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Old 08-07-2014, 12:00 PM   #1
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Double Threat Finals: Seanzo & riffic vs. JOBone & Smokinstein

@Seanzo & @riffic

[r] Let's take a poll: who thinks Smoke here’s a legend?
You’re both light; you’ll win the day Smoke writes a coherent sentence

[S] Smoke’s line’s? all bitten; if the line’s dope I bet it’s either stolen or bought
I've got a premonition: I 4-c your bars are ones you hope we all 4-got

[r] I don’t want whatever stein’s Smokin’, ‘cause what he’s hotboxin’ is not chronic
Drop the rope Smoke, you ain’t dope cuz you sound like you’re nodding off on it
RapBattles, RMBVA, you’re wack usin’ any textcee standards—watch ‘em stumble and fall
When I read your shit, I'm stupid sexy Flanders: I’m feelin’ nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all…

[S] So they fam now? Well they can dream 'bout writing their cute lines forever
'Til I’ll turn this to Oktoberfest, 'n celebrate by cracking two steins together
Team in the buildin’, gutter shit, you winning? I'm lettin’ off a Thundercat laugh
‘cause if you win I got the .30 waitin’ for you outside; this a lumberjack match

[S] And I heard Job got obsessed studyin' for this battle, lookin’ for an unmentioned fatality
It’s a shame with all that digging you never found an actual personality

[r] Job, you’ll find Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter
‘fore someone reads your manifestos like “what an incredible author!”
You’re the George RR Martin of battles, ‘cept no one would care if you got the Throne
‘Cause you’ve typed a billion characters but never had a character of your own
...and when RM went the Titanic route—Job was the one at the endin’ that froze
Except he never met Rose; he just stared at old threads and said he’d never let go

[S] He Arthur Dent, no question, his world destroyed; wonders why he the bastard who’s perishin’
Make ‘em all repent, so don’t panic, boy, got that 40 to (42) give you the answer to everything
So welcome to the big league’s, pip squeek, see this black glove? Your fate
Alistair Overeem, see what happens when you try and punch above your weight?

[r] It was all games til I brought the mags out, blacked out and never knew when to stop
'Cause whenever I start the shootin’ I’m an opportunist, everyone in your crew gets a shot
Yes, your chests need vests, flex these techs like Charli XCX, I pop artists
Where’s the tool at? After that BOOM, CLAP, that’s the sound of his heart stoppin’

[S] Get toe tagged; I ain’t here to share my lane with these powder puffs
It's so bad; got the right to control the game like a Power Glove
And I shouldn't mention it, but I paid for this, and I'm not payin' for joke acts
Plus, I'm an environmentalist--I won't contribute to Smoke stacks

@JOBone & @Smokinstein

(S) There's a Chance the Rapper, riffic think he the best rapp-in(rapping) overall(pants).
He don't want this extended clip, dat xxl mag get involved
Headshot,problem solved make sure rffic wont pick up a pin(pen) again at all like a gutter ball.

(J) Fuck if ya hatin, we got bars filled with guns like an old west saloon
Have ya kid crying once we pop like The Red Balloon
I'll put the pump to your ride and fill it with Shell(s), Sean
Shots'll set his whip on fire like Simon Belmont fighting hellspawn

(S) Ill pay to get seanzo killed, I got that murder captial, but never been to Chiraq.
Couple of shooters,couple of rugers,have his blood running rapid like a kayak.
When I let that 44 go on riffic and seanzo, y'all watch the gay-show. Cause they a couple of Queer as(ass) folk.
Y'all must be watching westerns if u thinking u can gun-smoke

(J) Get this whore riffic(horrific)'s torture porn fetish isn't based on gore or sex
With his formula, we already know the drill, and end up being bored to death
Cremate Sean's remains; the Flossed Out championships was your high water mark
Then put his portrait on the side of a vase with his ashes and call it mod urn art

(S) Prepare for the bloodshed, me and jo left enough dead.
Bout to ripp seanzo arrogance to shreds,
cause when I draw lead it's a caricature when I'm airing ya .you getting bodied cause of ya big head.

(J) Fuck Seanzo's ego, fuck favoritism, fuck the pretentious bars, fuck the status quo
We can't sufffer the agony of defeat since we possess such calloused soles
They may seem gigantic, larger than life with a polished team dynamic
But they have no chants, like they losing with homefield advantage

(S) Y'all plans of winning,are tony montana at his desk at the ending,blow-up-in-ya-face.
Physically I can fight'em,but i got the 40 like a collectors item
Jus' in-case, like desperado at a gutair recital
Ill hit every organ that's vital on my opposing rivals.

(J) What the fuck is the point of a Hy-per-link? Must be some sort of white-nerd-thing
So many references seem really odd to me, your lack of penmenship should include a bibliography
Seanzo beggin for commisary when he gets put in Twitter jail, press Riffic if I lift the iron
This bodybag reads like a polygraph; you can examine these lines and tell me if I'm lyin
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Old 08-07-2014, 01:09 PM   #2
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@Seanzo & @riffic

