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Old 03-21-2017, 09:04 PM   #1
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My First Battle VS. My Most Recent Battle

Thoughts, questions, and criticism (preferably from other battlers) are all welcome and strongly encouraged. I hope to improve my performance now that I take battling more seriously than I did when I started, so I found it necessary to consult a source that wouldn't hesitate to tell me what works vs. what's trash.

2015 vs. Desi Baker

2017 vs. OkNice
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Old 03-21-2017, 09:14 PM   #2
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I'm one round into this battle vs OKNice and this is a legit good battle

I think you gotta figure out how to be more deliberate with how you deliver each bar. sometimes it seems like you just don't know what to do with your hands. your writing is tight tho, had some really cool schemes goin on
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i have buddies who told me about a guy falling while snowboarding and injuring his ribs to the point that it messed up his breath control, so he had to sit out of his hobby for a few months. something tells me they were talking about psycoses.
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WE IN HERE NUTDOGS TURN UP. ii
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Old 03-21-2017, 09:18 PM   #3
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i'm not siri or someone who talk to the piglets
but i jot theories and some of the rawest of lyrics
scratchin glock serial numbers like lottery tickets

holy shit
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i have buddies who told me about a guy falling while snowboarding and injuring his ribs to the point that it messed up his breath control, so he had to sit out of his hobby for a few months. something tells me they were talking about psycoses.
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Old 03-21-2017, 09:22 PM   #4
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Hell yeah broham! You shoulda been on #Blackout with these bars and rapid fire delivery like that the line about megadefs followers was fire and #true plus half them Blackout mamas cant even rap or have big #muscles come battle for #Dubtreys vs the young bull Random at Kushining III: Still Kushed hosted by DJ Mama at Mr Xtras house also on the card Detour vs Just Burger and Megadef vs (lmao sike! #detoursike nice try megadef u wish baby!) ill lock it in now good looks!
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i'm on the human bandwagon

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i have buddies who told me about a guy falling while snowboarding and injuring his ribs to the point that it messed up his breath control, so he had to sit out of his hobby for a few months. something tells me they were talking about psycoses.
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Old 03-21-2017, 09:24 PM   #6
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Old 03-21-2017, 09:24 PM   #7
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I fuck with your name fuck wit yo bars
Battle 1 way too rapid fire and the balance of tone was off
Battle 2 noice smooth delivery but the tone and emphasising were a little off

Jus keep at it and you'll fuck people up getting in the ring hones the craft can't really say anything more negative or criticising so I'm out welcome to Rmbva hope you enjoy your time here
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Old 03-21-2017, 09:34 PM   #8
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i'm not siri or someone who talk to the piglets
but i jot theories and some of the rawest of lyrics
scratchin glock serial numbers like lottery tickets

holy shit
Lol I'm really glad you fw that. Do you guys know DeadBeat? He was the Nocoast Champ and next month I go against him, so I'm making sure to smooth out any kinks since he's raw and has only improved since losing the title

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Old 03-21-2017, 09:35 PM   #9
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I fuck with your name fuck wit yo bars
Battle 1 way too rapid fire and the balance of tone was off
Battle 2 noice smooth delivery but the tone and emphasising were a little off

Jus keep at it and you'll fuck people up getting in the ring hones the craft can't really say anything more negative or criticising so I'm out welcome to Rmbva hope you enjoy your time here
Much appreciated g definitely taking that in mind when rehearsing

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And for further reference, this was my 2nd most recent battle:
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Old 03-21-2017, 09:51 PM   #12
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Thanks man lol. Wrote you in a shout-out in the next battle in Des Moines; listen for the 3rd round

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i'm not siri or someone who talk to the piglets
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scratchin glock serial numbers like lottery tickets

holy shit

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Much appreciated g definitely taking that in mind when rehearsing

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Also just realized searching your battles gonna be tricky typed human vs on YouTube.... Yeah kinda ducked...Hueman could be easier to find....
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Old 03-21-2017, 11:03 PM   #14
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Also just realized searching your battles gonna be tricky typed human vs on YouTube.... Yeah kinda ducked Hueman.....could be easier to find....
Boneman pointed that out when we battled lmfao "All I saw was 'Human vs. Bear', 'Human vs. Lion', etc." and I either plan on riding out having "too" common of a name (like Game and Common did) or start going by humanfunction, which is less concise than I like, but still works
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Boneman pointed that out when we battled lmfao "All I saw was 'Human vs. Bear', 'Human vs. Lion', etc." and I either plan on riding out having "too" common of a name (like Game and Common did) or start going by humanfunction, which is less concise than I like, but still works
Either way I can rock with it but just saying trying to find human you'll have to have millions of views to beat infamous vids like human vs a banana peel HumanFunction is a good one too
I'll rock with that boneman thang later...back to the cave

Also if your name is bone man..... Yeah we all know what I'm saying lighting matches...burning styx... Wut a name like that can't be talking that shyt
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Old 03-22-2017, 02:07 AM   #16
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maybe chill a little with the big words because it tends to make u stumble

just rap like ur rapping and not battling and you'll be str8
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dude's not even plugging his music!!

https://soundcloud.com/thehuman/sets/free-lunch

this shits on 99.9% of battler music
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Old 03-22-2017, 02:22 AM   #18
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dude's not even plugging his music

https://soundcloud.com/thehuman/sets/free-lunch

this shits on 99.9% of battler music
Lol that means a lot, thanks g.
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Came in here to co-sign. @humanfunction is probably top three in No Coast right now and his new tape is crazy.
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