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Battle *Flossed Out III Semi-final* KBomb vs SuckaFreeCashier


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Old 10-30-2015, 12:30 AM   #1
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*Flossed Out III Semi-final* KBomb vs SuckaFreeCashier

@KBomb
Sucka’s lost to half his opponents (facts), still says he’s “climbin’ his way to the top”
Now he wants K, too? This lame’ll get dropped by one of the highest kill rates on the block
When that fifth’s squeezed, he'll look like a mix between Swiss cheese and mincemeat
Have your brain painted on the ceiling like Michelangelo did the Sistine
Complete overkill for this bitch, even poison the snack food he’s eatin’
Leave him black, blue from beatin’s, Glasglow smile, blades slash through his cheeks
Numerous stab wounds, he’s leakin’, then the strap blasts dude to pieces
Now this Cash fool’s deceased, but still drown him to round out that Rasputin treatment
Still hittin’ Dank up daily? Didn’t lose enough in your first three battles Sucka?
Forever begging to get punished like ‘thank you sir may I have another’
He smacks you senseless repeatedly, multiple beatings dealt, and yet
You keep crawlin’ back to him, proves you’re a bitch with no self-respect
You’re overhyped Sucka, a rhymin’ bitch gassed to death like Sylvia Plath
You’re losin, face facts, s’like I’m rude to wait staff, one arm raised and I’m willing to snap
You don’t stand a chance, I’ve destroyed dudes you couldn’t beat on your best day
Matching you and I is suicide, Bomb’ll kill you since you’re eager to get slain


@SuckaFreeCashier
K wants multis>punches; that ain't something new, get a fuckin clue
If he try to eat off that flow he’ll go down the tubes like Augustus Gloop
They’ll be sayin poor K, but we all know why it happened
You passed by a smoke n chef without any fire rappin
We gave you Willy, Vanilla; and ya got bodied in a match for the cultcha
Cuz it’s like Milli Vanilli, the bars you was spittin didn’t match ya persona
Every kiss begins with K? Cool, taste this clip in ya mouth
I’m talkin to you K, should be used to a cashier givin him pounds
Why he pretending he bestin me like he’ll whip out the tech n squeeze?
Only time he postin’ with a nine is when he fucks up parenthesis
I show up in NY, n y’d he give his girl up, I mean she better than most
Oh I get it, bomb squad got em covered when he ready to blow
The way you said lines gory and how you’ll “dead guys” – corny
That talk a make my crew snap and then fight like it’s West-Side Story
This like Jordan vs Mutombo, ‘Free throws, I could hit em with closed eyes
But once the battles over, everyone a be talkin bout the Body like Nome 5

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Old 10-30-2015, 12:31 AM   #2
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Old 10-30-2015, 02:29 AM   #3
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Old 10-31-2015, 09:27 PM   #4
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v/KBOMB

Dope showing by both. Some solid punches.

I got KBOMB tho. money got a wicked flow wit some witty punches. Never knew the corny faggot had bars but he do so props. Sucka had some shit too but he was a roller coaster up and down the entire verse. It's like every OTHER line was hot... So for me his inconsistency costed him the W here.

Props to both - some memorable bars, guys... Good shit

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Old 10-31-2015, 09:55 PM   #5
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yo kbomb sick multis dope punches but I spotted some filler there watch out for that

yo sucka dope punches but some were a bit corny tho but no filler so thats good


.......................|.Kbomb.|.Sucka.|

Punches............|....7.5...|....8.....|
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Flow.................|....8.....|....6.8...|
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Rhymes.............|....9.....|....8.....|
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Wordplay...........|....8.....|....8.5...|
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Avg...................|.8.125..|.7.825...|


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Old 11-01-2015, 06:09 PM   #6
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Gave it to Sucka due to being more accessible off first read, and having punches that just resonated with me more. KBomb had a little more depth to his material with his references and Dank breakdown- so I can definitely see the case for him taking this- but Sucka's material was just a tad bit cleaner and sharper.

Dope clash, both of you brought the heat.

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Old 11-01-2015, 07:41 PM   #7
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This was REALLY good. On both ends. It's clear this is a semifinals match.

I actually read this days ago and exited the thread cuz I planned on voting after a second read and completely forgot to read it over a second time.

Now that I'm here, it's still really tough, but after being a bit more familiar with the lines, they all still hit, but KBomb's were just slightly harder to me, and I think that might be because of the way he set the multis and etc.

It let his bars flow better, which was a good move since the lines are so long.

