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Old 03-16-2014, 08:57 PM   #1
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Dark Magic vs Forensics

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Let's fuckin' go.

@Dark Magic
Eagle always on my waist, that .50 caliber
Cause I carry around more ki's than a janitor

I'd laugh right in they face if someone told me you're a threat
I'll toss you and then stomp you like a finished cigarette

He tried to bring the heater, we'll see how much of a g he is
When I let that eagle eat his guts out like his name is Prometheus

My crew out in the desert, already diggin out ya hole
I'll hit you with the lighter like I'm putting out the bowl

Leave your face bent on the pavement, I'll break this fruit
They'll have ya body lined out, like a latex suit

I don't wanna hear that tough talk or multisyllabic filler
I will hunt down forensics like the Christopher Killer

This battle? He lost, like he stuck in a labyrinth
And he dead once I spark shots like we drinking absinthe

@Forensics
Got ak's to spray at skulls, ready to be harming son
Idgaf its not october but this pumpkin rip ur top off like craving one
Im always brawling & starting shit w/ my pistol
Wen it come to beef magazine nothing but the ones fabricated in a vibes issue
I stay robbing & murdering, I never hide my kills
Only thing magic jack is another man off for money to pay for his wifi bill
U never gotten head, stop w/ the gay lies fuck
No bitch'll touch magic johnson they treat that shit like he has the aids virus
ur a pussy noone fears & im sending back clips
Only ppl afraid of the dark are little kids & even they grow out of that shit
Ur to over the hill to fight, bullets im sending from uzi's
Cant scrap ur to oldboy & i'll give ur neck a crazy twist like the end of the movie
Ur moms fucks anyone for doe, all types can score in her hole
Those walls seen more immagrants in & out it at night then the boarder patrol
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Old 03-17-2014, 01:22 AM   #2
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@Dark Magic
Eagle always on my waist, that .50 caliber
Cause I carry around more ki's than a janitor
Didnt hit for me, pretty basic
I'd laugh right in they face if someone told me you're a threat
I'll toss you and then stomp you like a finished cigarette
Not bad, but doesn't have that 'mmmm' factor
He tried to bring the heater, we'll see how much of a g he is
When I let that eagle eat his guts out like his name is Prometheus
Don't you mean vulture? I get the eagle/gun play tho. Ive heard 'g he is/prometheus' multi before
My crew out in the desert, already diggin out ya hole
I'll hit you with the lighter like I'm putting out the bowl
Okay, keepin it goin with the gun bars
Leave your face bent on the pavement, I'll break this fruit
They'll have ya body lined out, like a latex suit
Break this fruit is a pretty bad set-up, punch wasn't anything special either
I don't wanna hear that tough talk or multisyllabic filler
I will hunt down forensics like the Christopher Killer
Best line of the verse, could of been expanded on tho
This battle? He lost, like he stuck in a labyrinth
And he dead once I spark shots like we drinking absinthe
Decent closer, work on connecting your set-ups/punches tho
@Forensics
Got ak's to spray at skulls, ready to be harming son
Idgaf its not october but this pumpkin rip ur top off like craving one
Like the punch, set-up could have been improved
Im always brawling & starting shit w/ my pistol
Wen it come to beef magazine nothing but the ones fabricated in a vibes issue
Line was a little drug out
I stay robbing & murdering, I never hide my kills
Only thing magic jack is another man off for money to pay for his wifi bill
This one flowed nicely for me, basic punch but read real well
U never gotten head, stop w/ the gay lies fuck
No bitch'll touch magic johnson they treat that shit like he has the aids virus
lies fuck/virus aint the best multi but line was decent compared to others
ur a pussy noone fears & im sending back clips
Only ppl afraid of the dark are little kids & even they grow out of that shit
lmao I like the punch but the set-up really holds the bar back
Ur to over the hill to fight, bullets im sending from uzi's
Cant scrap ur to oldboy & i'll give ur neck a crazy twist like the end of the movie
Decent, but twist/end of the movie bars are a little played
Ur moms fucks anyone for doe, all types can score in her hole
Those walls seen more immagrants in & out it at night then the boarder patrol
Closer didn't hit. Weak elementary style set-up and played punch

