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Old 05-25-2015, 08:04 PM   #1
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RBL Season Two Playoffs Championship: riffic vs. Dank Schrader

what's good ladies and gentlemen, it's officially that time, yes, the championship match of the RBLs second season is here. on my left, we have mod extraordinaire riffic, and on the right we have our friend from across the pond Dank Schrader. Both have killed shit on their respective paths to the final, and are ready to duke it out to see who's going to be the RBL Season 2 Champion.

Vote on who you thought won and leave a breakdown!


@riffic

So lil Dank tripped into the finals; now he thinks we can box?
Only here 'cause Daze went light since you caught him 'round the equinox
Check the ways we got here; it's clear that Dank's was the bitch route
And you think he’s the champ? Welcome to Jesus Camp - I’m here to straighten you kids out

So let's take bets on his weightsfs... did my closet just shake? Am I caught in a quake?
No, just an honest mistake - Dank eats his meals off of tectonic plates
And I've seen your girl's face... if she asked for food I'da given the bitch kibble
But instead she swallowed my whole bus' like it was driven by Ms. Frizzle

What I brought ain't a Neuralyzer, I chalk my enemies out
I call this one nine Eternal Sunshine - it'll knock your memories out
That'll put you on ice, but we got all night; I'll pistol whip 'em back in his rank
When I come a-cross with the handle you'd swear you got smacked with an ankh
And if the left hook don't tell you I'm not the type to play with
I got a dope pair like Voltaire - I'm dyin' for the right to say it

And he thought we'd see my title taken - is this clown kidding?
You're just lucky you got front row tickets to my crown fitting

@Dank Schrader

Without even tryin I've been on a win streak, but this week, the beast is back
Im a 97 V McMahon, when my punches hit, man can spit all he wants he ain't gonna leave the champ
He's a fan! Loves my music, but i aint gonna thank him for listening
Rather cut his brakes, he'll be banging my shit while crashin his whip, tox screen clean but he'll die with Dank in his system
Fact over fiction, that's the religion, you really blast steal?
If he wants a piece he applies for a license, me I know guys who are violent, that's real!
So his gun bars hard to swallow like a last meal, but if Riffic can
I'll do gun bars too, an when that deserts in his mouth he won't be spitting sand
So you gripping cans? Well me too, got a whole shelf's worth
When I blast tools, I got a gun so big, it's the size of Riffics self worth
That's huge! Coz mod life got him feelin God like, treats the forum like a military operation
Asleep at four, by seven he's back patrolling the board, he even sleeps in moderation
His life could see some complications, till he winds up as a crack whore taking man raw in his back door
Spends his spare time doing scat porn, and he'd still look down on everyone else like "I bet you've got a terrible SAT score"
I don't slang raw, ain't whipping that yola an mixin with soda, no pitchin work
Still I'm diggin dirt, dick in his girl, over and over soon as she lift up her SKIIIIRT!
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Old 05-26-2015, 02:41 PM   #2
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Old 05-27-2015, 03:22 AM   #3
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@Dank Schrader for sure

Bout to put Dank in a box like I ran out of bags to put weed in (packed a lot of lunches this week lol!!)
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Dank with the clear body. I expected more from Riffic unless he was doing a bad bars battle. Anyway, this line might not have ended Riffic's career but it def brought him down to PG level.

So you gripping cans? Well me too, got a whole shelf's worth
When I blast tools, I got a gun so big, it's the size of Riffics self worth
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riffic been fell off! that eternal sunshine gun bar was terrible theres no need to connect those two concepts at all wtf

some of danks setups seemed kinda off to me but overall think he took the w ionno what riific was doing here


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Riffic's first 14 bars were all good. None of it was next level IMO but every bar hit for me. Closer was kind of a waste of words.

For Dank, the dank in his system bar was nice, and most of his last 10 lines were nice. The whole self worth/sleeps in moderation part was funny with the sleeps in moderation bar being best of the battle.

No one I've met calls the SAT by something other than the abbreviated letters, but perhaps somewhere they do, and Danks from Europe, so I gave it a pass but it still made the line a bit off for me.

As happens a lot, I think it's consistency vs the highlight. I was leaning riffic on first read, but I still went through and graded it line by line and came up with riffic by a slim margin.

