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Battle RMBVA Presents The Revival 2: ass2myface vs. Dear Diary


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Old 10-28-2016, 02:22 PM   #1
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RMBVA Presents The Revival 2: ass2myface vs. Dear Diary

@ass2myface

I found your diary fam peep this emo shit

Entry 1- 9/15/16
Been Stressing I need to mention- lacking attention
take my trangressions out on the net like Odell Beckham
Confused If I wanna be Geek, Street or let wordplay leak
Jus wannabe be with the "In Crowd" like the lambo leap
Speaking of Leap- where somewhere steep? I'm with it
threating chick shit is some bitch shit- but I'm being Realiztic

Wan't this aired out to the world? Better come up off them chips
Bout to be rich dropping "The Diary" like Scarface and James Prince
As a youngin had to steal on Diary, Pops ain't like Rap-A-Lot
Now It's steel glocks-find Diary under sheets like a nosey thot
Won't put shit on the Wire like Deangelo- dry snitching for hoes
Don't need to speak your language to make Proposistions like Joe
But I'm fake, for the cheese, do anything to keep my dogs safe
Scars on face, But with Homo traits to invade safe's omar traits
Foreign life might be better just learn you lesson
Here- shit Flagrant - we take 2 shots and get possesion

@Dear Diary

Dear Diary, uh…
I got him in the headlights shittin himself – deer diarrhea
He be working extra hard tryin to be a lifetime achiever
While I’m chillin, my whole lifetime –a chiefer
But I stay strong, blaze bongs filled with napalm
Have you looking like Gus Fring after we Face-Off
I could turn Dank Schrader into sandpaper
And make Mexican mafia middlemen my landscapers (s’all good, man)
You’re “beefin” on the internet while I’m out getting them coins
So you’re staying on the board – but you’re missing the point
I’m beyond the broad cast, I’ll put you in four casts
You’ll be on the broadcast before the forecast wraps
You get left behind cause you’re half-ass
And I’ll be right behind you like your half ass
Looking to put the cat in his place
So lay low, J. Lo is the only reason there should be ass2myface
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Old 10-28-2016, 02:37 PM   #2
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i feel like an asshole voting for myself but apparently i can't post otherwise
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Old 10-28-2016, 02:57 PM   #3
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The idea ass2myface had was really original but he didnt make it work. Maybe I just didnt get some references or whatever but I didnt really like it. Level up your rhymes, write shit that works in a text format and youre on your way to be a killer


Dear diary wasnt anything special either but enough to take the W for me. Consistantly a bit above average. SOme of your lines are like bad bars so keep an eye on that
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Old 10-28-2016, 03:02 PM   #4
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diary got it off the sandpaper line tbqh

a2mf could've done the diary concept better
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Old 10-28-2016, 10:18 PM   #5
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Dear diary took it easier to read and follow
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Old 10-29-2016, 06:40 PM   #6
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Don't remember much about either of you so eager to see how this plays out.

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@ass2myface

I found your diary fam peep this emo shit

Entry 1- 9/15/16
Been Stressing I need to mention- lacking attention
take my trangressions out on the net like Odell Beckham

Mmmm, digging the reference

Confused If I wanna be Geek, Street or let wordplay leak
Jus wannabe be with the "In Crowd" like the lambo leap

Another dope sports punch

Speaking of Leap- where somewhere steep? I'm with it
threating chick shit is some bitch shit- but I'm being Realiztic

Cool

Wan't this aired out to the world? Better come up off them chips
Bout to be rich dropping "The Diary" like Scarface and James Prince

decent name flip

As a youngin had to steal on Diary, Pops ain't like Rap-A-Lot
Now It's steel glocks-find Diary under sheets like a nosey thot

This setup was fire. The punch could've been better

Won't put shit on the Wire like Deangelo- dry snitching for hoes
Don't need to speak your language to make Proposistions like Joe

Never watched the Wire so other than knowing Prop Joe is a character I don't get much else here

But I'm fake, for the cheese, do anything to keep my dogs safe
Scars on face, But with Homo traits to invade safe's omar traits

If this is dope, it's goin over my head again

Foreign life might be better just learn you lesson
Here- shit Flagrant - we take 2 shots and get possesion

Mmm, dope closer

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Dear Diary, uh…
I got him in the headlights shittin himself – deer diarrhea
He be working extra hard tryin to be a lifetime achiever
While I’m chillin, my whole lifetime –a chiefer

First line would be a good bad bar, next two were kinda filler. Kinda weird 3 bar set.

But I stay strong, blaze bongs filled with napalm
Have you looking like Gus Fring after we Face-Off

Aight. pretty dope punch.

I could turn Dank Schrader into sandpaper
And make Mexican mafia middlemen my landscapers (s’all good, man)

Lol, the ad lib might've been better than the punch

You’re “beefin” on the internet while I’m out getting them coins
So you’re staying on the board – but you’re missing the point

I don't get this one

I’m beyond the broad cast, I’ll put you in four casts
You’ll be on the broadcast before the forecast wraps

The punch had potential but needed a lot more to hit for me

You get left behind cause you’re half-ass
And I’ll be right behind you like your half ass

Eh, "half-ass" bars are played out

Looking to put the cat in his place
So lay low, J. Lo is the only reason there should be ass2myface

Not bad
Really confused by the poll to be honest. Thought there was nothing wrong with A2MF's diary scheme and that the punches in it were dope. DearDiary's verse read smooth but bar-for-bar didn't do a whole lot for me other than the Gus Fring punch.

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Old 10-29-2016, 06:41 PM   #7
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This definitely was the most unique battle on the card both of you took really creative approaches and it was tough to pick a winner.

I think when you get battles like this it's really refreshing cause it's so different

Ass2myface flowed better and was cookin but I really liked some of DD's punch especially towards the end he really heated up
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Old 10-30-2016, 08:16 PM   #8
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ass2myface was a lot better than I remembered - good shit. DD was cool too, but I think the wordplay level was matched. def my favourite battle of the card though so props for that.
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