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Old 01-14-2015, 12:59 AM   #1
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RBL Season 1 Championship Match: SonnyDaze vs. Throwback Mike

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@SonnyDaze

You beat me in week 1 cuz I grabbed the syllabus and walked out of the class
But I showed up to the final just to make you butt dial and talk out of ya ass
Gettin atom since he wanna gas’d, for that number 1 spot I’ll be the hydrogen
This like a rugby match cuz when I’m down four whatever, I just need-a try to win

Cuz now you’re in a pinch, to keep your buzz you better dip or hand the grizzly over
Cuz when I swing the only way you’ll see Throwback ball is right after a Wrigley homer
I’ll knock you into a coma, your 15 minutes are over if you are not grateful
They’ll sea that you’re lose’n the ‘ship, if you wanna get capt’in the Bermuda Triangle

We take ya hostage like “get in the boat”, then smack the shit outcha bro
You might be part Cuban but I’m the one that’ll deliver the blow
And we keep hiddin Mike, like informants when they’re wearing a wire
We’ll ‘Mark Cuban’s out’, like your time on shark tank has expired


Your styles broke but you’re lucky to have dick riders that’ll give ya business
But you can bank on getting taken out a-loan, no matter how little the interest
Lil Ill is my witness, I’d let the shotty blow and you’d get bodied over audio
Boo boo baka, your white block-a drop when I dot em then knock em over like dominoes

So cut that Wildin’ out, cuz you’re makin kissy faces the same way that Con ducked
I earned my stripes, so when you see both arms out its not unsportsmanlike conduct
Lookin through verse, wherever you’re Conceited is wherever you conceded
For the chicken I’m a “family bucket” at the table wherever your kin seated


In your video battle against Cole you were chest puffin, bustin teks
Who knows what you’re dumpin next; I just didn’t know Kevlar started makin bubble vests
Your “glock’ll murder”, I wouldn’t be surprised if you “got the burner”
But I’ll get this vermin chopped cuz my bullets Ben coming out the MAC like Roethlisburger

@Throwback Mike

Sonny edged Job, but now they threw him to the wolves—he won’t be leavin’ this bout
He’ll scream and just shout while they’re rippin’ tissue off his limbs like I TP-ed his house
See what the scene is about? Rick Ross tattoo artist—I draw the Heat by his scalp
And put a couple buck shots in his head to match the buck teeth in his mouth

It’s bleedin’ him out; the blood’ll pour and splash when the four get clapped
Think Hogwarts for that—this cap’ll go through your brain like the Sorting Hat
I ignore your raps; it’s a flashback to Flatline—you could be sayin’ some heat
But I’ll fire back, another title match where Daze (Day’s) gettin’ beat

You stay in the streets? I got a K on the seat that’s Pat Stay size—enormous
Bulletz crack in the whip (crackin’ the whip) like that Daylyt performance
I beat him twice already, but the third time’s the charm? I don't care, I'll walk through him
He's Ultra Soft; I’ll take that charm and roll (Charmin roll) out, then that barrel (bear’ll) talk to him

The iron’a flex, I’ll have a bullseye on your chest like the Target dress code
And shoot at least twelve from the magazine like it’s Charlie Hebdo
That’s what happens if you’re showin’ a profit (prophet), I open your top and go in your wallet
And hoard the cash, no quarterback when you drop and Throw’ in ya pocket

I’m comin’ for you; at your door poppin’ the lock, but I ain’t bustin’ a move
I’ve just got a couple’a dudes on deck with the Nina like Columbus’ crew
Start runnin’ my dude, cause I ride with a 4Matic, but it’s not a sedan
I’ll start poppin’ your fam, so when it’s war, haul (Warhol) cause I’m drawin’ a can

But let me talk to the man… since you like personals, I’m burnin’ you, ridin’ full throttle
On Son block with my dogs exposin’ your white ass like the Coppertone bottle
And with those shades you rock, I would say a cop’s your role model, so I’m sure that we’ll find
This rat talkin’ to a pig on the strip like “Pearls Before Swine”
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This the championship match from like 3 months of battles, show some love and cast your vote on this CRAZY battle!
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we in here, spot reserved for a breakdown later
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I'm going to try a slightly different style of breakdown for this one, was pretty fire across the board.