Vote is for riffic, props to both though.
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So lil Dank tripped into the finals; now he thinks we can box?
Only here 'cause Daze went light since you caught him 'round the equinox

Okay concept. Didn't the equinox occur over 2 months ago though? ...5/10

Check the ways we got here; it's clear that Dank's was the bitch route
And you think hes the champ? Welcome to Jesus Camp - Im here to straighten you kids out

The double meaning here was kinda weak, but this read a bit better ...6/10

So let's take bets on his weightsfs... did my closet just shake? Am I caught in a quake?
No, just an honest mistake - Dank eats his meals off of tectonic plates

The changing fonts was clever. Multis were good here. Linking tectonic plates was a waste of a link in my opinion though ...7/10

And I've seen your girl's face... if she asked for food I'da given the bitch kibble
But instead she swallowed my whole bus' like it was driven by Ms. Frizzle

Magic School Bus was dope but the specific reference is borderline too obscure for me 5/10

What I brought ain't a Neuralyzer, I chalk my enemies out
I call this one nine Eternal Sunshine - it'll knock your memories out

I like the memory loss concept but turning the punch into a gun bar just for the sake of rhyming made it kinda corny ...6/10

That'll put you on ice, but we got all night; I'll pistol whip 'em back in his rank
When I come a-cross with the handle you'd swear you got smacked with an ankh

The link didn't work for me but the punch was a pretty good here ...7/10

And if the left hook don't tell you I'm not the type to play with
I got a dope pair like Voltaire - I'm dyin' for the right to say it

This read well but the "left/right punches" concept can be a bit stale. The Voltaire reference was dope though. ...7/10

And he thought we'd see my title taken - is this clown kidding?
You're just lucky you got front row tickets to my crown fitting

Space filler ...5/10

Total: 48/80

@Dank Schrader

Without even tryin I've been on a win streak, but this week, the beast is back
Im a 97 V McMahon, when my punches hit, man can spit all he wants he ain't gonna leave the champ

Don't really watch wrestling so if this referring to something very specific it's over my head, but otherwise, an average start ...5/10

He's a fan! Loves my music, but i aint gonna thank him for listening
Rather cut his brakes, he'll be banging my shit while crashin his whip, tox screen clean but he'll die with Dank in his system

Way too wordy here, but the "Dank in his system" punch was fire ...7/10

Fact over fiction, that's the religion, you really blast steal?
If he wants a piece he applies for a license, me I know guys who are violent, that's real!

Thought you were going somewhere until I got to the punch and was like "okay" lol ...5/10

So his gun bars hard to swallow like a last meal, but if Riffic can
I'll do gun bars too, an when that deserts in his mouth he won't be spitting sand

I've never heard of a desert eagle referred to as just a "desert"- bit of a stretch for me. ...5/10

So you gripping cans? Well me too, got a whole shelf's worth
When I blast tools, I got a gun so big, it's the size of Riffics self worth

This is better, although I don't think ego bars are particularly relevant to riffic ...6/10

That's huge! Coz mod life got him feelin God like, treats the forum like a military operation
Asleep at four, by seven he's back patrolling the board, he even sleeps in moderation

Nice! Bar of the battle for me. Nearly too wordy but the punch/concept execution was that good ...9/10

His life could see some complications, till he winds up as a crack whore taking man raw in his back door
Spends his spare time doing scat porn, and he'd still look down on everyone else like "I bet you've got a terrible SAT score"

Riffic mentioned his SAT score against Throwback Mike so this was actually pretty funny. Guess I won't dock Dank too much for not knowing it's commonly pronounced S-A-T ...7/10


I don't slang raw, ain't whipping that yola an mixin with soda, no pitchin work
Still I'm diggin dirt, dick in his girl, over and over soon as she lift up her SKIIIIRT!

Random closer referencing a horrible song lol. Appreciate the humor but it's not effective for me ...5/10

Total: 49/80

Definitely not the best I've seen from either of you but considering I burned out against Mike in the Season 1 Finals and dropped a no-show verse last week against Dank I give you both props for writing as well as you did.

I guess the battle came down to Dank having the standout punch.

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Gonna try a breakdown for this since it is the final.

riffic
So lil Dank tripped into the finals; now he thinks we can box?
Only here 'cause Daze went light since you caught him 'round the equinox

Little light and the Equinox is when days are equal? Also, not anywhere near right now.

Check the ways we got here; it's clear that Dank's was the bitch route
And you think he’s the champ? Welcome to Jesus Camp - I’m here to straighten you kids out
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Oh, man. I saw this documentary twice actually. really good stuff, but the "straighten you kids out" is a bit wrong since it wasn't particularly related to sexuality. Maybe "make all you kids believers" would've worked better? Good reference, though, and anyone who hasn't seen this movie should check it out.

So let's take bets on his weightsfs... did my closet just shake? Am I caught in a quake?
No, just an honest mistake - Dank eats his meals off of tectonic plates

I dunno. I guess I just didn't like this as a fat joke.

And I've seen your girl's face... if she asked for food I'da given the bitch kibble
But instead she swallowed my whole bus' like it was driven by Ms. Frizzle
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Similar to some past lines. Still a pretty good line, though.