Both battlers weren't very strong, there was a low-key bar here and there. Neither battler has set-ups AT ALL. I know my set-ups aren't the best but please try to improve on that some of them here were pretty bad. Battle was really close but I'm givin it to Forensics for the fact he had one or two more quality bars. Dark Magic had a lot of played shit, as did Forensics but Magic's verse was really unoriginal. Best bar of the battle was Forensics "even they grow out of that shit" not bad at all, but improve on the set-ups.
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Old 03-17-2014, 02:09 AM   #3
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@Dark Magic
Eagle always on my waist, that .50 caliber
Cause I carry around more ki's than a janitor
Didnt hit for me, pretty basic
I'd laugh right in they face if someone told me you're a threat
I'll toss you and then stomp you like a finished cigarette
Not bad, but doesn't have that 'mmmm' factor
He tried to bring the heater, we'll see how much of a g he is
When I let that eagle eat his guts out like his name is Prometheus
Don't you mean vulture? I get the eagle/gun play tho. Ive heard 'g he is/prometheus' multi before
My crew out in the desert, already diggin out ya hole
I'll hit you with the lighter like I'm putting out the bowl
Okay, keepin it goin with the gun bars
Leave your face bent on the pavement, I'll break this fruit
They'll have ya body lined out, like a latex suit
Break this fruit is a pretty bad set-up, punch wasn't anything special either
I don't wanna hear that tough talk or multisyllabic filler
I will hunt down forensics like the Christopher Killer
Best line of the verse, could of been expanded on tho
This battle? He lost, like he stuck in a labyrinth
And he dead once I spark shots like we drinking absinthe
Decent closer, work on connecting your set-ups/punches tho
@Forensics
Got ak's to spray at skulls, ready to be harming son
Idgaf its not october but this pumpkin rip ur top off like craving one
Like the punch, set-up could have been improved
Im always brawling & starting shit w/ my pistol
Wen it come to beef magazine nothing but the ones fabricated in a vibes issue
Line was a little drug out
I stay robbing & murdering, I never hide my kills
Only thing magic jack is another man off for money to pay for his wifi bill
This one flowed nicely for me, basic punch but read real well
U never gotten head, stop w/ the gay lies fuck
No bitch'll touch magic johnson they treat that shit like he has the aids virus
lies fuck/virus aint the best multi but line was decent compared to others
ur a pussy noone fears & im sending back clips
Only ppl afraid of the dark are little kids & even they grow out of that shit
lmao I like the punch but the set-up really holds the bar back
Ur to over the hill to fight, bullets im sending from uzi's
Cant scrap ur to oldboy & i'll give ur neck a crazy twist like the end of the movie
Decent, but twist/end of the movie bars are a little played
Ur moms fucks anyone for doe, all types can score in her hole
Those walls seen more immagrants in & out it at night then the boarder patrol
Closer didn't hit. Weak elementary style set-up and played punch

Both battlers weren't very strong, there was a low-key bar here and there. Neither battler has set-ups AT ALL. I know my set-ups aren't the best but please try to improve on that some of them here were pretty bad. Battle was really close but I'm givin it to Forensics for the fact he had one or two more quality bars. Dark Magic had a lot of played shit, as did Forensics but Magic's verse was really unoriginal. Best bar of the battle was Forensics "even they grow out of that shit" not bad at all, but improve on the set-ups.
I'll be honest I didn't like anything I wrote that much except for the Prometheus bar I thought that was cold.
And naw it was an eagle in the story, I double checked before I wrote it haha

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Old 03-18-2014, 10:50 AM   #4
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dope battle, edging it forensics. but agreeing with bobby on the setup thing. and multis like ''gay lies fuck/ aids virus'' arent winning you any points. but I do like some of the little nuances yall got, keep at it, it takes a long time to be great at this

dark magic, get a name change though, cause if you go up against someone extra dope and clean with they bars, they gonna flip that on you and it wont be pretty. I got about 10 punchlines for you in my head right now... that just my opinion though. names say alot to me
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Old 03-18-2014, 07:53 PM   #5
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This is the first I have seen of either battle and I thought it was a decent bout. Dark's shit was either real funny to me (stomp out the cig, light the bowl) or mad corny. I would have liked to see a longer scheme in there instead of mostly two bar stuff. For forensics, I agree with the set up comments. No matter how good a line is if it is set up with something like gay fuck, it won't hit very hard.