Punches (0 for meh, 1 for pretty good, 2 for fire): I had Sonny at 58% and Mike at 66%. Only punches I gave a 0 were son block (played out angle) and butt dial. Both were very consistent but I thought Mike had some crazy creative punches (charmin bear, tp house, pearls before swine).

Flow: This was pretty close. I was fuckin with both dudes use of multis to keep schemes going and I thought both were a bit long winded at times. Going to say TIE here.

Bar of the battle: this scheme from Mike
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And shoot at least twelve from the magazine like it’s Charlie Hebdo
That’s what happens if you’re showin’ a profit (prophet), I open your top and go in your wallet
And hoard the cash, no quarterback when you drop and Throw’ in ya pocket
Overall I got Mike taking it. Great sendoff battle for the first season though, Sonny definitely came with some dope shit and made this a classic.
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Old 01-19-2015, 03:36 PM   #6
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Throwback mike was pretty decent, his first 16 were cookin, daze came back on the last 8 but mike mighta still edged those as well... daze was still good but mikes was more of an enjoyable read, no hate.

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edge to son. punches were hitting harder
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Damn, shit was fire. Close call tbh but I'll breakdown when I get the chance(if I get the chance)
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SonnyDaze
We take ya hostage like “get in the boat”, then smack the shit outcha bro
You might be part Cuban but I’m the one that’ll deliver the blow
And we keep hiddin Mike, like informants when they’re wearing a wire
We’ll ‘Mark Cuban’s out’, like your time on shark tank has expired
That is fire!!!

Mike
You stay in the streets? I got a K on the seat that’s Pat Stay size—enormous
Bulletz crack in the whip (crackin’ the whip) like that Daylyt performance
I beat him twice already, but the third time’s the charm? I don't care, I'll walk through him
He's Ultra Soft; I’ll take that charm and roll (Charmin roll) out, then that barrel (bear’ll) talk to him
Very Clever bars

@SonnyDaze it was close but I got to edge it to you Daze. Plus at the end of your verse you wrote a line that clearly went over my head. Your pen game was just a little bit better this time. Keep up the good work homie. Also shout out to Mike...He did his thing.
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I got Throwback takin' it, but this was a pretty heated battle. Props to both cats!
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dope battle but there were some reaches and corny references i didnt fuck with. both got this text battle shit down but they just need to learn how to rap and until that happens i cant vote because this some fuck boy shit.

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On my arbitrary judging system I have Sonny with 9 points and Mike with... 9 points.

So I'm flipping a coin.

I don't have a coin. I'm flipping my last 2014 paycheck.

Mike gets it.

Some reaches in material, plus there's some lines that I don't have any idea how they're supposed to sound and I can't quite make em work in my head.

Good shit overall. It's like yall have text battled before or something... Nah, couldn't be.
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You beat me in week 1 cuz I grabbed the syllabus and walked out of the class
But I showed up to the final just to make you butt dial and talk out of ya ass
Gettin atom since he wanna gas’d, for that number 1 spot I’ll be the hydrogen
This like a rugby match cuz when I’m down four whatever, I just need-a try to win
the butt dial/talk out your ass concept was cool but wasnt executed well. i dont get how showing to a final would result in him butt dialing or how any of it connected. should have kept it more simple and sweet with the set up for the punch and it wouldve hit. shit was too convoluted though. then i didnt get either of the references you made after. i assume the first was a basic chemistry thing but i dont remember enough of high school to know what it really means and i know nothing about rugby so maybe that was cool but im pretty sure most hip-hop heads dont know rugby so its not cool to me.

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Cuz now you’re in a pinch, to keep your buzz you better dip or hand the grizzly over
Cuz when I swing the only way you’ll see Throwback ball is right after a Wrigley homer
I’ll knock you into a coma, your 15 minutes are over if you are not grateful
They’ll sea that you’re lose’n the ‘ship, if you wanna get capt’in the Bermuda Triangle
once again you had the right idea with the throwback ball word play but lord this is some 100 bulletz type shit right here. that bermuda triangle shit almost hurt me to read. youre trying way too fuckin hard man. if its not there then its not there just move on to the next idea.

