicket), but it’s cricket(s) when a killer’s on his lawn
I let it sing (Singh) and go ham (Hamm) with this “Million Dollar Arm”
demarco

Be real… You love my style. If you say it’s overdone, I’ve just cooked ‘em too long wow
He’ll change it up after this verse like a hook on a song
It’ll be music to my ears if you say I’m wack, your top ten list broke your cover
I’ve got a synesthete’s (pronounced: sin-us-teet) tendencies, riff showed his colors

yikes

yo this shit was crazy - cosign reading this one! riffic had that flow on point like a fountain pen but throwback miike's haymakers were making me spit coolaid on my keyboard so I gotta give it to him. think you got the balance right on this one with the amount of word play - only a couple instances of onverstretching but not much.
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Took an L to thatguy; don’t think I’ve lost my focus or concentration
Fuck a themed battle, today’s theme will be total domination
ok let's go

All that forced wordplay you love? Something Yogi is incapable of—UN-BEAR-ABLE
Your whole style is like Big T in a tight shirt—it SEAMS TEAR-ABLE
Surprised you let your verses see the Lyt of Day; probably should’ve left the quill at home
‘Cause even when you chance upon a good bar, this kid’s still a clone of Chilla Jones
ok I can't tell if this was just bad bars as a joke or an impersonation of mike's style. If it's the latter then that's not really what mike does - he's more like caeser/sees her every 3rd word - so the chilla line was on point, but i wasnt really feelin the first 3

Plus I heard this clown rat, but I got a mouse trap and a house cat
So I won’t be missin’ my high notes when I’m layin’ him down flat
‘Cause my whole crowd clap, and it ain’t at a screen; might
Travel your block, masked up like Halloween night
Lookin’ for trouble, if my clique gets this bitch in a street fight
They’ll all be Jay Gatsby—raisin’ arms once I give ‘em the green light
this type of flow gonna get me every time but unfortunately the reference in the punch is lost on me. I read the book a few years ago but I never watched the recent movie and I can't remember the context of the green light thing you are talkin about

No gats? We can scrap; your punch won’t phase me, even if it lands
You ain’t the monster from Pan’s Labrynth, you can’t see me with the hands
I've 100% heard this but fuck if I can remember where..

ok so for real I just spent like 30 minutes trying to find it with no luck. my google search tells me that at one time it might have been in @sleeping dogs sig at one point. The line is:

"I'm Frank Booth crossed with Frank Dux I mask up then Van Damme your shit. You couldn't see me with the hands even in Pan's Labyrinth"

someone help me out here!

Also found this otbva thread but this dude seems to think he came up with it so i dunno. btw this is no knock against riffic it's just really buggin me that I cant remember who said it.


Word to Ricky—I’m a broad slayer, heartbreaker like Don Draper; think your broad’s safe?
Bring her along, player; I’ll put that girl on her back like a star gazer
mm

Try lookin’ to the sky for help, Orion’s Belt when these three dots get poppin’
Comin’ to this battle with that nerd shit—I bet you beat off to Hopsin
You’d take Jack and Jill over Mass Appeal and think I’m A Little Teapot is knockin’
While the way my verse gets the real heads hyped you’d think that Detox was droppin’
omg - dude you just have to do this in every set of 4 and youd never lose my vote. flow nasty

Please stop this nonsense; there’s a cloud of shame that surrounds this lame normally
I’m here to hand Mike an L so you can pronounce his name formally
Totally bankrupt morally; ungodly the type of shit I do through these verses
Fam’ll be at your funeral service like “What the fuck did he do to deserve this?
damn

@Throwback Mike
They say I’m one dimensional… Well, let’s make it unusual, I hope it’s suitable
I’ll bring work to this square—that’s a cubicle
Wanna “write raps about screennames”? It’s a mistake when you choose me, dude
Watch Mike murder his (Mic Murderaz) wack name like Poopie Doo

didn't get the punchline - googled - found this gem of a battle. im only through one round so far such a bodybag

