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Old 02-13-2015, 02:03 AM   #1
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JShazo vs. Lil Ill

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Shaz dont compare to ill, I'm way better with the pen this isn't fair to ill
Role of funeral worker I'm setting up the plot to Bury ill(burial)
J known for raw aggression, penning bars that's beyond progression
Ill known for a demeanor that seems borderline depressive, and a weird Ekelon obsession
The shots I send'll get rid of ill and I got the dose prescribed with a full clip
This dude, shit,bar for bar I'd kill em and have Phillips head in a box, that's a tool kit
If he talking shit,i'll grab the chopper and let some shells plow through his larynx
So duck or die nasty if I catch Phil with the K like walking in on Willie Robertson's parents
Think he can hang wit shaz, please pray for em,this ill is terminal, aint no saving him
Ginsu blade grazing em, leave Phillips head split looking like dialogue from a south park Canadian
Real talk the repetitiveness about battle addict and the rappers on this site you is so insane
A stoner, he wouldn't hesitate to blow Dank, shit I bet he'd take a golden shower from Golden Flamez
Now back to what I do, if we boxing bet you leaving with your mug cracked, bruised
So around me act cool or i"ll stick Lil with Tommy and it aint half of the Rugrats crew
See these self proclaimed accolades you got not shit, I guarantee that no one is a fan of you
Reality check, you always talking bars, but my lightest bars you couldn't hold a candle to ,,,,,,TIME!

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Ayo! I said...I'm battling JShazo.... Wow yo...You're way hard bro.
nah hoe... I'll shove a lawn Nome down your jaw bone, I'm flyer than Scarborough.
You're awful, so soft-core, going against me is crazy now you lost all your marbles.
Your girlfriend sounds really fucking hot...just too bad I can't say the same thing for your bars thoa.
You got to just go, you're sloppy and broke, you will not take the throne cause I'm obliviously dope.
It doesn't matter what he wrote cause I'm smoking (Js) bud's good at making us (ha) and (z) (o)ooh!
(*Triple entendre*)( I spelled your name bitch!)
You think your soft ass punch lines will kill me? Take this L, forget it.
I got a Gun So Big.... It takes an hour to load like an AOL connection.
I'll land something to your head with a *combination* you feel *safe* clown?
I can tell this person is a filthy fucking bitch just by the look of J... Wow! (*J Woww*)
When I'm stabbing next/*necks* then what in the fuck you gonna say now?
My *bars* go over your head like you're blind folded at a playground,
(so I had to put it in subtitles for this gay child)
You fucking *Vulture*, don't get *Wild Turkey*, who you Mocking J?/*Mocking Jay*
I'm surprised you didn't *Duck*, I know Kung-Fu so I'll kick you with a *Common Crane*
Your bitch loves my *Wood pecker*, I got the *Goose* ready, can you tell what will follow?
She spreads *Eagle*, should of seen the way that she Blew J/*Blue Jay*, what a hell of a *Swallow!*
Mother Fucker I'm nice! Don't even bother flipping the bird... BARS
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Old 02-13-2015, 02:19 AM   #2
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both kinda fire
gotta re-read and vote then

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both kinda fire
gotta re-read and vote then

good shit fam
That last sentence was a triple entendre too. Like Don't bother flipping my bird bars, I'm nice don't start flipping the bird at me and don't bother flipping the bird/flipping his girl over cause I fucked her there too. LOL!
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That last sentence was a triple entendre too. Like Don't bother flipping my bird bars, I'm nice don't start flipping the bird at me and don't bother flipping the bird/flipping his girl over cause I fucked her there too. LOL!
boy you let battle rap take over your saltine mind

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@JShazo yo I don't care what anyone says cuz this was a Tie. I felt like we Won. I felt like we both had gave it 110% this time. Metaphors punchlines word play over the head bars. It's all jam packed into this one.
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Nah don't say that. This was a classic. Probably the greatest text battle I've done. JShazo is pretty sick with these text battles. We both put in 110% for this one.
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@JShazo yo I don't care what anyone says cuz this was a Tie. I felt like we Won. I felt like we both had gave it 110% this time. Metaphors punchlines word play over the head bars. It's all jam packed into this one.
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this is a good one girls
I gotta think on this one

you both gave a top notch performance - no bullshit
lil ill surprised me to be honest
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Old 02-13-2015, 12:50 PM   #10
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@I am LIL ILL won......
Jshazo was on his neck though
took me 4 reads from both to decide


You're awful, so soft-core, going against me is crazy now you lost all your marbles.
Your girlfriend sounds really fucking hot...just too bad I can't say the same thing for your bars thoa.


