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Old 03-02-2015, 01:50 AM   #1
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Shadow vs Friedtable

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@Shadow
Yo, try cook me, Iímma stir Fried noodle,
Watch this square dragged out in the yard - each line quad, Ru Paul,
One punchíll leave your shell splattered, thatís a fry up,
Spill your grease and dump your body in a box, thatís a fry cup.
I donít even wanna waste time with this Fried lame,
Best believe no time of the week is it Fried day,
Come with some shadow flips I dare you, like I ainít see it coming,
Youíre like Willy in Ghost, see a Shadow and you canít stop running,
Watch it, Shadow see you and he canít stop punching,
No need to flip Table cause his legs start buckling,
Give no fucks, I go light on Table like itís study session time,
Still do numbers on this Table, like I plot regression lines.



@friedtable
So son think he hot, but he's someone I RESPECT HARDLY.
Both newcomers to this, but if Shadow thinks HE CAN GET FAR HE
gotta know he'll stay behind me, from Table you can EXPECT A GODLY
performance, I'll just let all my bright lines PROJECT A BODY....

I know what you're thinking, that's just another LIGHT SCHEME
But this dude a bitch, you don't want it with MY TEAM
Another word from ya, I got a couple guns that I MIGHT SQUUEZE
Cause' the twin can(s) stay attatched to my hip like I'm SIAMESE

Heard he somewhere on his block, my crew really NEED THOSE HEATERS
Shot in the dark - don't know where he at, now HE DON'T EITHER
and that tip can say hello to him like it's a CEELO FEATURE
That'll have shadow plastered on the sidewalk like HIROSHIMA
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Old 03-02-2015, 02:08 AM   #2
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hahaha sick closer @friedtable

props for doing such short notice

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Old 03-02-2015, 03:58 PM   #4
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Fried Table got this one. Not bad homie.
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Old 03-02-2015, 04:17 PM   #5
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in with a breakdown since its both your debuts


@Shadow
Yo, try cook me, Iímma stir Fried noodle,
Watch this square dragged out in the yard - each line quad, Ru Paul,
gawd damn, i like the set up but the next line is on some daylty shit, nice
One punchíll leave your shell splattered, thatís a fry up,
Spill your grease and dump your body in a box, thatís a fry cup
lol at the fry up line, dunno if many people will get that, not really feeling the second line though
I donít even wanna waste time with this Fried lame,
Best believe no time of the week is it Fried day,
bit of advice, try go a little lighter on the flips, this is super predicable
Come with some shadow flips I dare you, like I ainít see it coming,
Youíre like Willy in Ghost, see a Shadow and you canít stop running,
nice
Watch it, Shadow see you and he canít stop punching,
No need to flip Table cause his legs start buckling,
ok
Give no fucks, I go light on Table like itís study session time,
Still do numbers on this Table, like I plot regression lines.
decent


@friedtable
So son think he hot, but he's someone I RESPECT HARDLY.
Both newcomers to this, but if Shadow thinks HE CAN GET FAR HE
gotta know he'll stay behind me, from Table you can EXPECT A GODLY
performance, I'll just let all my bright lines PROJECT A BODY....
not a bad punch, but you took to long to get to the punch though, when you got so few bars to uses wasting 3 on set up isnt the best of ideas, especially since shadow had like 4 punches in the time it took you to get to one. rhymes are on point, no need to use caps though, people here know what the deal is. didnt like the 3rd line, expect a godly...performance just breaks the flow of everything
I know what you're thinking, that's just another LIGHT SCHEME
But this dude a bitch, you don't want it with MY TEAM
Another word from ya, I got a couple guns that I MIGHT SQUUEZE
Cause' the twin can(s) stay attatched to my hip like I'm SIAMESE
same as above the punch is solid, although a little played, but the long set up is just a waste
Heard he somewhere on his block, my crew really NEED THOSE HEATERS
Shot in the dark - don't know where he at, now HE DON'T EITHER
and that tip can say hello to him like it's a CEELO FEATURE
That'll have shadow plastered on the sidewalk like HIROSHIMA
wow, thats fuckin dirty, the set up was better here, the second line was more punchy. that closer is fire though

both dudes got some shit to work on, im edging to shadow though his opening 3 lines i fucked with heavy and he had some other ok stuff through out. frieds closer was line of the battle though and almost enough to get him the W.

good shit, if you got the time go check out me vs sonny in the audio section
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Old 03-02-2015, 05:59 PM   #6
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hahaha sick closer @friedtable

props for doing such short notice
Nice round man, lots of good punches in there. We both had our fair share of nameflips lol.

@Dank Schrader

Thanks for the breakdown man, do appreciate it. I agree that the first part the flow does break up a bit when you're reading it. It sounded a lot smoother in my head versus on the page.

And although I'm not a huge fan of just punch after punch after punch, maybe I did go a little light on the # of punches.

And ya dope I'll check your audio for sure
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Old 03-02-2015, 06:09 PM   #7
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Old 03-02-2015, 09:02 PM   #8
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voted Shadow when this first was posted
line of the battle

Come with some shadow flips I dare you, like I ain’t see it coming,
You’re like Willy in Ghost, see a Shadow and you can’t stop running,
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Both showed potential, nice debuts. Shadow started kind of slow w/ some simple nameflips but the last four were real nice. Closer had me :Jaydamn:

Similarly I thought table started a little bit slower but he picked up a bit early and I was digging his last six bars. Last four were dirty.

Going with table for the sake of consistency.
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friedtable got this convincingly i think SHadow's nameflips cost him the battle tbh it was def overkill
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shit my next opponent has I battle I can look at. it was mad close. I thought shadow was more polished, but needed to break away from doin all nameflips. fried table was definately more creative/diverse with his material. all caps multis is something only rookies and larry word do, but that said, I fucked with those rhyme schemes and overall made your verse sound nicer to me. I got this goin to fried table, but not by much. both have potential def better than a lot of other 1st battles.
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shit my next opponent has I battle I can look at. it was mad close. I thought shadow was more polished, but needed to break away from doin all nameflips. fried table was definately more creative/diverse with his material. all caps multis is something only rookies and larry word do, but that said, I fucked with those rhyme schemes and overall made your verse sound nicer to me. I got this goin to fried table, but not by much. both have potential def better than a lot of other 1st battles.
Lol yh i just had to give some ammo right... Thanks for the feedback, hope to be better in our battle
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