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lA_c_LzNTIQ

For runnin’ his mouth I had to smack him ‘round
I stole on his neck without a cap and gown
If I bring gats around, clap him down, it could get hectic
I’ll hit riff’ legs if I need (kneed) the hammer, it’s just reflexive
But he ain’t got the nerve to go and get weapons
When I move, lead is around (letters around) like I’m dyslexic
wooow the dyslexic shit cold as fuck

He reps that Boston flag? Bet he sounds like the family from the Hopper ads
I’m a copy cat? If I picked anyone’s brain, it sent ‘em where Trotsky at
Do him Gaddaffi bad, the iron cross his chest like a Nazi badge
Body bag! The shotty blast, rock his abs—Pilates class
mike snappin here!!

I’m camped out by his crib, he'll get hit with the Sauer
The can’a (canna) pop up in his yard like a perennial flower
ah not feelin this one too much
Get riffic devoured. A million buck shots, watch his skull remove the casings
They keep poppin’ in his head like he’s got problems ruminating
mmm

Riffic wanna ball wicked (wicket), but it’s cricket(s) when a killer’s on his lawn
I let it sing (Singh) and go ham (Hamm) with this “Million Dollar Arm”
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Be real… You love my style. If you say it’s overdone, I’ve just cooked ‘em too long wow
He’ll change it up after this verse like a hook on a song
It’ll be music to my ears if you say I’m wack, your top ten list broke your cover
I’ve got a synesthete’s (pronounced: sin-us-teet) tendencies, riff showed his colors

yikes

yo this shit was crazy - cosign reading this one! riffic had that flow on point like a fountain pen but throwback miike's haymakers were making me spit coolaid on my keyboard so I gotta give it to him. think you got the balance right on this one with the amount of word play - only a couple instances of onverstretching but not much.
yeah i had a shit pans labyrinth line as u can see. illipsis had a really good one vs madflex. might not exactly be a fresh concept, but i haven't heard / seen it much outside of that.
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This was a really nice battle. Usually can't fuck with two verses over 20 lines but you guys kept bringing it the whole time.

Riffic: Even though it is such a simple concept, the 'give mike an L like saying his name formally' was fucking dirty. Closer was mean as hell and made that last four bar scheme really nice. The clowning on his style in the beginning was a solid idea but I felt like it came off a little weak. Got into a really nice flow after that and I enjoyed the walk through your block masked up like halloween bar. Pan's Labyrinth punch was fire. The flow all the way to the finish was straight bonkers, but I felt like the punches couldn't quite keep up. The jack and jill over mass appeal and little tea pot knockin gave me a real good chuckle though. Overall, a really nice verse. Could tell you didn't take that loss to thatguy lightly.

Throwback Mike: Intro was nice. I'd seen that battle before so the punch leaned me for sure. Small wordplay in this bar, but I really liked the kneed the hammer it's reflexive line. The move letters around punch was so close to being fire, but it just felt a little forced for me. I couldn't quite find the proximity in letters around to lead is around for it to be crazy. Still a good idea. The next stanza was filthy. You had me by the trotsky line and then just kept pouring it on. Rhyming was so good and punches were on point as hell. Problems ruminating was real nice and the million dollar arm was dirty. The closing four were so well written. Got damn this verse was good


This battle is too tight for me to call right now. Will definitely be back with a vote. Not even sure who I am leaning towards right now. Huge fucking ups to the both of you.
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Took an L to thatguy; don’t think I’ve lost my focus or concentration
Fuck a themed battle, today’s theme will be total domination
weak start imo i really dont like when a verse opens up without really referencing your opponent
All that forced wordplay you love? Something Yogi is incapable of—UN-BEAR-ABLE
Your whole style is like Big T in a tight shirt—it SEAMS TEAR-ABLE
hahaah damn, ok, we in here now
Surprised you let your verses see the Lyt of Day; probably should’ve left the quill at home
‘Cause even when you chance upon a good bar, this kid’s still a clone of Chilla Jones
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Plus I heard this clown rat, but I got a mouse trap and a house cat
So I won’t be missin’ my high notes when I’m layin’ him down flat
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‘Cause my whole crowd clap, and it ain’t at a screen; might
Travel your block, masked up like Halloween night
Lookin’ for trouble, if my clique gets this bitch in a street fight
They’ll all be Jay Gatsby—raisin’ arms once I give ‘em the green light
flow is on point af, i might say the first 2 of the 4 is a bit fillerish though, punch is
No gats? We can scrap; your punch won’t phase me, even if it lands
You ain’t the monster from Pan’s Labrynth, you can’t see me with the hands

