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Old 12-07-2016, 11:06 PM   #41
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Old 12-07-2016, 11:30 PM   #42
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Old 12-07-2016, 11:48 PM   #43
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Voted Sonny.. thought the LARR-EMY JIN bar was crazy
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Old 12-08-2016, 04:27 AM   #44
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Old 12-08-2016, 08:48 AM   #45
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@larry word

honestly i'm kinda stumped why this is DAZE AGAINST ME
if he tries to be a "hero" then he 'bout to get PLAYED BY JET LI
didnt know you were asian when I read this the first time

each throwing knife "snipes" people -- i NAMED 'EM "WESLEY"
no blu-ray remaster... y'all gon see the "BLADES IN SD"
dopeeee

i'm surgical, so if you ever see me WAIT 'FORE I CLAP THE TECH
"everybody know i'm just loading" like the ELEVATORS IN MASS EFFECT
nice but isnt portal more known for that?

bet there gon be "men in black" whenever that "TOMMY SHOOTING"
mo-cap cinema have his BODY MOVING

... fuck i gotta put it in subtitle or somethin??
No we got it the first time,dope punch

i said, MO' CAPS IN HIM'LL HAVE HIS BODY MOVING!
ok

ya lady's lips "twitch" when she tryna "SEE ME PLAY"
lol

had her on her back, "laid out", "wasted" like GTA
she a ratchet, no lie, i'm just here to "DELIVER THE TRUTH"
since she wore Uggs on our date, i had to "GIVE HER THE BOOT"
decent

she steadfast, tryna be the "headmaster" like DUMBLEDORE
speed-dialin' me to put "word on the line" like an UNDERSCORE
loool kind of a bad bar tbh
you "put yourself in danger" i ain't know what you "STUNTIN' FOR"
cuz you "might catch fire when i roll by" like a HOVERBOARD
dope

Really dope, maybe to cap your rhymes next time but it didnt bother me as much as the rest


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Iím grabbin throwaways from the CHARITY BIN cuz I donít CARE IF I WIN
lol

You know ya styleís a PARODY WHEN you almost changed ya rap name to LARR-EMY JIN
Where to begin... how bout 2012 when dude thought he was Lin wit da Knicks
Til he hopped on the Q44 n got jumped for his jumpmans- I did that shit just for kicks
It was as simple as this, he said, ďI woulda been whippin this kid, but I forgot my nunchucksĒ
Itís like I got drunk then crashed with Brian from Family Guy, dawg you got me fucked up
meh

Then Larry ate BrianÖ fuck it, enough with the race jokes, they didnít win me awards
My Whiteside came with enough Heat to show Iím still king of the boards
decent


For the real ones...

You like math? Then watch me throw you off your plane like a baggage handler
whoo puches everywhere
Try to get buck and Iíll grab the antlers Ďn get ta Chuckín Larry like Adam Sandler
dont get it
Iíll bet da house like an avid gambler you wonít get a second in the Draft like Tyson Chandler
idem
Got you caged up like a rabbit, hamster, while Iím puttin my hands up like I have the answer
feels like a bad bar
Took you out with two hits, thatís a Destroyer. Two more hits, thatís a Battleship
nice
Gimme space when I cross Word Ďn Iíll black ya shit, the .8 points to Word on some scrabble shit
decent
You used to tattle kid, so if money wired, then it ainít the Arcane way
Tied you up to Rickyís jeep, then got ta Draggin Larr like the 80s arcade game
dope

Gotta give this to larry, both styles eally work here, just felt like larry was wy more consistent and had dope punches. Greattt battle overall
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Old 12-08-2016, 09:32 PM   #46
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honestly i'm kinda stumped why this is DAZE AGAINST ME
if he tries to be a "hero" then he 'bout to get PLAYED BY JET LI
each throwing knife "snipes" people -- i NAMED 'EM "WESLEY"
no blu-ray remaster... y'all gon see the "BLADES IN SD"
FIRE!

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i'm surgical, so if you ever see me WAIT 'FORE I CLAP THE TECH
"everybody know i'm just loading" like the ELEVATORS IN MASS EFFECT
Not bad.