[r] Let's take a poll: who thinks Smoke here’s a legend?
You’re both light; you’ll win the day Smoke writes a coherent sentence
lol, first time i read this it dint hit too hard coz smokes been real improved as of late but some of his structure and wording in this battle made this work real well as an opener
[S] Smoke’s line’s? all bitten; if the line’s dope I bet it’s either stolen or bought
I've got a premonition: I 4-c your bars are ones you hope we all 4-got
real nice
[r] I don’t want whatever stein’s Smokin’, ‘cause what he’s hotboxin’ is not chronic
Drop the rope Smoke, you ain’t dope cuz you sound like you’re nodding off on it
wasnt a huge fan of this, do people call weed rope ever? or dope anymore?
RapBattles, RMBVA, you’re wack usin’ any textcee standards—watch ‘em stumble and fall
When I read your shit, I'm stupid sexy Flanders: I’m feelin’ nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all…
hahaha
[S] So they fam now? Well they can dream 'bout writing their cute lines forever
'Til I’ll turn this to Oktoberfest, 'n celebrate by cracking two steins together
ok
Team in the buildin’, gutter shit, you winning? I'm lettin’ off a Thundercat laugh
‘cause if you win I got the .30 waitin’ for you outside; this a lumberjack match
this is ok, i didnt like the .30 part of it though because lumber jack matches tend to have different numbers of people as the lumber jacks idea was nice though
[S] And I heard Job got obsessed studyin' for this battle, lookin’ for an unmentioned fatality
It’s a shame with all that digging you never found an actual personality
not a fan the rhyme is pretty basic
[r] Job, you’ll find Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter
‘fore someone reads your manifestos like “what an incredible author!”
hahaha
You’re the George RR Martin of battles, ‘cept no one would care if you got the Throne
‘Cause you’ve typed a billion characters but never had a character of your own
dope
...and when RM went the Titanic route—Job was the one at the endin’ that froze
Except he never met Rose; he just stared at old threads and said he’d never let go
ok
[S] He Arthur Dent, no question, his world destroyed; wonders why he the bastard who’s perishin’
Make ‘em all repent, so don’t panic, boy, got that 40 to (42) give you the answer to everything
mmmmmmmmmm
So welcome to the big league’s, pip squeek, see this black glove? Your fate
Alistair Overeem, see what happens when you try and punch above your weight?
ok
[r] It was all games til I brought the mags out, blacked out and never knew when to stop
'Cause whenever I start the shootin’ I’m an opportunist, everyone in your crew gets a shot
not feeling this
Yes, your chests need vests, flex these techs like Charli XCX, I pop artists
Where’s the tool at? After that BOOM, CLAP, that’s the sound of his heart stoppin’
dope...although, i cant decide if i like this song or hate it, and cant decide if id fist that broard or wanna punch her(nonickvanye)
[S] Get toe tagged; I ain’t here to share my lane with these powder puffs
It's so bad; got the right to control the game like a Power Glove
this was decent, the "its so bad" seemed out of place though, right to control like a power glove is clever as fuck though
And I shouldn't mention it, but I paid for this, and I'm not payin' for joke acts
Plus, I'm an environmentalist--I won't contribute to Smoke stacks
yeah nice, solid closer

@JOBone & @Smokinstein

(S) There's a Chance the Rapper, riffic think he the best rapp-in(rapping) overall(pants).
He don't want this extended clip, dat xxl mag get involved
Headshot,problem solved make sure rffic wont pick up a pin(pen) again at all like a gutter ball.
didnt like the first bar, second was nice and 3rd was pretty good, but the rhymes are off for multis and otherwise just basic
(J) Fuck if ya hatin, we got bars filled with guns like an old west saloon
Have ya kid crying once we pop like The Red Balloon
mean
I'll put the pump to your ride and fill it with Shell(s), Sean
Shots'll set his whip on fire like Simon Belmont fighting hellspawn
nice
(S) Ill pay to get seanzo killed, I got that murder captial, but never been to Chiraq.
Couple of shooters,couple of rugers,have his blood running rapid like a kayak.
dope
When I let that 44 go on riffic and seanzo, y'all watch the gay-show. Cause they a couple of Queer as(ass) folk.
Y'all must be watching westerns if u thinking u can gun-smoke
"let the 44 go on riffic and seanzo" flows so fucking nice, but then the bar went to pieces, you basically said when i shoot them they watch gay programs because they are gay. western bar was ok, but i didnt like the fact that job had a western bar a few lines back, felt like you should have stuck to just one for the verse
(J) Get this whore riffic(horrific)'s torture porn fetish isn't based on gore or sex
With his formula, we already know the drill, and end up being bored to death
the set up seemed odly worded, punch was good
Cremate Sean's remains; the Flossed Out championships was your high water mark
Then put his portrait on the side of a vase with his ashes and call it mod urn art
i dont think a water mark is the right term to use, punch is dope in a bad bars kinda way, i fucks with it but i could also see it coming off corny
(S) Prepare for the bloodshed, me and jo left enough dead.
Bout to ripp seanzo arrogance to shreds,
cause when I draw lead it's a caricature when I'm airing ya .you getting bodied cause of ya big head.
punch was nice, set ups were meh
(J) Fuck Seanzo's ego, fuck favoritism, fuck the pretentious bars, fuck the status quo
We can't sufffer the agony of defeat since we possess such calloused soles
cant fuck with this
They may seem gigantic, larger than life with a polished team dynamic
But they have no chants, like they losing with homefield advantage
not really feeling this, ive been at home games where my team is a goal down so you chant to spur them on
(S) Y'all plans of winning,are tony montana at his desk at the ending,blow-up-in-ya-face.
Physically I can fight'em,but i got the 40 like a collectors item
Jus' in-case, like desperado at a gutair recital
Ill hit every organ that's vital on my opposing rivals.
this feels like it would come off alot better if you were spitting it, the blow up in your face was pretty funny, but chances of winning dont really blow up in peoples faces, should have worded it differently, the rest was ok but nothing overly hard hitting
(J) What the fuck is the point of a Hy-per-link? Must be some sort of white-nerd-thing
So many references seem really odd to me, your lack of penmenship should include a bibliography
yeah really like this
Seanzo beggin for commisary when he gets put in Twitter jail, press Riffic if I lift the iron
This bodybag reads like a polygraph; you can examine these lines and tell me if I'm lyin
didnt like the set up, the last line was pretty hard though

all in all every time ive read back through this ive leaned more and more towards seanzo and riffic. this just seemed alot more consistent with it. job had some real dope punches for sure but some weird set ups and smoke kinda felt like he took a step backwards, its hard to write to a top standard all the way through a tourney though. riffic and seanzo werent the crazyiest ive seen them, but for the most part there bars hit more often and made more sense. siffic with the win imo
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Old 08-07-2014, 02:02 PM   #3
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[r] Let's take a poll: who thinks Smoke here’s a legend?
You’re both light; you’ll win the day Smoke writes a coherent sentence
^^^ 3/5 haha this was a quick jab and had some humor to it. Obviously not a haymaker but still a nice way to open and set the pace
[S] Smoke’s line’s? all bitten; if the line’s dope I bet it’s either stolen or bought
I've got a premonition: I 4-c your bars are ones you hope we all 4-got
^^^ 3.5/5 Since I’m pretty new I have to operate under the impression all personals are true haha. That being said this was pretty clever I was feeling the 4-c c-4 flip here fresh take.