Word to Ricky—I’m a broad slayer, heartbreaker like Don Draper; think your broad’s safe?
Bring her along, player; I’ll put that girl on her back like a star gazer
why has this not been said before, real nice. didnt like the use of the word broad twice in the set up, thats a minor nit pick though
Try lookin’ to the sky for help, Orion’s Belt when these three dots get poppin’
Comin’ to this battle with that nerd shit—I bet you beat off to Hopsin
hahaha sky to help/orions belt was a real nice multi, punch hit for me mostly coz i fucking hate hopsin
You’d take Jack and Jill over Mass Appeal and think I’m A Little Teapot is knockin’
While the way my verse gets the real heads hyped you’d think that Detox was droppin’
ok
Please stop this nonsense; there’s a cloud of shame that surrounds this lame normally
I’m here to hand Mike an L so you can pronounce his name formally

Totally bankrupt morally; ungodly the type of shit I do through these verses
Fam’ll be at your funeral service like “What the fuck did he do to deserve this?
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They say I’m one dimensional… Well, let’s make it unusual, I hope it’s suitable
I’ll bring work to this square—that’s a cubicle

Wanna “write raps about screennames”? It’s a mistake when you choose me, dude
Watch Mike murder his (Mic Murderaz) wack name like Poopie Doo
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For runnin’ his mouth I had to smack him ‘round
I stole on his neck without a cap and gown
ok, had to google this one, gawd damn nerds and your educationz
If I bring gats around, clap him down, it could get hectic
I’ll hit riff’ legs if I need (kneed) the hammer, it’s just reflexive

But he ain’t got the nerve to go and get weapons
When I move, lead is around (letters around) like I’m dyslexic
words hurt mike, but yeah nice
He reps that Boston flag? Bet he sounds like the family from the Hopper ads
I’m a copy cat? If I picked anyone’s brain, it sent ‘em where Trotsky at
Do him Gaddaffi bad, the iron cross his chest like a Nazi badge
Body bag! The shotty blast, rock his abs—Pilates class
that hopper ads needs a hyper link coz google aint helpin, real nice though, like riffics four bar, flow is sick, nazi badge stood out as the best punch for me
I’m camped out by his crib, he'll get hit with the Sauer
The can’a (canna) pop up in his yard like a perennial flower
not really feeling this, the rhyme is dope but just didnt hit too hard for me
Get riffic devoured. A million buck shots, watch his skull remove the casings
They keep poppin’ in his head like he’s got problems ruminating
kinda same as the 2 above rhyme is nice but it just doesnt hit overly hard for me, the rhyme schemes have been so good in this battle real solid mutlis, thats get riffic devoured rhyme linking this to the last 2 im all bout that shit (riffic did the same in his verse with the detox is droppin/please stop this nonsense , but i didnt mention it) but yeah real smooth shit
Riffic wanna ball wicked (wicket), but it’s cricket(s) when a killer’s on his lawn
I let it sing (Singh) and go ham (Hamm) with this “Million Dollar Arm”
dope....americans know about cricket?
Be real… You love my style. If you say it’s overdone, I’ve just cooked ‘em too long
He’ll change it up after this verse like a hook on a song
set up is nasty, next line is nice, but set up was real good
It’ll be music to my ears if you say I’m wack, your top ten list broke your cover
I’ve got a synesthete’s (pronounced: sin-us-teet) tendencies, riff showed his colors
another solid closer

this battle was super close, edging to riffic, he had 2 bars that didnt really hit for me, mike had 4, the rest of the battle was as close as you can get, pretty much flawless in every other way


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Riffic seemed to have more punches but overall I slightly enjoyed Mike's verse better, so I gave it to him. Both of them were great though.
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This is still so close reading it. I guess I'll have to very barely edge it to Mike. No problem whatsoever with either dude winning the polls. Really nice battle.
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Woooow, both of you came in swinging. Left me all confused and wondering who won, like Rocky VS Apollo at the end of Rocky 3.