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bet there gon be "men in black" whenever that "TOMMY SHOOTING"
mo-cap cinema have his BODY MOVING
... fuck i gotta put it in subtitle or somethin??

i said, MO' CAPS IN HIM'LL HAVE HIS BODY MOVING!
I like the Mo' caps line a lot, but I think it would have been better if you'd just said that first instead of doing a subtitles bit. Good though.

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ya lady's lips "twitch" when she tryna "SEE ME PLAY"
had her on her back, "laid out", "wasted" like GTA
Lol nice Twitch.com bar. GTA bit was good (always down for some videogame references).

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she a ratchet, no lie, i'm just here to "DELIVER THE TRUTH"
since she wore Uggs on our date, i had to "GIVE HER THE BOOT"
Decent

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she steadfast, tryna be the "headmaster" like DUMBLEDORE
speed-dialin' me to put "word on the line" like an UNDERSCORE
you "put yourself in danger" i ain't know what you "STUNTIN' FOR"
cuz you "might catch fire when i roll by" like a HOVERBOARD
I think you saved the best till last, this was a great 4 bar, every line was good and the hoverboard closer was FIRE.

Overall this was a great verse. One thing I'd say is I'm personally not a big fan of all the quotes, links (1 or 2 is maybe ok but 4 is a bit much) and capitals, just for readabilities sake more than anything else, and I don't think they add anything. Other than that though I can't really fault this verse, SICK.

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Iím grabbin throwaways from the CHARITY BIN cuz I donít CARE IF I WIN
You know ya styleís a PARODY WHEN you almost changed ya rap name to LARR-EMY JIN
Lol good opener.

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Where to begin... how bout 2012 when dude thought he was Lin wit da Knicks
Til he hopped on the Q44 n got jumped for his jumpmans- I did that shit just for kicks
Lol this is great.

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It was as simple as this, he said, ďI woulda been whippin this kid, but I forgot my nunchucksĒ
Itís like I got drunk then crashed with Brian from Family Guy, dawg you got me fucked up
Nice.

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Then Larry ate BrianÖ fuck it, enough with the race jokes, they didnít win me awards
My Whiteside came with enough Heat to show Iím still king of the boards
Sick.

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You like math? Then watch me throw you off your plane like a baggage handler
Try to get buck and Iíll grab the antlers Ďn get ta Chuckín Larry like Adam Sandler
Iíll bet da house like an avid gambler you wonít get a second in the Draft like Tyson Chandler
Got you caged up like a rabbit, hamster, while Iím puttin my hands up like I have the answer
Chuck n Larry line was FLAMES, rest was good.

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Took you out with two hits, thatís a Destroyer. Two more hits, thatís a Battleship
Gimme space when I cross Word Ďn Iíll black ya shit, the .8 points to Word on some scrabble shit
Scrabble line was nasty, rest nice too.

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You used to tattle kid, so if money wired, then it ainít the Arcane way
Tied you up to Rickyís jeep, then got ta Draggin Larr like the 80s arcade game
I liked the Arcane bar, but tbh the closer was the only thing that didn't work for me, like the diea but Larr/Lair don't sound enough alike to work IMO.

Overall this was a great verse. Not as many haymakers as I've seen from Sonny in the past, but read and flowed really well, with the closer being the only real dry spot

This was really tough to judge, but just because he was more consistent, and had my favourite line of the battle, i'd edge to Larry, despite Sonny having the cleaner verse. Nothing much in it lads, great battle!
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Old 12-10-2016, 12:22 AM   #47
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lmaoooo @ larryme jin

thats easily the best nameflip/race joke combo ive seen in a very long time

we should battle irl tho no lie

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Date: TBD but most likely never

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Venue: MSG (probably in the lobby area outside the gift shop)

Match-ups: Sonny Daze vs larry word along with whoever else we can get on the card with a $75 budget.
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Old 12-10-2016, 07:33 PM   #48
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The mo caps cinema stands out to me by @larry word

And @SonnyDaze i loved the whiteside wordplay
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Old 12-12-2016, 11:05 PM   #49
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Someone break this tie.
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