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Battle RMBVA Chalked Out Presents: Smitty Greenspan vs. Bar4Bar


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Old 03-20-2017, 11:49 PM   #1
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RMBVA Chalked Out Presents: Smitty Greenspan vs. Bar4Bar

@Smitty Greenspan

Bar4Bar?

I asked them "Who I gotta face?" They said that "Bar 4 biddin."
I said, "Wait... you mean to tell me that this bar forbidden?"
They said "Naaah, his face looks like it was made of barf or bit in"

I said "wooow"

I said I said I said, Im on my foghorn shit
Go get your lawn mower fixed-
Cuz against the Green you're not on par 4, these aren't golf course tips
You catch him walkin thru the park he's got an outdoor stench-
But he won't bark or flinch beside the parkour bench
Where you get dogged on since you like your bars on all 4s bitch
You're not as forthright as you claim to be there B4B
Got alot at stake on your plate, so what's the beef for b?
I'm known to go for the gusto, you know who CB4 be?
Oh yous an Alpha ay? No thats the letter you see before B
They flipped that quarter n I said let 1 cross the line over 4
He'll feel a connection to that I.V. when I remind what it's for
Im stompin Bar knees til theyre purple as the dinosaur
And they said I couldn't handle Bars.... I let the Dyno soar!

@Bar4Bar

Smitty Greenspan? That's the kinda name you think'll get you hot?
The only time I care about the green span is if I'm harvestin' the crop
See I coulda got you shot, 'cause when there's green at stake I'll lead the way
Squeeze the 8, leave holes up in Green like the PGA
I make the money offa green, so taking your bread is what I'm sposed to do
Eating off your plate, like when your girl comes out but don't order food
My Spanish chick told me "Estas hombres hablar mierda de tu"
I said baby bitch boys gon' do what they do
I'd hate to be you, I'm killing you with my THROWAWAY bars
Me and ma girl in matching furs, niggas like "I KNOW that ain't y'all"
All I need is one call, and I'm in your suburb slanging to your white neighbour
White..slanging..right under your nose...you must be Hank Schrader
Bricks lookin' like blank paper, car chases with feds- I'm not lying!
I had 5 dime bags in the (cling) film, I'm tryna get rich! Or imma die trying!
And if Smitty's team rob us then ain't much gon' save 'em
'Cause we known to get ours back like daylight saving

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Old 03-21-2017, 01:50 AM   #2
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Smitty did good, but it seemed like he was trying out a new style of rapping as opposed to actually attacking his opponent, and Bar4Bar was consistent as always, so I edged it to him

not too much to say honestly, good performances on both sides but it just felt like smitty was playin and bar came TO play
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Old 03-21-2017, 08:06 AM   #3
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I voted Smitty. He had better structure and a couple creative concepts.

Bar4bar had some nice lines though. I like the girlfriend eating off your plate bar. I just felt he didn't consider his syllables when piecing his stuff together and which made Smittys verse flow better.

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Old 03-21-2017, 03:42 PM   #4
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I liked the concepts smitty tried specially the first one, real funny shit. You just need to work on the punches a bit more. Thats where bar4bar outshined you plus he's really structured so I voted for him.
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Old 03-21-2017, 04:16 PM   #5
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This shit was mad close. Had to read both verses a couple of times. I like Smitty's style he brought.. Shit was a little lacking at the beginning but picked up some steam towards the end. No real heavy shots just a consistent run through. Couple of joke-y lines, and the closer was kinda goofy. A little easy on the punch count. Just gotta get them shots off. The flow is there..

Bar4Bar came with the punches. Holes up in green like the PGA, plate/order food punches were nice. Liked the Hank Schrader scheme but it lacked the big finish. Fresh concept on an overused tv show for bars lol.. A few wiffs here and there. Once you get that consistency on the punches you'll get some dope verses out and might be able to hang with the best around here.. Got them flashes of potential.

Bar4Bar edged it slightly on punch count, but I could see Smitty taking it for some people. Different styles here but both were dope.
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Old 03-21-2017, 04:24 PM   #6
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I liked the concepts smitty tried specially the first one, real funny shit. You just need to work on the punches a bit more. Thats where bar4bar outshined you plus he's really structured so I voted for him.
Sorry but I gotta ask because I'm having trouble understanding your critique

but how is

I make the money offa green, so taking your bread is what I'm sposed to do
Eating off your plate, like when your girl comes out but don't order food
My Spanish chick told me "Estas hombres hablar mierda de tu"
I said baby bitch boys gon' do what they do

better structured than

I'm on my foghorn shit - go get your lawn mower fixed
Cuz against the Green you're not on par 4 these aren't golf course tips
You catch him walkin thru the park and he won't bark or flinch beside the parkour bench
Where you get dogged on since you like your bars on all 4s bitch

And how is

Bricks lookin' like blank paper, car chases with feds- I'm not lying!
I had 5 dime bags in the (cling) film, I'm tryna get rich! Or imma die trying!
And if Smitty's team rob us then ain't much gon' save 'em
'Cause we known to get ours back like daylight saving

better applying punches than

They flipped that quarter and I said let 1 cross the line over 4
He'll feel a connection to that I.V. when I remind what it's for
Im beatin bar knees til theyre purple as the dinosaur
And they said I couldn't handle bars... I let the Dyno soar!

??????

don't get me wrong I'm not hating on the fact you voted against me prelec I just know that English isn't your first language and I'm trying to make sure I/we know exactly what you're talking about, if youre having any trouble with references don't be afraid to ask
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Old 03-21-2017, 04:28 PM   #7
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They flipped that quarter and I said let 1 cross the line over 4
He'll feel a connection to that I.V. when I remind what it's for
Im beatin bar knees til theyre purple as the dinosaur
And they said I couldn't handle bars... I let the Dyno soar!
yeah that one was funny good shit
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Old 03-21-2017, 05:38 PM   #8
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Old 03-22-2017, 02:45 PM   #9
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Bar for Bar hit better punches. Smitty I liked his approach less basic but nothing really landed
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Old 03-22-2017, 03:07 PM   #10
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Bar for Bar hit better punches. Smitty I liked his approach less basic but nothing really landed
WHAT punches?
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Old 03-23-2017, 07:11 PM   #11
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WHAT punches?
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WHAT punches?
Please don't question everyone who votes against you
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Old 03-23-2017, 07:49 PM   #13
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Please don't question everyone who votes against you
Please, stop calling yourself a "battlerapper"
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Old 03-23-2017, 07:50 PM   #14
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