[r] I don’t want whatever stein’s Smokin’, ‘cause what he’s hotboxin’ is not chronic
Drop the rope Smoke, you ain’t dope cuz you sound like you’re nodding off on it
RapBattles, RMBVA, you’re wack usin’ any textcee standards—watch ‘em stumble and fall
When I read your shit, I'm stupid sexy Flanders: I’m feelin’ nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all…
^^^ 7/10 hahaha nodding off made me chuckle then the Flanders tied it all together. Pretty dope


[S] So they fam now? Well they can dream 'bout writing their cute lines forever
'Til I’ll turn this to Oktoberfest, 'n celebrate by cracking two steins together
Team in the buildin’, gutter shit, you winning? I'm lettin’ off a Thundercat laugh
‘cause if you win I got the .30 waitin’ for you outside; this a lumberjack match
^^^ 9/10 this was really good, I liked the flow of it, Thundercats are dope as shit, the lumberjack .30 wordplay/reference. Oktoberfest. All of this was slick in my opinion.


[S] And I heard Job got obsessed studyin' for this battle, lookin’ for an unmentioned fatality
It’s a shame with all that digging you never found an actual personality
^^^ 3.5/5 haha again I have to assume stuff is played and thus far these guys seem really boring and monotone which means you guys are doing a good job painting them that way.

[r] Job, you’ll find Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter
‘fore someone reads your manifestos like “what an incredible author!”
You’re the George RR Martin of battles, ‘cept no one would care if you got the Throne
‘Cause you’ve typed a billion characters but never had a character of your own
...and when RM went the Titanic route—Job was the one at the endin’ that froze
Except he never met Rose; he just stared at old threads and said he’d never let go
^^^ 14.5/15 Jesus man… this whole portion went fucking hard. Elliot Rodger and his manifesto about girls not wanting to fuck him, George RR Martin and his Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) and the asinine amount of characters in that series. Staring at old threads. Seriously this whole portion is nasty as fuck.


[S] He Arthur Dent, no question, his world destroyed; wonders why he the bastard who’s perishin’
Make ‘em all repent, so don’t panic, boy, got that 40 to (42) give you the answer to everything
So welcome to the big league’s, pip squeek, see this black glove? Your fate
Alistair Overeem, see what happens when you try and punch above your weight?
^^^ 8.5/10 This was sick too, Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy is amazing haha and when I read Arthur Dent I was like “He better include 42 somehow, it’s the answer to the ultimate question of life, the universe, and everything!” The Alistair reference was pretty slick too.


[r] It was all games til I brought the mags out, blacked out and never knew when to stop
'Cause whenever I start the shootin’ I’m an opportunist, everyone in your crew gets a shot
Yes, your chests need vests, flex these techs like Charli XCX, I pop artists
Where’s the tool at? After that BOOM, CLAP, that’s the sound of his heart stoppin’
^^^ 7.5/10 This was pretty cool, had it been earlier I probably would have vibed with it even more but the last like 10 bars have been insane so it’s tough to follow haha. I do like the pop artist and the opportunist. Bars were tight just had a lot to follow from the previous.

[S] Get toe tagged; I ain’t here to share my lane with these powder puffs
It's so bad; got the right to control the game like a Power Glove
And I shouldn't mention it, but I paid for this, and I'm not payin' for joke acts
Plus, I'm an environmentalist--I won't contribute to Smoke stacks
^^^7.5/10 the power glove bar was tight, made me laugh all nostalgic like. And the smoke stacks was a cool way to close this out I was feeling it.

Overall: 64/80 (80%) The midde was insane, you guys flow extremely well with each other and it’s difficult to know (without looking at the S/R where one person stops and one starts. That’s awesome to see cohesion like that. You guys had a lot of super slick shit here I was digging it a lot. I think my personal favorite was when Riffic went in about Elliot Rodger and George Martin… that was crazy. Good shit guys!



(S) There's a Chance the Rapper, riffic think he the best rapp-in(rapping) overall(pants).
He don't want this extended clip, dat xxl mag get involved
Headshot,problem solved make sure rffic wont pick up a pin(pen) again at all like a gutter ball.
^^^3.5/5 the flow was clever here, I liked the xxl mag, I liked the pick up a pin, my only beef was the rapp in overall… I felt like it was a bit of a stretch there. The best rap in pants? I don’t know just threw it off a little. Rest of it was tight.

(J) Fuck if ya hatin, we got bars filled with guns like an old west saloon
Have ya kid crying once we pop like The Red Balloon
I'll put the pump to your ride and fill it with Shell(s), Sean
Shots'll set his whip on fire like Simon Belmont fighting hellspawn
^^^ 7.5/10 I really liked the Simon Belmont, the shell was cool too like shell station gas, thought that was clever. The saloon red balloon was okay could have been a bit harder.

(S) Ill pay to get seanzo killed, I got that murder captial, but never been to Chiraq.
Couple of shooters,couple of rugers,have his blood running rapid like a kayak.
When I let that 44 go on riffic and seanzo, y'all watch the gay-show. Cause they a couple of Queer as(ass) folk.
Y'all must be watching westerns if u thinking u can gun-smoke
^^^9/10 this was sick, was really digging this portion here. (I’m from Chicago and even though I hate the whole Chiraq craze it made for a sick punch) All around flow to the punches the couple shooters couple rugers I was digging this.

(J) Get this whore riffic(horrific)'s torture porn fetish isn't based on gore or sex
With his formula, we already know the drill, and end up being bored to death
Cremate Sean's remains; the Flossed Out championships was your high water mark
Then put his portrait on the side of a vase with his ashes and call it mod urn art
^^^7.5/10 hahahaha the first bar was a bit choppy maybe some punctuation would have kept it steady but it worked out just fine when you went into the last three bars. Mod urn art was a cool flip on an otherwise beat-up concept.

(S) Prepare for the bloodshed, me and jo left enough dead.
Bout to ripp seanzo arrogance to shreds,
cause when I draw lead it's a caricature when I'm airing ya .you getting bodied cause of ya big head.
^^^ 4.5/5 wowwwww that was nasty. Fucking… disgusting haha. The caricature punch I haven’t seen it done and it worked out wonderfully. Sick man.

(J) Fuck Seanzo's ego, fuck favoritism, fuck the pretentious bars, fuck the status quo
We can't sufffer the agony of defeat since we possess such calloused soles
They may seem gigantic, larger than life with a polished team dynamic
But they have no chants, like they losing with homefield advantage
^^^ 8.5/10 the first bar had me like “What is this self pitty 8 mile stuff” but then you went off with the last 3 bars. Calloused soles/souls chants/chance I mean it all played great together. Slick.