Anyway, yeah, my vote is to k
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Old 11-02-2015, 06:56 AM   #8
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I gave this to SFC. KBomb's writing was really strong and a lot of the rhyme schemes were really dope, but he didn't have the type of big moments SuckaFree did. I thought he spent a little too much space with the direct personals. He had some good personal concepts that made for creative punches, but the opener and "you're a bitch with no self-respect" lines didn't do anything for me.

SuckaFree had a couple duds too, but managed to come up with the three biggest highlights of the battle. That August Gloop line was fire and that parentheses bar was inexplicably good. The Westside Story line just finished it off. Really good battle all around, but SFC got this one.
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@KBomb
Sucka’s lost to half his opponents (facts), still says he’s “climbin’ his way to the top”
Now he wants K, too? This lame’ll get dropped by one of the highest kill rates on the block
K2 was a good concept/flip, but the punch wording does not do enough to relate specifically to K2. I understand people die on K2, but there needs to be more to make this line work imo
When that fifth’s squeezed, he'll look like a mix between Swiss cheese and mincemeat
Have your brain painted on the ceiling like Michelangelo did the Sistine
[b]at first I thought this was way to basic, but when I clicked the link I saw the 'brain' tie in. pretty solid.
Complete overkill for this bitch, even poison the snack food he’s eatin’
Leave him black, blue from beatin’s, Glasglow smile, blades slash through his cheeks
Numerous stab wounds, he’s leakin’, then the strap blasts dude to pieces
Now this Cash fool’s deceased, but still drown him to round out that Rasputin treatment
the whole segment was pretty cool. it's one of those endless multis where tbh a lot of kinda forced and/or filler to the point where you know the closing multi will be something cool - and it was. Yeah I would just say 'cash fool's deceased and black, blue from beatins both came off a little forced.
Still hittin’ Dank up daily? Didn’t lose enough in your first three battles Sucka?
Forever begging to get punished like ‘thank you sir may I have another’
He smacks you senseless repeatedly, multiple beatings dealt, and yet
You keep crawlin’ back to him, proves you’re a bitch with no self-respect
fair enough angle to take but nothing with much of an edge to it here
You’re overhyped Sucka, a rhymin’ bitch gassed to death like Sylvia Plath
You’re losin, face facts, s’like I’m rude to wait staff, one arm raised and I’m willing to snap
this was dope, great setup and well executed as well
You don’t stand a chance, I’ve destroyed dudes you couldn’t beat on your best day
Matching you and I is suicide, Bomb’ll kill you since you’re eager to get slain
I think I'm sleepin on something here, I don't see much goin on


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K wants multis>punches; that ain't something new, get a fuckin clue
If he try to eat off that flow he’ll go down the tubes like Augustus Gloop
this is really close to being extra dope, the concept feels slightly stretched, but still solid.
They’ll be sayin poor K, but we all know why it happened
You passed by a smoke n chef without any fire rappin
I am a little tired, but I don't know what you were goin for here for the punch. the setup I got though and it was extra fire - my kinda line
We gave you Willy, Vanilla; and ya got bodied in a match for the cultcha
Cuz it’s like Milli Vanilli, the bars you was spittin didn’t match ya persona
[b]didn't quite work for me. lip syncing and bars not matching persona are kinda two different things
Every kiss begins with K? Cool, taste this clip in ya mouth
I’m talkin to you K, should be used to a cashier givin him pounds
both decent k-flips, but back to back it hit harder
Why he pretending he bestin me like he’ll whip out the tech n squeeze?
Only time he postin’ with a nine is when he fucks up parenthesis
haha cool
I show up in NY, n y’d he give his girl up, I mean she better than most
Oh I get it, bomb squad got em covered when he ready to blow
came off kinda weird to me... definately a good concept in here but... what does the punch mean. and just read the setup line outloud without the wordplay and it - reads like 3 sentance fragments that barely get your idea across.
The way you said lines gory and how you’ll “dead guys” – corny
That talk a make my crew snap and then fight like it’s West-Side Story
said lines gory = pretty forced. Been trying to figure the west side story line - apart from crews fighting, not sure where the snap comes in. im sure im sleepin on something
This like Jordan vs Mutombo, ‘Free throws, I could hit em with closed eyes
But once the battles over, everyone a be talkin bout the Body like Nome 5
dope setup and closer

for me this was slyvia plath/willin to snap, flow in the rasputin sequence and sistine VS Augustus Gloop, jordan free throws, clip in ya mouth, cashier w/pounds. really hard to call - very even - but I have to give the slightest edge to sfc just on punch count
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thought sucka edged that on first read tbh but both were solid.
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This is kinda fucked up on my part -

Voted on my phone and meant to vote sucka but clicked kbomb - fuck me right.