You think your soft ass punch lines will kill me? Take this L, forget it.
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Old 02-13-2015, 03:32 PM   #11
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voted for shazo because his style translates better written out

Lil Ill was right there with him so the deciding vote was based on whose lyrics translated better written. Lil Ill's strength is his delivery but his writing has gotten a lot better. props to both
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This the best I have seen of Phil and as usual shazo was swinging . Will edit in a breakdown when I'm off work.
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phil said he was obliviously dope and detailed shazo getting head from his hot, for some reason spread eagled girlfriend

shazo by a lot
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@I am LIL ILL, can you breakdown what "flyer than Scarborough" means? I need to know before I cast my vote.
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phil had a couple good lines, but also just as many that were just weird. I liked the AOL connection shit. shazo was cookin in this though, some nice flips. only one I didn't like was the tommy/rugrats bar. hard to believe people still doin that concept tbh, but the rest of the verse was fire. voting J
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shazo is dope but one of his main issues is wording. a lot of his lines just have excess words in them that make the flow choppy and read too long

i went through and reworded things to (imo) make it flow better. made it small so it wouldn't take up the whole page

Shaz dont compare to ill, I'm better with the pen - this ain't fair to ill
I've got the role of a funeral worker, settin' the plot to bury ill
J known for raw aggression, penning bars beyond progression
While Ill known for a depressed demeanor and an Ekelon obsession

The shots I send'll get rid of ill; this dose prescribed with a full clip
This dude’s shit, I'll put Phillip's head in a box like a tool kit
And if I catch Phil with the K like Willie Robertson's parents,
I'll grab the chopper and let some shells plow through his larynx
Think he can hang, please pray for em; this ill’s terminal, there’s no saving him
Ginsu blade grazing em, leave Phillip’s head split like that South Park Canadian

Real talk, your dickriding of audio battlers is so insane
He’s a stoner, blowin’ Dank between golden showers from Golden Flamez

Now back to what I do; if we boxing, I’ll leave your mug cracked ’n bruised
So around me, act cool, or I’ll stick Lil with Tommy like half the Rugrats crew
These self proclaimed accolades you got ain't shit, I guarantee no one’s a fan of you
Reality check, you always talking bars, when even my lightest bars you can't hold a candle to… TIME!
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This is the best writtens ive ever seen from Lil Ill.. Actually gave Shazo a run for his money. Gotta read this again. I got Shazo takin this on first read though.
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shazo is dope but one of his main issues is wording. a lot of his lines just have excess words in them that make the flow choppy and read too long

i went through and reworded things to (imo) make it flow better. made it small so it wouldn't take up the whole page

Shaz dont compare to ill, I'm better with the pen - this ain't fair to ill
I've got the role of a funeral worker, settin' the plot to bury ill
J known for raw aggression, penning bars beyond progression
While Ill known for a depressed demeanor and an Ekelon obsession

The shots I send'll get rid of ill; this dose prescribed with a full clip
This dudeís shit, I'll put Phillip's head in a box like a tool kit
And if I catch Phil with the K like Willie Robertson's parents,
I'll grab the chopper and let some shells plow through his larynx
Think he can hang, please pray for em; this illís terminal, thereís no saving him
Ginsu blade grazing em, leave Phillipís head split like that South Park Canadian

Real talk, your dickriding of audio battlers is so insane
Heís a stoner, blowiní Dank between golden showers from Golden Flamez

Now back to what I do; if we boxing, Iíll leave your mug cracked ín bruised
So around me, act cool, or Iíll stick Lil with Tommy like half the Rugrats crew
These self proclaimed accolades you got ain't shit, I guarantee no oneís a fan of you
Reality check, you always talking bars, when even my lightest bars you can't hold a candle toÖ TIME!

I have to agree the Phillip Canadian one stood out the most that could've been a haymaker if it were cut short

It was still a crazy bar

Other than that amazing name flips as usual and lil Ill surprised me with his writing

I read a couple of times but shazos punches hit harder for me

Great battle from both



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I mean it's debatable it could go either way. If you noticed on a few lines we wrote similar shit or had a similar metaphor format.
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After a couple reads I have Shazo taking it. The only punch that didn't hit for me was Willie Robertsons parents. Other than that everything was pretty dope. Closer was fire and the audio battlers line was hilarious. Phil definitely stepped his writing up here, so major props for that. I might need you to explain the triple entendre... because i don't see one meaning out of it