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You might be part Cuban but I’m the one that’ll deliver the blow
And we keep hiddin Mike, like informants when they’re wearing a wire
We’ll ‘Mark Cuban’s out’, like your time on shark tank has expired
for the third time your 2nd bar was better than your 4th. cuban/deliver the blow was nice. mark cubans out was a bad reach. even hidden/hittin had me scared like damn hes gonna do it again then you did it again. im sorry if im being critical but its real.


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Your styles broke but you’re lucky to have dick riders that’ll give ya business
But you can bank on getting taken out a-loan, no matter how little the interest
Lil Ill is my witness, I’d let the shotty blow and you’d get bodied over audio
Boo boo baka, your white block-a drop when I dot em then knock em over like dominoes
here we go. not sure about the boo boo baka thrown in there but this is overall a better 4 bar scheme than the previous 3. no real bad reaches. the closest thing would be the played out bank/a loan/alone word play but the way you twisted it was just enough to get away with it and the dominoes punch was cool.

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So cut that Wildin’ out, cuz you’re makin kissy faces the same way that Con ducked
I earned my stripes, so when you see both arms out its not unsportsmanlike conduct
Lookin through verse, wherever you’re Conceited is wherever you conceded
For the chicken I’m a “family bucket” at the table wherever your kin seated


In your video battle against Cole you were chest puffin, bustin teks
Who knows what you’re dumpin next; I just didn’t know Kevlar started makin bubble vests
Your “glock’ll murder”, I wouldn’t be surprised if you “got the burner”
But I’ll get this vermin chopped cuz my bullets Ben coming out the MAC like Roethlisburger
none of this counts because its over 16 lines so i wont even break it down

throwback mike

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Sonny edged Job, but now they threw him to the wolves—he won’t be leavin’ this bout
He’ll scream and just shout while they’re rippin’ tissue off his limbs like I TP-ed his house
See what the scene is about? Rick Ross tattoo artist—I draw the Heat by his scalp
And put a couple buck shots in his head to match the buck teeth in his mouth
lines 2-4 were all dope punches. nice structure too. nothing else to say.

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It’s bleedin’ him out; the blood’ll pour and splash when the four get clapped
Think Hogwarts for that—this cap’ll go through your brain like the Sorting Hat
I ignore your raps; it’s a flashback to Flatline—you could be sayin’ some heat
But I’ll fire back, another title match where Daze (Day’s) gettin’ beat
i dont get the harry potter shit and it seems corny to me but i know its rmbva so youre reading your audience a lot like the rugby line from sonny so ill throw up my hands on that but the 4th bar with the 3rd bar set up worked well to me and definitely hit. not a crazy haymaker but at this point its lookin like it may be true.

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You stay in the streets? I got a K on the seat that’s Pat Stay size—enormous
Bulletz crack in the whip (crackin’ the whip) like that Daylyt performance
I beat him twice already, but the third time’s the charm? I don't care, I'll walk through him
He's Ultra Soft; I’ll take that charm and roll (Charmin roll) out, then that barrel (bear’ll) talk to him
i fuck with the continuation of the title match scheme but its becoming borderline too wordy right here and then the charmin roll line doesnt really connect to me. i get where youre goin and its creative but it doesnt work.

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The iron’a flex, I’ll have a bullseye on your chest like the Target dress code
And shoot at least twelve from the magazine like it’s Charlie Hebdo
That’s what happens if you’re showin’ a profit (prophet), I open your top and go in your wallet
And hoard the cash, no quarterback when you drop and Throw’ in ya pocket
the phrase "the iron'a flex" almost ruins this whole shit no joke. its corny and adds words where you didnt need them. just for the sake of adding some depth to the rhyme scheme. i said it almost ruins it though because it doesnt actually cuz the charlie hebdo shit hit so hard and the showin a profit follow up too. even the quarterback punch at the end was pretty much a haymaker the only criticisms i have are adding too many unecessary words. another example is "i open your top and go in your wallet and hoard the cash". no need to say "and" twice. thats some crazy shit to say i know but thats the most critical i can be about this.

