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Old 12-23-2014, 02:18 PM   #1
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Literally And Carefully Pasting Bars Together...

Okay.

There's TWO TYPES OF WRITING CRAFTS... the intricate and literal route or the half ass route...

I noticed most battle rappers use the words "dome", "whip", and "fly"... could be used in different ways

The half ass route would be:

Lighting up your whip like a customized ride

Put cheese on your dome like a Green bay fan

I'm fly, that I need to be considered as a plane


This is all that one dimensional swag that needs to leave HipHop. It kills the art of HipHop and the creative mind that lies for better bars, that's why a lot of rappers and battle rappers can't progress as Hollow Da Don or King Los today. One dimensional pen game was so 2008, now it's 2014!!!! AND PEOPLE STILL WRITE LIKE THIS IS COOL!!! SMH... those are not punchlines.

Let's take a more creative approach or intricate modification on bars, more of Double Entendres really:

Won't be a PC computer, but we'll see Macs running through Windows

I'm getting mad green, call me Bruce Banner

Notes fly in the booth, no Japanese game show

If he lyin then, he'll get a round and you won't get up, Loaded

^^^ More of intricate bars we should be seeing in punchlines. Those are what punchlines are supposed to sound and look like in today's age. Let's take a look at the words, "fly", "dome", and "whip" again.

Fly=literally meaning for an insect...
Dome=literally meaning for an stadium...
Whip=a literal meaning...

How we can flip these a bit more better... that won't sound so half ass...

My team kicking in his dome like soccer practice

You wouldn't be fly in my eyes if I lived on dollar a day

I got this pussy whipped like he's gullible for a bitch

^^^ This that BMagic swag, still better than that one dimensional crap niggas be writing.

RAP DOESN'T MEANING NOTHING IF YOUR PEN GAME IS HELLA WEAK... MIGHT AS WELL NOT RAP. IT'S ALL ABOUT BEING THE BETTER WRITER!!!
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Old 12-23-2014, 02:41 PM   #2
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Let's get this post 20K views before the weeks over!!!

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Old 12-23-2014, 03:27 PM   #3
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Flippin the script up like Mike Vick getting bit in his junk by a pit, yup I'm a sick pup.
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Old 12-23-2014, 03:34 PM   #4
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Flippin the script up like Mike Vick getting bit in his junk by a pit, yup I'm a sick pup.
Eminems bitchass
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Canadians are like See Land? That's Sand.
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Not word play. Punchlines and word literations
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I'll throw you all over the place. That's a fair.
We can both jump off, but you'll go down first. Thats a dair.

Smash bars

Smack yo honey backwards, That's a Bair.

I'm jigs, teleport to catch you, It's iN air, That's a snare.

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I'll throw you all over the place. That's a fair.
We can both jump off, but you'll go down first. Thats a dair.

Smash bars
But also... your lines are all over the place, that's a lie detector test
And why does it look like Village People inspired your leather vest
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But also... your lines are all over the place, that's a lie detector test
And why does it look like Village People inspired your leather vest
Because I'll Bthrowing you around to do more damage.
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Because I'll Bthrowing you around to do more damage.
Men throwing you around is doing more damage
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