Edit: I also agree with Riffic. Wording is one of the only things holding you back from being the best on the site.
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thought shazo took it easy, no real contest here. and shazo, heed riffics advice cause its good
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First off props Phil for showing out and killing shit... I can relate to the critism on my part. My main issue is I don't actually rap. In just type up shit talking so flow and structure not in my favor. But I'll take the advice n try to improve. Ammo alert
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Real talk in like @riffic verse a lot better
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After a couple reads I have Shazo taking it. The only punch that didn't hit for me was Willie Robertsons parents. Other than that everything was pretty dope. Closer was fire and the audio battlers line was hilarious. Phil definitely stepped his writing up here, so major props for that. I might need you to explain the triple entendre... because i don't see one meaning out of it

Edit: I also agree with Riffic. Wording is one of the only things holding you back from being the best on the site.
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Real talk in like @riffic verse a lot better
word man, the concepts / punches are there, just gotta get the flow down
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Shaz dont compare to ill, I'm way better with the pen this isn't fair to ill
Role of funeral worker I'm setting up the plot to Bury ill(burial)
nice, solid start
J known for raw aggression, penning bars that's beyond progression
Ill known for a demeanor that seems borderline depressive, and a weird Ekelon obsession
lol
The shots I send'll get rid of ill and I got the dose prescribed with a full clip
This dude, shit,bar for bar I'd kill em and have Phillips head in a box, that's a tool kit
damn, punch is fire, full clip tool clip rhyme sounds a little of to me but that's a minor
If he talking shit,i'll grab the chopper and let some shells plow through his larynx
So duck or die nasty if I catch Phil with the K like walking in on Willie Robertson's parents
never watched the show
Think he can hang wit shaz, please pray for em,this ill is terminal, aint no saving him
Ginsu blade grazing em, leave Phillips head split looking like dialogue from a south park Canadian
this is a really good idea, and the set up has some cool shit in it, but south park canadian just reads weird
Real talk the repetitiveness about battle addict and the rappers on this site you is so insane
A stoner, he wouldn't hesitate to blow Dank, shit I bet he'd take a golden shower from Golden Flamez
hahahaha oh damn! This is lies, phil's never given me more than a hand job
Now back to what I do, if we boxing bet you leaving with your mug cracked, bruised
So around me act cool or i"ll stick Lil with Tommy and it aint half of the Rugrats crew
ok
See these self proclaimed accolades you got not shit, I guarantee that no one is a fan of you
Reality check, you always talking bars, but my lightest bars you couldn't hold a candle to ,,,,,,TIME!
ok

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Ayo! I said...I'm battling JShazo.... Wow yo...You're way hard bro.
nah hoe... I'll shove a lawn Nome down your jaw bone, I'm flyer than Scarborough.
rhyms on point, flyer than an airline company is a bit played though
You're awful, so soft-core, going against me is crazy now you lost all your marbles.
Your girlfriend sounds really fucking hot...just too bad I can't say the same thing for your bars thoa.
ok
You got to just go, you're sloppy and broke, you will not take the throne cause I'm obliviously dope.
It doesn't matter what he wrote cause I'm smoking (Js) bud's good at making us (ha) and (z) (o)ooh!
this works in the text format but its not a sentance you could ever use "hey man I got this chronic its so good it makes you ha and z"
You think your soft ass punch lines will kill me? Take this L, forget it.
I got a Gun So Big.... It takes an hour to load like an AOL connection.
dope
I'll land something to your head with a *combination* you feel *safe* clown?
I can tell this person is a filthy fucking bitch just by the look of J... Wow! (*J Woww*)
is this jersey shore? Sounds ok
When I'm stabbing next/*necks* then what in the fuck you gonna say now?
My *bars* go over your head like you're blind folded at a playground,
(so I had to put it in subtitles for this gay child)
meh
You fucking *Vulture*, don't get *Wild Turkey*, who you Mocking J?/*Mocking Jay*
I'm surprised you didn't *Duck*, I know Kung-Fu so I'll kick you with a *Common Crane*
bang bang
Your bitch loves my *Wood pecker*, I got the *Goose* ready, can you tell what will follow?
She spreads *Eagle*, should of seen the way that she Blew J/*Blue Jay*, what a hell of a *Swallow!*
Mother Fucker I'm nice! Don't even bother flipping the bird... BARS
the bird shit went on too long, the mocking jay bit was dope and helped the first 2 work but dragining it out lost momentum



Dope battle, got shazo being slightly more consistant, ill defo stepped his game up from previous text attempts, you should do the rbl this season phil, will only help your audio shit to sharpen your pen
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@JShazo