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I’m comin’ for you; at your door poppin’ the lock, but I ain’t bustin’ a move
I’ve just got a couple’a dudes on deck with the Nina like Columbus’ crew
Start runnin’ my dude, cause I ride with a 4Matic, but it’s not a sedan
I’ll start poppin’ your fam, so when it’s war, haul (Warhol) cause I’m drawin’ a can

But let me talk to the man… since you like personals, I’m burnin’ you, ridin’ full throttle
On Son block with my dogs exposin’ your white ass like the Coppertone bottle
And with those shades you rock, I would say a cop’s your role model, so I’m sure that we’ll find
This rat talkin’ to a pig on the strip like “Pearls Before Swine”
past 16 lines so im not evaluating.





i got throwback mike winning pretty easily. id almost call it a body. fuck it why not. this was a body bag. mike had about 4 set up lines that seemed like filler and 2 punches i thought didnt land but all his other shit was either a haymaker or close to it. thats 10 hot lines out of 16. sonny had maybe 2. throwback ball and deliver the blow lines were dope but throwback mike had about 6 lines better than either of them.
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Excellent final!

Sonny first

Butt dial great concept poor phrasing
Hydrogen punch the same, takes a couple of reads, kind of stretched
Rugby punch good, could have lost the down 4 set-up though

Throwback ball concept is a bit rinsed, good though
Bermuda triangle again, the phrasing just makes it a bit hard to make sense of, another good idea though

Part Cuban deliver the blow mmhhmm now we're talking!
Wearing a wire line was nice
Shark Tank was a bit stretched, but some googling informed me it was hot

Taking out a loan line was nice
Dominoes line also sick

'Con ducked' took me a while to realise what 'ducked' meant, again, phrasing
Didn't really get the unsportsmanlike bar tbh
'I'm a family bucket' that's worse than calling yourself a bike rack, I don't understand this line either

Bubble vest line nice
Had to google the closer, but it was a good one

Overall a nice verse, with some hot moments, let down by overstuffing and awward phrasing in places

Mike

TP'ed his house nice bar but the limbs part confused me, would have been clener without it
Rick Ross bar nice
Buckteeth bar cold

Sorting hat bar sick
Title match bar simple but effective

Bulletz crackin' the whip was FIRE
Toilet roll scheme really didn't work for me, doesn't work both ways and was stretched

Target dress code ok
Hedbo nice
Throw in ya pocket also good

Poppin' the lock/bustin' a move love this set-up
Columbus' crew HAWT!
Idk how much sense 'war, haul' makes, ok though

Coppertone seems obscure but decent
Pearls before swine was a filthy closer, but maybe too obscure for most

Overall a heavy verse, with only a coupe of missteps, and a noticeably tighter, cleaner flow than Sonny, Sonny's flow was nice though.

Both are fitting finalist, and did great here, but I have to go with Mike on this one.
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Wow this was a great battle.

Throw back Mike had so many back to back punches and current event haymakers that it made my jaw drop a couple of times.

That Hdebo/Rick Ross/Warhol/Coppertone/Bulletz crackin the whip lines were FIRE

Great job @Throwback Mike
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I read this a few times now but Mike was crazy consistent with some heavier material

Sonny went off but it's hard to match Mike punch for punch


I got Mike taking this
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First I saw the battle was up, will vote later tonight hopefully
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thats the promoters fault imma fire that dickhole
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they agreed on 24, KBomb didn't update the copypasta
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wow he dropped the ball like puberty
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either way throwbacks last 8 were better than sonnys last 8 also so he still bodies
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thats so abstrakt. new catchphrase run with it
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we pickin up steam now, three straight heavy bars

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I beat him twice already, but the third time’s the charm? I don't care, I'll walk through him
He's Ultra Soft; I’ll take that charm and roll (Charmin roll) out, then that barrel (bear’ll) talk to him
I liked most of this, take that charm and roll though... i dunno. something seems a bit off about it, but its nice.

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That’s what happens if you’re showin’ a profit (prophet), I open your top and go in your wallet
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I’ll start poppin’ your fam, so when it’s war, haul (Warhol) cause I’m drawin’ a can
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good closer too

battle was a bar fest, but in the end just thought mike connected a few more times so gotta give him the win. RBL>>
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tough battle, had to edge with tbm, out punched em imo.. good shit fellas
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Dope ass finals fellas,both did a excellent job.