I am voting for Dark. I would like to see joints from the both of you in the future though.
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Old 03-18-2014, 09:17 PM   #6
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bar for bar it was pretty even, hit and miss in both verses - nothing that made me screw face tho. I think you both would be helped my taking the extra minute to make your setups actually mean something so you get twice as many punches. I can yell you guys are just thinking of the first thing that rhymes with your punch line and writing some bullshit that barely makes sense as a set-up. It's not like your the only one who does this though, hell even conceited does it irl.

Im edging to forensics because his multis flowed cleaner to mean and I found it easier to read, but like I said, bar for bar pretty even.
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Old 03-18-2014, 10:23 PM   #7
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@Dark Magic
Eagle always on my waist, that .50 caliber
Cause I carry around more ki's than a janitor
meh, this isnt a bad bar, but its not directed at your opponent
I'd laugh right in they face if someone told me you're a threat
I'll toss you and then stomp you like a finished cigarette
not bad this would have hit harder if you could have had a multi in there, your a thread/finished cigarette really throws the flow off
He tried to bring the heater, we'll see how much of a g he is
When I let that eagle eat his guts out like his name is Prometheus
nice
My crew out in the desert, already diggin out ya hole
I'll hit you with the lighter like I'm putting out the bowl
putting out the bowl sounds a weird thing to call hittin a bowl, and you used the word out 3 times in 2 bars that annoys me unless its like, if i bring out the gat he'll dip out the back....
Leave your face bent on the pavement, I'll break this fruit
They'll have ya body lined out, like a latex suit
that punch is solid as fuck imo, but yeah the set up kinda lets it down
I don't wanna hear that tough talk or multisyllabic filler
I will hunt down forensics like the Christopher Killer
punch is ok, but for the most part id rather hear multisyllabic filler than single word rhymes
This battle? He lost, like he stuck in a labyrinth
And he dead once I spark shots like we drinking absinthe
again poor rhyme, weak for a closer, and who the fuck dies on absinthe?

@Forensics
Got ak's to spray at skulls, ready to be harming son
Idgaf its not october but this pumpkin rip ur top off like craving one
meh, punch isnt anything creative and set up is weak
Im always brawling & starting shit w/ my pistol
Wen it come to beef magazine nothing but the ones fabricated in a vibes issue
magazine word play had been done to death
I stay robbing & murdering, I never hide my kills
Only thing magic jack is another man off for money to pay for his wifi bill
lol, set up is ok, least you reference robbin/jackin in both lines, the fact he needs money strictly for his wifi bill leaned me for some reason
U never gotten head, stop w/ the gay lies fuck
No bitch'll touch magic johnson they treat that shit like he has the aids virus
the magic johnson shit is played an gawd damn that gay lies fuck/aids virus is sooo forced
ur a pussy noone fears & im sending back clips
Only ppl afraid of the dark are little kids & even they grow out of that shit
light, but ok
Ur to over the hill to fight, bullets im sending from uzi's
Cant scrap ur to oldboy & i'll give ur neck a crazy twist like the end of the movie
spoiler alert haha decent punch, twice though you wrote to instead of too, proof read this shit
Ur moms fucks anyone for doe, all types can score in her hole
Those walls seen more immagrants in & out it at night then the boarder patrol
this is super played, you want to end with something hard not a throw away mum joke, and you spelt immigrants wrong

i just feel like both these verses needed more time, dark work on the set ups and the multis, forensics work on the set ups and the punches. i'll edge the battle to forensics for the wifiand oldboy bars
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This battle? He lost, like he stuck in a labyrinth
And he dead once I spark shots like we drinking absinthe
again poor rhyme, weak for a closer, and who the fuck dies on absinthe?



i meant setting the shots on fire
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i meant setting the shots on fire
oh right, is that a thing? ive never done/heard of a flaming absinthe

edit - just googled it is a thing, im more of a flaming sambuca kinda guy
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Old 03-18-2014, 10:55 PM   #10
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I'll give it to forensic..
IMO it seemed like dark,had more filler than anything.
Forensic had more bars and they were str8..
That's why I gave forensics the w

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Damn I voted for the wrong nigga..my badd forensics
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Old 03-19-2014, 01:14 AM   #12
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sort of hard to judge. mainly due to the matching consistency. im gonna give it to forensics. he edged it with a having a couple more punches. im fried and having a hard time asplainin myself. hope to see more from both!
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