(S) Y'all plans of winning,are tony montana at his desk at the ending,blow-up-in-ya-face.
Physically I can fight'em,but i got the 40 like a collectors item
Jus' in-case, like desperado at a gutair recital
Ill hit every organ that's vital on my opposing rivals.
^^^ 7.5/10 again the opening bar took a little while to get out, like “Remember, the end of the movie, he was sitting at his desk, and he was doing coke, yeah, like that” haha… but the collectors item, the gun in the guitar case, the hitting organs. That movie is dope and you played that out sick.


(J) What the fuck is the point of a Hy-per-link? Must be some sort of white-nerd-thing
So many references seem really odd to me, your lack of penmenship should include a bibliography
Seanzo beggin for commisary when he gets put in Twitter jail, press Riffic if I lift the iron
This bodybag reads like a polygraph; you can examine these lines and tell me if I'm lyin
^^^ 8/10 I “lol’d” at the white nerd hyperlink bar. The twitter jail got a chuckle, and that polygraph I feel has been done a bit lately but it didn’t make it less cool, nice way to close out too like you said everything else and ended with “tell me if I’m lying” nice man.

Overall: 56/70 (80%) you guys had two less bars than the others… and the three bar style made scoring even more awkward haha. But overall I liked your guys verse; you meshed really well stylistically as well. Kudos on that. The Caricature was easily my favorite punch, made me read it like four times. The Chiraq scheme was dope too.

Well score wise you guys ended up dead even 80% each. So I have to go with the more enjoyment and I think that would be Riffic and Seanzo honestly. I like funnier stuff, preference and they had the humor and the haymakers. My vote goes to Seanzo and Riffic.
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this was a dope clash.
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this was a dope clash.
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Jk. Need a couple more reads before I can break down this beast. Good work to the four of you

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Old 08-07-2014, 03:59 PM   #9
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Damn this a good battle.. pretty close on first read too I got Seanzo and Riffic edging but I'll come back and do up a proper breakdown for this..

All 4 killed it, definitely deserving of the finals
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This was really close. I'll have a breakdown on the way later on. Two quick observations...

1) I think I had to Google every reference in riffic and Seanzo's verse except "Thundercat laugh", "Oktoberfest", and "Elliot Rodger". So, I sort of agree with JOB that you should "include a bibliography." Fair warning: my cultural illiteracy may affect my judgment.

2) JOB bit my Shell/pump concept!!!!!!!!! Call the police!!!!

It was just a setup though, so I'm not trippin'...

In any case, this final didn't disappoint. It's too close to call after one read.
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[r] Let's take a poll: who thinks Smoke here’s a legend?
You’re both light; you’ll win the day Smoke writes a coherent sentence
I dunno about legend but he seems like a good guy. These lines set the tone, but don't have an impact yet.

[S] Smoke’s line’s? all bitten; if the line’s dope I bet it’s either stolen or bought
I've got a premonition: I 4-c your bars are ones you hope we all 4-got
I dunno, I read this a couple times and I don't get it. Maybe it's too early. I mean I see you used the number 4 twice... but dunno why. My bad if im sleeping on something.

[r] I don’t want whatever stein’s Smokin’, ‘cause what he’s hotboxin’ is not chronic
Drop the rope Smoke, you ain’t dope cuz you sound like you’re nodding off on it
I liked the hotboxin/not cronic rhyme but apart from that didn't hit for me.
RapBattles, RMBVA, you’re wack usin’ any textcee standards—watch ‘em stumble and fall
When I read your shit, I'm stupid sexy Flanders: I’m feelin’ nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all…
punchline was funny, but the impact was minimal

[S] So they fam now? Well they can dream 'bout writing their cute lines forever
'Til I’ll turn this to Oktoberfest, 'n celebrate by cracking two steins together
this was sick, the rhyme and the punch both. mmhmm
Team in the buildin’, gutter shit, you winning? I'm lettin’ off a Thundercat laugh
‘cause if you win I got the .30 waitin’ for you outside; this a lumberjack match
ok, I had to google what a lumberjack match was because I barely watched wrestling. Is this because there are "30" other wrestlers waiting outside the ring? If that's what it means seems pretty light, but if I'm missing something else then my bad. Not really a fan of wrestling bars personally anyway

[S] And I heard Job got obsessed studyin' for this battle, lookin’ for an unmentioned fatality
It’s a shame with all that digging you never found an actual personality
pretty tame, but ok

[r] Job, you’ll find Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter [lmao at that rhyme]
‘fore someone reads your manifestos like “what an incredible author!”
ya this held up pretty well, mostly because of the multis.You’re the George RR Martin of battles, ‘cept no one would care if you got the Throne
‘Cause you’ve typed a billion characters but never had a character of your own
surprised seanzo allowed you to use a game of thrones bar. honestly, I dunno what this job has no personality angle is all about. seems like one of the more memorable personalities on the boards like him or not. didn't really hit for me either
...and when RM went the Titanic route—Job was the one at the endin’ that froze
Except he never met Rose; he just stared at old threads and said he’d never let go
yep, kinda funny/ creative take on that angle.

[S] He Arthur Dent, no question, his world destroyed; wonders why he the bastard who’s perishin’
Make ‘em all repent, so don’t panic, boy, got that 40 to (42) give you the answer to everything
props for the first hitchhikers bar ive ever heard. aside for the creative reference dunno if it was worded all that well to have the best impact, but it was decent.
So welcome to the big league’s, pip squeek, see this black glove? Your fate
Alistair Overeem, see what happens when you try and punch above your weight?
don't follow this closely enough, but im guessing he fought it a higher weight calss and lost? I know im starting to sound negative here... but just not hitting for me.

[r] It was all games til I brought the mags out, blacked out and never knew when to stop
'Cause whenever I start the shootin’ I’m an opportunist, everyone in your crew gets a shot
there it is. was starting to wonder when we were gunna get back to some punches. really liked this one.
Yes, your chests need vests, flex these techs like Charli XCX, I pop artists
Where’s the tool at? After that BOOM, CLAP, that’s the sound of his heart stoppin’
I liked the set up a lot, the rhymescheme was tight, but then the punch didn't deliver for me and I couldn't figure out how you meant to rhyme it. pop arists don't rhyme with heart stopping so I wasn't sure what you were goin for.

[S] Get toe tagged; I ain’t here to share my lane with these powder puffs
It's so bad; got the right to control the game like a Power Glove
that's a miss for me
And I shouldn't mention it, but I paid for this, and I'm not payin' for joke acts
Plus, I'm an environmentalist--I won't contribute to Smoke stacks
this was nice, pretty good

overall... dunno guys. this is definitely beatable punches that connected were too few and far between for me. oktoberfest line and give everyone a shot were both sick though. We'll have to see what these boys brought.