Shaz dont compare to ill, I'm way better with the pen this isn't fair to ill
Role of funeral worker I'm setting up the plot to Bury ill(burial)
nice, solid start
J known for raw aggression, penning bars that's beyond progression
Ill known for a demeanor that seems borderline depressive, and a weird Ekelon obsession
lol
The shots I send'll get rid of ill and I got the dose prescribed with a full clip
This dude, shit,bar for bar I'd kill em and have Phillips head in a box, that's a tool kit
damn, punch is fire, full clip tool clip rhyme sounds a little of to me but that's a minor
If he talking shit,i'll grab the chopper and let some shells plow through his larynx
So duck or die nasty if I catch Phil with the K like walking in on Willie Robertson's parents
never watched the show
Think he can hang wit shaz, please pray for em,this ill is terminal, aint no saving him
Ginsu blade grazing em, leave Phillips head split looking like dialogue from a south park Canadian
this is a really good idea, and the set up has some cool shit in it, but south park canadian just reads weird
Real talk the repetitiveness about battle addict and the rappers on this site you is so insane
A stoner, he wouldn't hesitate to blow Dank, shit I bet he'd take a golden shower from Golden Flamez
hahahaha oh damn! This is lies, phil's never given me more than a hand job
Now back to what I do, if we boxing bet you leaving with your mug cracked, bruised
So around me act cool or i"ll stick Lil with Tommy and it aint half of the Rugrats crew
ok
See these self proclaimed accolades you got not shit, I guarantee that no one is a fan of you
Reality check, you always talking bars, but my lightest bars you couldn't hold a candle to ,,,,,,TIME!
ok

@I am LIL ILL

Ayo! I said...I'm battling JShazo.... Wow yo...You're way hard bro.
nah hoe... I'll shove a lawn Nome down your jaw bone, I'm flyer than Scarborough.
rhyms on point, flyer than an airline company is a bit played though
You're awful, so soft-core, going against me is crazy now you lost all your marbles.
Your girlfriend sounds really fucking hot...just too bad I can't say the same thing for your bars thoa.
ok
You got to just go, you're sloppy and broke, you will not take the throne cause I'm obliviously dope.
It doesn't matter what he wrote cause I'm smoking (Js) bud's good at making us (ha) and (z) (o)ooh!
this works in the text format but its not a sentance you could ever use "hey man I got this chronic its so good it makes you ha and z"
You think your soft ass punch lines will kill me? Take this L, forget it.
I got a Gun So Big.... It takes an hour to load like an AOL connection.
dope
I'll land something to your head with a *combination* you feel *safe* clown?
I can tell this person is a filthy fucking bitch just by the look of J... Wow! (*J Woww*)
is this jersey shore? Sounds ok
When I'm stabbing next/*necks* then what in the fuck you gonna say now?
My *bars* go over your head like you're blind folded at a playground,
(so I had to put it in subtitles for this gay child)
meh
You fucking *Vulture*, don't get *Wild Turkey*, who you Mocking J?/*Mocking Jay*
I'm surprised you didn't *Duck*, I know Kung-Fu so I'll kick you with a *Common Crane*
bang bang
Your bitch loves my *Wood pecker*, I got the *Goose* ready, can you tell what will follow?
She spreads *Eagle*, should of seen the way that she Blew J/*Blue Jay*, what a hell of a *Swallow!*
Mother Fucker I'm nice! Don't even bother flipping the bird... BARS
the bird shit went on too long, the mocking jay bit was dope and helped the first 2 work but dragining it out lost momentum



Dope battle, got shazo being slightly more consistant, ill defo stepped his game up from previous text attempts, you should do the rbl this season phil, will only help your audio shit to sharpen your pen
yeah this was close I mean it could go either way. I got an new audio battle popping soon. I'm going against The Chef. He is busy but at this up and coming effect we will have this thing going. I got my audio battle verse done. His name is the Chef so of course I'm going Gordan Ramsey on em. It's funny cause I'm using an English accent this whole battle.
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@DanK Schradar I see JShazo beat you too. Damn man can anyone beat this guy at a text battle? He's been on a killing spree as of late.
http://rmbva.com/dank-schrader-vs-js...ki-t16117.html
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@Dank Schrader I see JShazo beat you too. Damn man can anyone beat this guy at a text battle? He's been on a killing spree as of late.
http://rmbva.com/dank-schrader-vs-js...ki-t16117.html[/QUOTE]
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I know man. When it was all said and done I felt like my last 4 bars was better just by a bit. I was close to a tie. It is what it is I can't hate on em cause he did good too. Maybe next time around I'll cook up something so line for line it's no debate.
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@Dank Schrader I see JShazo beat you too. Damn man can anyone beat this guy at a text battle? He's been on a killing spree as of late.
http://rmbva.com/dank-schrader-vs-js...ki-t16117.html
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Yeah shazos the dude, I bodied him in a wrestling bars battle though
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