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This is kinda fucked up on my part -

Voted on my phone and meant to vote sucka but clicked kbomb - fuck me right.

Will edit w breakdown when on computer so I don't duck something else up.
I'll fix the poll.
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Edged it to KBomb. SFC had better punches, but KBomb's round read a little more cohesively to me. Super close tho.
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yeah i'd say since suckas cool with it, if its still tied by the deadline go ahead and cast the deciding vote
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Sucka’s lost to half his opponents (facts), still says he’s “climbin’ his way to the top”
Now he wants K, too? This lame’ll get dropped by one of the highest kill rates on the block
Cool for an opener.. Decent reference but didnt hit too much for me.
When that fifth’s squeezed, he'll look like a mix between Swiss cheese and mincemeat
Have your brain painted on the ceiling like Michelangelo did the Sistine
Feel like this punch has been done before.
Complete overkill for this bitch, even poison the snack food he’s eatin’
Leave him black, blue from beatin’s, Glasglow smile, blades slash through his cheeks
This punch was alright. Wasnt feelin the set up though. Snack food hes eatin just seems like its thrown in there.
Numerous stab wounds, he’s leakin’, then the strap blasts dude to pieces
Now this Cash fool’s deceased, but still drown him to round out that Rasputin treatment
This was fire.
Still hittin’ Dank up daily? Didn’t lose enough in your first three battles Sucka?
Forever begging to get punished like ‘thank you sir may I have another’
This one killed me. Actually laughed at this shit
He smacks you senseless repeatedly, multiple beatings dealt, and yet
You keep crawlin’ back to him, proves you’re a bitch with no self-respect
This is one of those real talk bars. No real heavy hitting concept here but still hit for me because of the truth and the real talk aspect. Good shit.
You’re overhyped Sucka, a rhymin’ bitch gassed to death like Sylvia Plath
You’re losin, face facts, s’like I’m rude to wait staff, one arm raised and I’m willing to snap
mmmmmmm Fireee
You don’t stand a chance, I’ve destroyed dudes you couldn’t beat on your best day
Matching you and I is suicide, Bomb’ll kill you since you’re eager to get slain
Decent closer. If you flipped this and the willing to snap bar it would have hit harder for me as a whole but this was still nice regardless.

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K wants multis>punches; that ain't something new, get a fuckin clue
If he try to eat off that flow he’ll go down the tubes like Augustus Gloop
Not bad.
They’ll be sayin poor K, but we all know why it happened
You passed by a smoke n chef without any fire rappin
Meh not feelin this.
We gave you Willy, Vanilla; and ya got bodied in a match for the cultcha
Cuz it’s like Milli Vanilli, the bars you was spittin didn’t match ya persona
This was alright. Feelin it.
Every kiss begins with K? Cool, taste this clip in ya mouth
I’m talkin to you K, should be used to a cashier givin him pounds
Fire. Kiss begins with K shit is something that hasnt been used im pretty sure so this was real nice.
Why he pretending he bestin me like he’ll whip out the tech n squeeze?
Only time he postin’ with a nine is when he fucks up parenthesis
lmao not bad
I show up in NY, n y’d he give his girl up, I mean she better than most
Oh I get it, bomb squad got em covered when he ready to blow
Would have been alright if it was worded better, but as is not really feelin it.
The way you said lines gory and how you’ll “dead guys” – corny
That talk a make my crew snap and then fight like it’s West-Side Story
Said lines gory? lmao. Hmm I dunno bout this one. I get the reference but it didnt really work for me the way you formed it up.. Seemed like a real easy reach.
This like Jordan vs Mutombo, ‘Free throws, I could hit em with closed eyes
But once the battles over, everyone a be talkin bout the Body like Nome 5
This was cool. Not a bad closer at all.

This was a fire battle god damn theres a lot of quotables in there. KBombs last half of his verse pretty much everything was hitting for me. Rasputin bar and willing to snap were heaters. Sucka had the Kiss with K reference and the closer which was pretty nice. Imma have to edge this one to KBomb on consistency as his last half was pretty nice, and Sucka seemed to be up and down the whole verse for me. Punch count was about the same so I could see this going either way. Nice battle here tho.
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Voted @KBomb, more of his bars hit imo. Rasputin and wait staff bars especially were the hottest of the clash. Closer felt underwhelming though - not sure if I'm sleeping or not. Taking nothing away from @SuckaFreeCashier, though; that parenthesis bar was crack.
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