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(S) There's a Chance the Rapper, riffic think he the best rapp-in(rapping) overall(pants).
He don't want this extended clip, dat xxl mag get involved
Headshot,problem solved make sure rffic wont pick up a pin(pen) again at all like a gutter ball.
wording /readability of this were awkward all the way through for me. I see the concepts but execution was lackin for me. didn't like the pin/pen wordplay

(J) Fuck if ya hatin, we got bars filled with guns like an old west saloon
Have ya kid crying once we pop like The Red Balloon
set was decent, punch was a miss for me
I'll put the pump to your ride and fill it with Shell(s), Sean
Shots'll set his whip on fire like Simon Belmont fighting hellspawn
not familiar with that reference

(S) Ill pay to get seanzo killed, I got that murder captial, but never been to Chiraq.
Couple of shooters,couple of rugers,have his blood running rapid like a kayak.
so-so but props for two bars with no lame setups
When I let that 44 go on riffic and seanzo, y'all watch the gay-show. Cause they a couple of Queer as(ass) folk.
Y'all must be watching westerns if u thinking u can gun-smoke
that's a miss for me

(J) Get this whore riffic(horrific)'s torture porn fetish isn't based on gore or sex
With his formula, we already know the drill, and end up being bored to death
ya this was nice, flowed good and the simple but effective drill/bore wordplay game of really well.
Cremate Sean's remains; the Flossed Out championships was your high water mark
Then put his portrait on the side of a vase with his ashes and call it mod urn art
haha ok... took too long to get to a pun which was kinda corny
(S) Prepare for the bloodshed, me and jo left enough dead.
Bout to ripp seanzo arrogance to shreds,
cause when I draw lead it's a caricature when I'm airing ya .you getting bodied cause of ya big head.
some of the wording / structure but odd but I liked the concept of caricature / big head. this would have hit harder if it was better worded but it still hit

(J) Fuck Seanzo's ego, fuck favoritism, fuck the pretentious bars, fuck the status quo
We can't sufffer the agony of defeat since we possess such calloused soles
wow a defeat line.. it wasn't terrible, but I mean it's still a defeat line.
They may seem gigantic, larger than life with a polished team dynamic
But they have no chants, like they losing with homefield advantage
ya I liked this one. seem gigantic / team dynamic / field advantage and the chants wordplay all sounded nice together. bar was cohesive, flowed well and had a decent impact

(S) Y'all plans of winning,are tony montana at his desk at the ending,blow-up-in-ya-face.
Physically I can fight'em,but i got the 40 like a collectors item
Jus' in-case, like desperado at a gutair recital
Ill hit every organ that's vital on my opposing rivals.
Structure is kinda killin you here. I mean it seems like there is a good concept here with the 'blow up in your face' shit and I can't find the rhyme scheme you were trying for. The rest don't work for me either and was hard to read.

(J) What the fuck is the point of a Hy-per-link? Must be some sort of white-nerd-thing
So many references seem really odd to me, your lack of penmenship should include a bibliography
ok decent angle although they didn't include links I did have to use google like 4 times which took away from the flow of the verse. took me a while to realize that this was all internal rhymes. I was trying to make hyperlink/whitenerd thing rhyme with bibliography, but I now I see what you were goin for. it's hard for me to get outside the normal rhymepattern but I think it still works ok and the lines were short enough that I don't think you are adding extra lines.
Seanzo beggin for commisary when he gets put in Twitter jail, press Riffic if I lift the iron
This bodybag reads like a polygraph; you can examine these lines and tell me if I'm lyin
woo damn. I liked this closer. very clever concept.

To be honest there was a lot more missed than hits for me in both verses. Seanzo/riffics angles didn't work for me at all really. job/smokes angles worked a little bit, but weren't carried out that effectively. bar for bar it's pretty even only a couple from each that really stood out to me. flowise riffic is very polished most of the time seanzo was not crazy with the flow but average, and the structure in smoke/job's verse was a little choppy at times.

brb quit re-read.
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bar for bar for me comes down to everyone gets a shot / crack steins vs homefield advantage / polygraph.

Honestly this shit is pretty much a tie to me I had sean/riffic ahead by a hair until the polygraph line and the momentum makes it feel like they won, but that's not really fair to give them the battle because they went second.

on a re-read I remembered that I also had some flow issues with seanzo-riffic verse. not to the same degree as some of the smoke/job verse, but maybe just enough to edge it for me.

too much of the verse was either a very light punch on something I had to google that didn't end up hitting after I read it. could be different if you know/like the references more than me. while the other guys had some wording issues, their concepts /angles were better to me - just enough to make up the difference.

ya... I gotta go with job and smoke on this, but like I said it was pretty much a tie imo.
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[r] Let's take a poll: who thinks Smoke here’s a legend?
You’re both light; you’ll win the day Smoke writes a coherent sentence

- Must be a personal. Seen this concept done a few times. Also have seen the "Type w/ a speech impedement" type concept as well. I liked it, tho. Clean and smooth.

[S] Smoke’s line’s? all bitten; if the line’s dope I bet it’s either stolen or bought
I've got a premonition: I 4-c your bars are ones you hope we all 4-got

- I think if you would have utilize a play on word with the whole 4-c/Explosives concept, it could have made this a lot more creative and dope. But seemed cool, again must be a personal, I assume?

[r] I don’t want whatever stein’s Smokin’, ‘cause what he’s hotboxin’ is not chronic
Drop the rope Smoke, you ain’t dope cuz you sound like you’re nodding off on it
RapBattles, RMBVA, you’re wack usin’ any textcee standards—watch ‘em stumble and fall
When I read your shit, I'm stupid sexy Flanders: I’m feelin’ nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all…

- Comedic aspect in the 2nd bar, Was ok at best. Bar before it was cool, and some what creative actually. I liked it. Overall as a combination, this was cool.

[S] So they fam now? Well they can dream 'bout writing their cute lines forever
'Til I’ll turn this to Oktoberfest, 'n celebrate by cracking two steins together
Team in the buildin’, gutter shit, you winning? I'm lettin’ off a Thundercat laugh
‘cause if you win I got the .30 waitin’ for you outside; this a lumberjack match

- Not sure how I feel about this, tbh. It's one of those love/hate feelings, lols. I like the concept in the 1st bar, but the second one came off kind of stale to me.