What I brought ain't a Neuralyzer, I chalk my enemies out
I call this one nine Eternal Sunshine - it'll knock your memories out

I dug this bar, but in Eternal Sunshine the memories weren't really...knocked out, right? They were erased one by one. Nit picking but it's confusing to say it's not a Neuralyzer but it's another thing from another movie that does a similar thing where the word play doesn't help differentiate. Bar reads really well, tho'.

That'll put you on ice, but we got all night; I'll pistol whip 'em back in his rank
When I come a-cross with the handle you'd swear you got smacked with an ankh

I dig the continuation of the last line. Punch was okay, but can you imagine someone getting punched with a gun and going "woah, was that an ankh that hit me?"

And if the left hook don't tell you I'm not the type to play with
I got a dope pair like Voltaire - I'm dyin' for the right to say it

Not bad. It's funny how common that Voltaire quote was for me to here when I was younger, especially in Uni, but I don't hear it now.

And he thought we'd see my title taken - is this clown kidding?
You're just lucky you got front row tickets to my crown fitting

Eh, super light closer.

Dank Schrader
Without even tryin I've been on a win streak, but this week, the beast is back
Im a 97 V McMahon, when my punches hit, man can spit all he wants he ain't gonna leave the champ

I like wrestling bars and a reference to the Montreal Screw job is dope, but you're not really tying anything into it.

He's a fan! Loves my music, but i aint gonna thank him for listening
Rather cut his brakes, he'll be banging my shit while crashin his whip, tox screen clean but he'll die with Dank in his system

Clever idea, but a bit of a stretch. Also, these bars are getting super long. 28 syllables is way too much

Fact over fiction, that's the religion, you really blast steal?
If he wants a piece he applies for a license, me I know guys who are violent, that's real!

No punch here. I mean, "grown man" bars can land still, but in a text battle they've gotta be more on point

So his gun bars hard to swallow like a last meal, but if Riffic can
I'll do gun bars too, an when that deserts in his mouth he won't be spitting sand

I dunno. This one is kind of bad bars-esque.

So you gripping cans? Well me too, got a whole shelf's worth
When I blast tools, I got a gun so big, it's the size of Riffics self worth

I think self-worth is a good thing! I'd like more if it was "ego" or "arrogance" as they're different to me than self-worth. Side note: this feels like it was written for me. I'm so egotistical I think bars about a mods ego that you wrote for him are about me.

That's huge! Coz mod life got him feelin God like, treats the forum like a military operation
Asleep at four, by seven he's back patrolling the board, he even sleeps in moderation

This is pretty good, buuuuut wouldn't sleeping in moderation be just a regular amount of sleep? Creative concept, though.

His life could see some complications, till he winds up as a crack whore taking man raw in his back door
Spends his spare time doing scat porn, and he'd still look down on everyone else like "I bet you've got a terrible SAT score"

This one got pretty bad, man, even if the final joke got a slight chuckle. It's such a long two bars and...SAT score is S-A-T score. No one says it like "sat".


I don't slang raw, ain't whipping that yola an mixin with soda, no pitchin work
Still I'm diggin dirt, dick in his girl, over and over soon as she lift up her SKIIIIRT!

Both your closers were light.


Okay, so this is a hard battle to judge. Both of you had some creative ideas, but there wasn't a single punch that was a haymaker from either of you. This makes it hard for me as I figured there'd be a deciding bar that swayed me either way. As far as concepts go, I think I give a slight edge to riffic. Very marginal, though, as it's more based on me liking some of the references and thinking they were put together a little better. In terms of writing...I liked that Dank was a bit more personal and direct, but the length of lines was a bit of a put off; the fact there wasn't more content with longer bars is something I'm not a fan of.

Overall vote: riffic. Close battle, but I felt that Dank was missing that one haymaker he needed.
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I got Dank on this one cuz rank and ankh don't rhyme

just kidding (it really doesn't though)

I got Dank on this one cuz I liked his verse more
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just kidding (it really doesn't though)

I got Dank on this one cuz I liked his verse more

They totally rhyme.
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Not tryin to derail the battle thread, but I'm not seein it, man.

Regardless, wouldn't have changed my vote.
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Not tryin to derail the battle thread, but I'm not seein it, man.

Regardless, wouldn't have changed my vote.
the video clearly says ank, the h is silent, dunno where you got the o sound from

its nice to have a discussion about what does and doesnt rhyme in a battle thread of mine without people talking bout my crazy accent though
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its nice to have a discussion about what does and doesnt rhyme in a battle thread of mine without people talking bout my crazy accent though
I've always heard it as an o sound, museums/tv/etc. Didn't watch the video cuz I'm at work lol
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oh so you mention me in a post that i can't see until i vote?

interesting ploy guys!!!!

and it worked. i actually read both of those verses. i gave it to dank but you guys both cool.
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that "sleeps in moderation" shit was deadly for real.
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Old 06-02-2015, 01:45 AM   #20
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that "sleeps in moderation" shit was deadly for real.
agree that was fire made it a tough call
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Dank edged em. Eazy!
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@thatguy @SuckaFreeCashier you two gonna drop a little feedback to go with your vote?