I edged it to Mike after a second read though.
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fuck yea. ill give it a couple more reads and vote later.
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A little bit of stretched wordplay from mike.. But he started killing it after that.. Whole middle was nice the end fell a little flat for me.. Mike definitely kills it when he bars out instead of going all kg the poet on us.. Good shit mike

But damn i thought riffic killed it..
that give mike an l to pronounce his name formally or w/e was dope af...
had a bunch of good haymakers and both flowed real well

Imma give the slightest edge to riffic..
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such a close battle. definitly not an easy call but im giving the slight edge to throwback mike. both came solid all the way through they verses but i feel mikes closer sealed the deal for me. taking the top ten angle played well for him imo. i could see the decision going to either dudes tho.

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holy fuck. just made my vote and this SHIT IS DEAD EVEN!!!!!
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Classic all around. Had to edge to riffic tho. Felt his verse a bit more
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shit, totally forgot about this, my fault. alright lets get into this shit

first off, this shit is top quality from both of you. 24 bars is a lot and its tough to keep the readers interest through something as long as that but you both killed it here, next to no filler from either of you.

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came out swinging with that opener, definitely got my attention. next four bars were tight, that big t shit was funny and you the chilla jones/daylyt scheme was well done. i'm with some others on the next shit, i never saw the gatsby movie so i had to follow the link, the idea is cool and the lead up is pretty good too, i like the multisyllabic shit but its shitty when people dont do it right, but i think you nailed it here.

that pans labyrinth shit was hot, i'd never heard that before so i definitely jaydamned at that one. the next six was the only spot where i thought the verse dipped a little, the lines are all still good but reading it, i didn't feel like it flowed as smoothly as the rest of it did. that said, the stargazer line was nice, and the detox closer for the stanza was nice af. the last four were bangin too, definitely a good way to wrap it up. pronounce his name formally was a cool concept, and the last two lines were bodybag material, really brought it home. all in all, this was some of the best shit ive seen from you, keep it goin

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you've been doin this shit for a minute, i've gotten to watch you over the months and you've been steady improving right along, and this is your best shit to date imo.

your first four opening bars were nice, but also the weakest of your verse. the ideas were nice and i like the mic murderaz scheme but compared to the rest of your verse they werent the strongest, which is saying something. the next six definitely got it poppin, they flowed very well and the internal rhyme was hot, including the multisyllabic shit, you also did it well here. the closer for that stanza was crazy, i cant believe nobodys ever used that line before, its nice as shit.

you kept the flow up with the next four, just felt like you were punching harder and harder here, using the same pattern for 10 rhymes over four bars leading up to the last line, really felt like you were going for the throat. the next part was nice too, perennial flowers line was cool and the ruminating shit was cold. I havent seen million dollar arm yet but the scheme seems cool, i like the punch so i can say i dig it.

the last four were tight, that 'change up like a hook on a song' shit was dope, and the closer was risky imo, including the links is something people dont always fuck with and a concept like synesthesia that many people dont know about makes for a hit or miss closer, but the shit hit hard for me, so i thought you killed it.




overall, this shit was close as hell, definitely one of the best main stage battles in a minute. riffic had consistency and hot lines throughout, whereas i thought mike started a little slower but really picked up steam as he went. this really just boils down to preference, i dont think either of you actually lost here, but personally i was feeling mikes shit a bit more so ive gotta vote for him here
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i read through this battle a fair few times, and i didnt even notice it was 24 bars till k posted this (had to go back and count) thats a real good job that your shit went the extra bars but was so gripping that i didnt even notice
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When I get to a real pc I 'll give a juicy breakdown @riffic brotha...I want it to be legit tho not half assed...brb
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