[S] And I heard Job got obsessed studyin' for this battle, lookin’ for an unmentioned fatality
It’s a shame with all that digging you never found an actual personality

- This was cool.

[r] Job, you’ll find Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter
‘fore someone reads your manifestos like “what an incredible author!”
You’re the George RR Martin of battles, ‘cept no one would care if you got the Throne
‘Cause you’ve typed a billion characters but never had a character of your own
...and when RM went the Titanic route—Job was the one at the endin’ that froze
Except he never met Rose; he just stared at old threads and said he’d never let go

- IMO, this was a pretty solid combination. Wasn't too crazy about the opening bar, the whole author one but the rest that followed were solid.

[S] He Arthur Dent, no question, his world destroyed; wonders why he the bastard who’s perishin’
Make ‘em all repent, so don’t panic, boy, got that 40 to (42) give you the answer to everything
So welcome to the big league’s, pip squeek, see this black glove? Your fate
Alistair Overeem, see what happens when you try and punch above your weight?

- Not sure what you're talkin about here.

[r] It was all games til I brought the mags out, blacked out and never knew when to stop
'Cause whenever I start the shootin’ I’m an opportunist, everyone in your crew gets a shot
Yes, your chests need vests, flex these techs like Charli XCX, I pop artists
Where’s the tool at? After that BOOM, CLAP, that’s the sound of his heart stoppin’

- Nah. Wasn't feelin this combo, tbr.

[S] Get toe tagged; I ain’t here to share my lane with these powder puffs
It's so bad; got the right to control the game like a Power Glove
And I shouldn't mention it, but I paid for this, and I'm not payin' for joke acts
Plus, I'm an environmentalist--I won't contribute to Smoke stacks

- This was a solid way to close out the verse. I fucks w/ it.


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(S) There's a Chance the Rapper, riffic think he the best rapp-in(rapping) overall(pants).
He don't want this extended clip, dat xxl mag get involved
Headshot,problem solved make sure rffic wont pick up a pin(pen) again at all like a gutter ball.

- I honestly like the angle/concept you tried to approached but Pin/Pen? Nah. That's a minor reach, bro. In other words, kind of forced, from how niggas in New York pronounce Pin & Pen, lol.

(J) Fuck if ya hatin, we got bars filled with guns like an old west saloon
Have ya kid crying once we pop like The Red Balloon
I'll put the pump to your ride and fill it with Shell(s), Sean
Shots'll set his whip on fire like Simon Belmont fighting hellspawn

- This was solid.

(S) Ill pay to get seanzo killed, I got that murder captial, but never been to Chiraq.
Couple of shooters,couple of rugers,have his blood running rapid like a kayak.
When I let that 44 go on riffic and seanzo, y'all watch the gay-show. Cause they a couple of Queer as(ass) folk.
Y'all must be watching westerns if u thinking u can gun-smoke

- This was weird to me. Not sure if your concepts and references really connect here. Wording was all over the place for me.

(J) Get this whore riffic(horrific)'s torture porn fetish isn't based on gore or sex
With his formula, we already know the drill, and end up being bored to death
Cremate Sean's remains; the Flossed Out championships was your high water mark
Then put his portrait on the side of a vase with his ashes and call it mod urn art

- I fucks with this combonation. Creativity was nice here.

(S) Prepare for the bloodshed, me and jo left enough dead.
Bout to ripp seanzo arrogance to shreds,
cause when I draw lead it's a caricature when I'm airing ya .you getting bodied cause of ya big head.

- This was weak.

(J) Fuck Seanzo's ego, fuck favoritism, fuck the pretentious bars, fuck the status quo
We can't sufffer the agony of defeat since we possess such calloused soles
They may seem gigantic, larger than life with a polished team dynamic
But they have no chants, like they losing with homefield advantage

- I recently dropped a similar concept but mine was "This poetic faggot Stanza Chants? - Only when reciting his poetry lines." I liked the closing bar, tho. Nice. Wasn't to fond of the opening bar.

(S) Y'all plans of winning,are tony montana at his desk at the ending,blow-up-in-ya-face.
Physically I can fight'em,but i got the 40 like a collectors item
Jus' in-case, like desperado at a gutair recital
Ill hit every organ that's vital on my opposing rivals.

- Flow was cool but PUN/execution overall was weak.

(J) What the fuck is the point of a Hy-per-link? Must be some sort of white-nerd-thing
So many references seem really odd to me, your lack of penmenship should include a bibliography
Seanzo beggin for commisary when he gets put in Twitter jail, press Riffic if I lift the iron
This bodybag reads like a polygraph; you can examine these lines and tell me if I'm lyin

- Solid way to finish out your verse, I fucks w/ it.

OVERALL: This shit was pretty dope, actually. One of the few battles I enjoyed reading on here TBH, and we all know I'm from "RB" and yadda yadda blahh blahh blahh but put that aside. I'm here for the culture of "text battling" & support the text battlers here. Props to both teams tho for droppin a well worth read and making sure to come correct for a finals match. All in all, I'd have to say, my personal favorites were Riffic and JOBone, tbch. I liked their bars the most, enjoyed Seanzo as well but a lot of his shit was either weird/awkward or just simple over my head and Smoke had some cool concepts with horrible wording/poor executions, IMO. So my vote is purely based off of which team I think won & enjoyed the most. When it comes to punches, punch for punch. I'd have to say riffic and Seanzo maye have outweighed their opponent here. I think JOB actually had a pretty dope solid verse and carried his team mate well because as I stated before, hsi concepts were there but the executions lacked any type of effectiveness. So, I'll have to say punch for punch riffic and Seanzo did their things but as far as enjoyment, JOBone really stood out for me. If I had to go in order, JOBone, riffic, Seanzo and then Smokenstien or w/e. So with that being said... I'd have to give it too riffic and Seanzo with consistency and just tad bit heavier punches.

v/riffic & Seanzo. - Consistency and just tad bit better punches as well as better misses.

But like I said, JOBone did his thing but unfortunately, I kind of judge text battles like boxing matches. It's all about the punches that connect and how effective those punches were. If JOB had just a tad bit more support from his team mate, they could have taken this. I score it as one team members is the right hand and the other is the left hand. JOB was boxing with and arm and a half here, IMO. Great battle, tho and again, Props to all.
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@KBomb, we actually did have links in the verse...
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[r] Let's take a poll: who thinks Smoke here’s a legend?
You’re both light; you’ll win the day Smoke writes a coherent sentence
haha funny concept but the rhyme was a tiny bit off for me.