Also someone tag throwback Mike I can't do it on my phone but I feel the ex champ should be in hurr
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Also someone tag throwback Mike I can't do it on my phone but I feel the ex champ should be in hurr
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yeah sorry I meant to get some feedback earlier but i at least wanted to make sure my vote got put in.


Riffic, I thought you started off pretty light the first four. Jesus Camp was a good concept, but I felt like you could have done more with it than just "straighten kids out". Wasn't a fan of the tectonic plates line. I get what you were going for in the setup but the overall idea of eating off tectonic plates was too wtf for me lol. The magic school bus line would have been really crazy.... if i hadn't heard shazo have an extremely similar line (bus/bust in ya gut like a magic school field trip). Not at all trying to say you bit it as that shit happens (like when i took your metal in / meddlin idea ), but it def makes it not hit as hard for me. Thought the next six were definitely your best of the battle. I especially liked the eternal sunshine punch and the voltaire punch, especially how that one was worded. Closer was meh.

overall you took a little bit too long to get going imo, but got into a solid rhythm in the middle/end.

Dank, I thought your opener was fairly light. Thought the punch was a tad bit long winded as well. Next two was really really nice. Really clever way to flip your own name and turn it into a good punch. Next two weren't doing much for me, had solid flow tho. Spitting sand concept was pretty corny to me lol. I liked the idea for the self worth punch but i think you chose ... the wrong thing. everybody should have high self worth! could've replaced it with ego or entitlement or something along those lines to make it more effective. I really liked the moderation punch. Really really clever. Next two were solid, I won't knock you too much for not knowing that SAT is pronounced letter by letter because your an english bum. Like riffic, i thought the closer was meh.

Overall this ended up being very close for me, but I think the highlights in danks verse stood out just a tad bit more than those in riffics verse.
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I basically ended up voting riffic because his verse just read a lot crisper to me. Punches in riffics verse were a little soft overall for a final but still solid. I didn't need any of the links, but had to look up 1 or 2 things that weren't linked. I found that riffic's verse have gotten weaker as the playoffs went on, but started from a very high place so it was still a solid verse.

highlights of danks verse for me was the clever personal approach towards the end. 'sleeps in a moderation' for example was nice. probably the most memorable part of the battle, but there were also some bars I found overly jokey/light.

bar for bar it was pretty even so I ended up voting with the verse I thought read better - some of dank's lines were a little stretched out to the point where the rhyme pattern was getting lost.
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I meant to break this down a few days ago, but better late than never!

This is probably the only riffic verse ever that hasn't gotten any reactions from me. It had me audibly saying "that's light" (no Tay Roc) in places. It just seemed like he had a lot of references thrown in there in the hope that something would resonate with someone. It's sort of like the last round when it felt a little like a poor imitation of riffic. There were a bunch of topics riffic would reference, but without any of riffic's creativity added to them. The closest thing to hitting for me was the Voltaire line, but something about the wording made it not hit that hard.

I didn't think Dank was amazing, but he had a really solid overall verse. I'm still amazed he half-assed his way through a season and managed to take home the title. That's pretty impressive. Dank did what Aye Verb thinks he's doing. As far as the highlights of this verse, there are a number, but I always feel like Dank's great at putting a coherent, well-rounded verse together whether he has individual standout punchlines or not. His writing's sort of unique in that way. But he definitely had a couple heavy hitters here on top of that. I really liked the tox screen bar and the gun so big (RIP) line was pretty crazy too. The "he even sleeps in moderation" bar sealed the deal for me. When I'm working over night, I always wonder why riffic's up at like 4 AM when the forum's dead, so that angle definitely resonated with me. Overall, Dank had a few duds, but they were overshadowed by his positives.

Ultimately, I gave this to Dank clearly. It was a great season by both guys though. It seemed like riffic kinda ran out of steam in the playoffs, but making it to the finals is pretty impressive in its own right. Next season, I'm just gonna take the Dank approach and waltz my way to the title with minimal effort. We'll see how that goes...
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I think we can safely call this one. congrats to @Dank Schrader for being the season 2 champion, and according to the RBL by laws, he is legally entitled to either @riffic 's wife or first born daughter.
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Gave it to Dank. Rif didnt came hard as I expect his verse was really light. Dank did his shits but some parts didn't hit hard due to long syllables. Overall good battle congrats to Dank for winnin the season.
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