Both verses where well written,it was close af. But ima have to edge it to mike.
I read this battle like for times,which I usually can make a choice after 2 reads.
I picked mike cause, I fuxs with the charmin line and the copper tone bar. I thought those two
Bars kinda sperated him from sonny.
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lmfao im literally reading 1493 right now so this was fire

i think sonny's strength nh is in audio where u can let the bars build up etc but mike edged a W here
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Not feeling Sonny's opener. The concept could have been cool but the punch didn't really work for me. I see what you were going for with the Hydrogen line but it didn't really hit like a punch and I'd write it off as a set up except nothing in the line ties into the next and unless I'm missing something in the rugby line, it fell flat to me.

Wrigley homer line was an okay concept but Throwback ball was a reach to me not just in the phrasing but also in the way it doesn't connect to any idea besides keeping in theme with baseball.

Bermuda Triangle bar is a reach to me, maybe because I've never heard championship called a 'ship but the Capt'in part just didn't fit.

Deliver the blow was cool but a little awkward.

Mark Cuban's out was cool but the rest of the line just didn't work saying it's like the guy on Shark Tank not being on Shark Tank anymore, which I assume isn't something that happened judging by how it is phrased.

"But you can bank on getting taken out a-loan, no matter how little the interest"

Fire. Simple but effective.

Dominoes line was cool.

Unsportsmanlike conduct line was okay.

"Lookin through verse, wherever you’re Conceited is wherever you conceded"

Nice set up not feeling the "family bucket" punch though.

Bubblevest was funny.

Closer was nice but almost feels like I've heard a similar line since I don't follow football and the only time I even feel I've heard the name is from battle rap. I'll just assume if that was the case, it wasn't the same line.

Stray thoughts: nothing really stand out with the rhyme schemes and structure from Sonny. A lot of the setups felt pretty subpar in that they didn't set up much of the punch most of the time besides the rhyme, didn't really have any wordplay or clever twist to them, and just didn't really bring anything to the table. They were pretty filler-ish and for a finals battle especially, I think that deserves points marked off.

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"Scream and just shout"? Feels forced for the rhyme scheme which would be just awkward as it is but TP'd his house doesn't rhyme to well. Ripping tissue off his limbs was cool since I've never heard anyone do a line like that before but the rest of the execution didn't work much for me. Decent enough start though.

Next 2 are ok. More carried by the phrasing than anything hitting in particular.

"Blood will pour and splash"? Sonny really did call out the Conceited influence. lol Sorting Hat bar was okay I guess. Not really familiar with Harry Potter books but I saw the first movie. I know the hat tells people what house they are a part of but I just assume it does it from magic and not necessarily searching their mind, or at least there was nothing in the movie that I noticed that said something like that. I'll just say it didn't work for me.

"another title match where Daze getting beat"
Cool for a topical bar but didn't do much new with the concept, especially since it's using Days/Daze wordplay.

Bulletz crack in the whip - I thought people were saying it was Charlie Clips.

"Third time's the charm" is a fucking stretch to use that as a setup for "take that charm and roll" lol but I have to give a little credit for at least trying to find a creative way to tie the two concepts together. Punch was cool.

Target dress code was a nice rhyme to set up Charlie Hedbo but but the set up and the punch would just be alright if it wasn't topical. Overall I'd say it was good though. What really sells it for me are the next two bars. The next carry on the theme with "showing a profit" and while the quarterback punch didn't connect with the rest thematically, it was solid enough to make that set of bars fire.

Columbus crew was cool. Set up was pretty fillerish.

ride with the 4Matic line was cool.

War, haul was a reach. Drawing a can was cool but I've heard it before.

"On Son block with my dogs exposin’ your white ass like the Coppertone bottle"

Dope line. Simple but effective.

Closer was cool but rat talking to a pig/"animal talking to an animal like a _______(reference)" sort of bars have been done before. "On the strip" saved it from sounding played though.


Stray thoughts: TBM had some good structure and some nice complexity as well as punches that were hitting. Just pretty consistent overall.



Final thoughts: I think TBM won off of consistency here. A few more punches that hit for me. Big haymakers were pretty even with Mike maybe getting the slight edge, but Mike just was the better writer on this day. Better set ups. More cohesive lines. Better rhyme schemes.


Vote - Throwback Mike


Nice close out to a good season fellas.
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