[S] Smoke’s line’s? all bitten; if the line’s dope I bet it’s either stolen or bought
I've got a premonition: I 4-c your bars are ones you hope we all 4-got
haha once again i thought this was a funny concept. Nice

[r] I don’t want whatever stein’s Smokin’, ‘cause what he’s hotboxin’ is not chronic
Drop the rope Smoke, you ain’t dope cuz you sound like you’re nodding off on it
ok, ok. Not super hard hitting but flowed real nice.
RapBattles, RMBVA, you’re wack usin’ any textcee standards—watch ‘em stumble and fall
When I read your shit, I'm stupid sexy Flanders: I’m feelin’ nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all…
lmao great bar on the comedic tip

[S] So they fam now? Well they can dream 'bout writing their cute lines forever
'Til I’ll turn this to Oktoberfest, 'n celebrate by cracking two steins together
mmmmmm thats dope
Team in the buildin’, gutter shit, you winning? I'm lettin’ off a Thundercat laugh
‘cause if you win I got the .30 waitin’ for you outside; this a lumberjack match
Real creative. This quartet had two really good punches

[S] And I heard Job got obsessed studyin' for this battle, lookin’ for an unmentioned fatality
It’s a shame with all that digging you never found an actual personality
Not feeling this too much. Seen a lot of similar bars (like soul khans 'we can shave our beards, real deal can't grow a personality bar)

[r] Job, you’ll find Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter
‘fore someone reads your manifestos like “what an incredible author!”
Didn't land too hard with me. I get where you were going but it wasn't that creative or unique
You’re the George RR Martin of battles, ‘cept no one would care if you got the Throne
‘Cause you’ve typed a billion characters but never had a character of your own
I fucked with this. Good attack on Job in a clever way
...and when RM went the Titanic route—Job was the one at the endin’ that froze
Except he never met Rose; he just stared at old threads and said he’d never let go
Felt like an unnecessary extension of the previous two bars tbh. But maybe I don't know the rapmusic history enough since I was never on it.

[S] He Arthur Dent, no question, his world destroyed; wonders why he the bastard who’s perishin’
Make ‘em all repent, so don’t panic, boy, got that 40 to (42) give you the answer to everything
Arthur Dent reference is pretty obscure, but I thought the punch was alright
So welcome to the big league’s, pip squeek, see this black glove? Your fate
Alistair Overeem, see what happens when you try and punch above your weight?
Something about how this read threw me off a bit. I loved the punch though, shocked to see a dope sports bar come from seanzo lol

[r] It was all games til I brought the mags out, blacked out and never knew when to stop
'Cause whenever I start the shootin’ I’m an opportunist, everyone in your crew gets a shot
hmmm i must be missing something here. Felt kind of light. Rhyming on point though
Yes, your chests need vests, flex these techs like Charli XCX, I pop artists
Where’s the tool at? After that BOOM, CLAP, that’s the sound of his heart stoppin’
with that charli xcx reference is this supposed to be read with a british accent? i guess this sort of rhymes with a boston accent too. Besides the rhyme I thought this was so-so, nothing crazy

[S] Get toe tagged; I ain’t here to share my lane with these powder puffs
It's so bad; got the right to control the game like a Power Glove
mmmm this is nice
And I shouldn't mention it, but I paid for this, and I'm not payin' for joke acts
Plus, I'm an environmentalist--I won't contribute to Smoke stacks
ooooo damn this shits dirty. Very nice closer

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(S) There's a Chance the Rapper, riffic think he the best rapp-in(rapping) overall(pants).
He don't want this extended clip, dat xxl mag get involved
Headshot,problem solved make sure rffic wont pick up a pin(pen) again at all like a gutter ball.
I liked the first and third lines, but the middle was complete filler to me. I liked the chance the rapper / avatar play for riffic, the guttar ball pin again shit was solid

(J) Fuck if ya hatin, we got bars filled with guns like an old west saloon
Have ya kid crying once we pop like The Red Balloon
This is alright. Nothing stands out too much to me
I'll put the pump to your ride and fill it with Shell(s), Sean
Shots'll set his whip on fire like Simon Belmont fighting hellspawn
the punch seemed a bit wordy but i liked the couplet as a whole. Jived nicely together

(S) Ill pay to get seanzo killed, I got that murder captial, but never been to Chiraq.
Couple of shooters,couple of rugers,have his blood running rapid like a kayak.
I liked the setup more than the punch. The kayak running rapid is meh to me.
When I let that 44 go on riffic and seanzo, y'all watch the gay-show. Cause they a couple of Queer as(ass) folk.
Y'all must be watching westerns if u thinking u can gun-smoke
mmmm punch really nice. Syllable count from line to line makes it a bit awkward though

(J) Get this whore riffic(horrific)'s torture porn fetish isn't based on gore or sex
With his formula, we already know the drill, and end up being bored to death
the wording on whore riffic's torture pron fetish isn't based sounds off to me. If that wording would have been better it would have helped the punch land for me, but since it didn't I thought it was just so-so
Cremate Sean's remains; the Flossed Out championships was your high water mark
Then put his portrait on the side of a vase with his ashes and call it mod urn art
The punch is kind of corny but at the same time kind of cool lol. Creative to say the least.

(S) Prepare for the bloodshed, me and jo left enough dead.
Bout to ripp seanzo arrogance to shreds,
cause when I draw lead it's a caricature when I'm airing ya .you getting bodied cause of ya big head.
mmmm that's a really creative punch. The first two lines are both used as setups though, which detracts from it a bit.

(J) Fuck Seanzo's ego, fuck favoritism, fuck the pretentious bars, fuck the status quo
We can't sufffer the agony of defeat since we possess such calloused soles
meh, didn't really land for me
They may seem gigantic, larger than life with a polished team dynamic
But they have no chants, like they losing with homefield advantage
damn. i fuck with this. clever play on words

(S) Y'all plans of winning,are tony montana at his desk at the ending,blow-up-in-ya-face.
Physically I can fight'em,but i got the 40 like a collectors item
Jus' in-case, like desperado at a gutair recital
Ill hit every organ that's vital on my opposing rivals.
Nothing too crazy but I thought it read pretty nice after i said it to myself a couple of time. Appreciate the change in rhyme structure every now and then

(J) What the fuck is the point of a Hy-per-link? Must be some sort of white-nerd-thing
So many references seem really odd to me, your lack of penmenship should include a bibliography
lol after having to google a couple of things this landed for me
Seanzo beggin for commisary when he gets put in Twitter jail, press Riffic if I lift the iron
This bodybag reads like a polygraph; you can examine these lines and tell me if I'm lyin
mmmm nice closer

Overall I thought this was pretty close. I ended up edging slightly to Sean and Riff because I felt like their hardest hitting lines landed a bit harder. Good finals.
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Damnnn, this is the closest 2v2 match on rmbva Ive seen yet
A breakdown for this thing would be way too large and some of you have already been doing em so Imma keep it simple

Hardest hitting punches: Rifzo (close tho)
Best worplay: Smokinbone(very close)
Creativest(?) verse overall: Rifzo
Most enjoyable verse: Rifzo(kinda close)
Teamwork: none, really.


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Damn, this is close... I'll go over it a few more times and edit for my vote.
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both teams were dope in this one, had to edge slightly to sean and riff they had a couple more punches I liked overall, but yeah it was very colose
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Okay, I've reached a bit of a stalemate. It's essentially a tie imo, so I'm gonna do something different here to determine a winner. There are so many bars to go through and it's so close that I'm gonna go bar-for-bar and try out the M.O.S.S. system. I'm gonna do Seanzo and riffic first and then JOBone and Smoenstein. Let's get it poppin'!

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[r] Let's take a poll: who thinks Smoke here’s a legend? (5/10)
You’re both light; you’ll win the day Smoke writes a coherent sentence (5/10)

Nothing much going on here, but it’s a good opener that sets the tone for the overall feel of the verse. 10/20.

[S] Smoke’s line’s? all bitten; if the line’s dope I bet it’s either stolen or bought (6/10)
I've got a premonition: I 4-c your bars are ones you hope we all 4-got (6/10)

Again, this is pretty straightforward, but it flows really well thematically from riffic’s opening two bars. I had a feeling Seanzo was gonna bring up the Smokenstein four see/foresee “controversy”, so I was just waiting to see what he’d do with it. There’s nothing crazy here, but it’s a funny and intentionally reductionist I think, so I’m not gonna overanalyze it. 12/20.

[r] I don’t want whatever stein’s Smokin’, ‘cause what he’s hotboxin’ is not chronic (5/10)
Drop the rope Smoke, you ain’t dope cuz you sound like you’re nodding off on it (4/10)

I thought the clowning on Smoke angle was a little overdone. The first four bars were cool, but I would’ve liked to see the verse move on to something else by now. In isolation, these bars are really no better or worse than the previous four, but I’ll lower the score since I’ve gotten tired of the angle by now. I like the subtle Smokenstein/stein’s Smokin’ in the setup though, so that bumps the score up slightly. 9/20.

RapBattles, RMBVA, you’re wack usin’ any textcee standards—watch ‘em stumble and fall (4/10)
When I read your shit, I'm stupid sexy Flanders: I’m feelin’ nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… (4/10)

This is the beginning of an ongoing theme for me… I had to Google this line. After watching a short YouTube clip, I fully understand the reference, but let’s get into the bars! 8/20

[S] So they fam now? Well they can dream 'bout writing their cute lines forever (7/10)
'Til I’ll turn this to Oktoberfest, 'n celebrate by cracking two steins together (7/10)

Okay, now we’ve gotten off the “make fun of Smokenstein” angle. I like it. The overall premise was a little shaky to me, but the punch itself was dope. 14/20

Team in the buildin’, gutter shit, you winning? I'm lettin’ off a Thundercat laugh (3/10)
‘cause if you win I got the .30 waitin’ for you outside; this a lumberjack match (6/10)

These bars didn’t really hit for me. The setup seemed like gibberish to me—unless I’m missing something. I had to Google “lumberjack match” and I think I understand the reference, but it still didn’t really hit. I’m not sure if there were always exactly 30 wrestlers waiting outside the ring, but, even if that were the case, it’s just a play on a number. I feel like I may be missing something, so I apologize if that’s the case. 9/20

[S] And I heard Job got obsessed studyin' for this battle, lookin’ for an unmentioned fatality (4/10)
It’s a shame with all that digging you never found an actual personality (4/10)

[r] Job, you’ll find Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter (6/10)
‘fore someone reads your manifestos like “what an incredible author!” (4/10)
You’re the George RR Martin of battles, ‘cept no one would care if you got the Throne (4/10)
‘Cause you’ve typed a billion characters but never had a character of your own (6/10)

I’m judging these six bars together since they’re all one “pod” based around a “Job has no personality” theme. I didn’t really like the angle. In general, I’m not the big on personal angles like this unless something really creative can be done with them. This just seemed like more clowning. The “Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter” rhyme was on point, so that gets some extra points. Other than that, I liked the closing characters flip, but it was nothing crazy. I’m not sure if I’m missing something after Googling the “Game of Thrones” reference though. 28/60.

...and when RM went the Titanic route—Job was the one at the endin’ that froze (6/10)
Except he never met Rose; he just stared at old threads and said he’d never let go (6/10)

For some reason I like this a lot better than the Job has no personality angle. I wasn’t around in those days, so I can’t confirm whether or not Job was really holding on ‘til the end (it looks like he joined here a month after everyone else though), but I don’t think Job has no personality—which is probably why that angle fell particularly flat. Plus, I’ve seen Titanic, so the imagery works a lot better than a reference that I have to Google. 12/20.

[S] He Arthur Dent, no question, his world destroyed; wonders why he the bastard who’s perishin’ (7/10)
Make ‘em all repent, so don’t panic, boy, got that 40 to (42) give you the answer to everything (7/10)

Once again, I had to Google this reference, but this one definitely hit. The rhyme doesn’t work that well for me, but I’m sure it could be delivered in a way that I wouldn’t even notice, so I’m not gonna penalize that at all. 14/20.

So welcome to the big league’s, pip squeek, see this black glove? Your fate (4/10)
Alistair Overeem, see what happens when you try and punch above your weight? (4/10)

More Googling, but this one didn’t hit. I didn’t really get a direct answer, but I assume he fought above his weight class and ended up losing. This just doesn’t work for me. The idiom “punching above your weight” comes directly from fighting in the first place, so it’s just not a great double meaning imo. Again, I can’t promise I interpreted the bars 100% correctly since I didn’t get the reference in the first place, but that’s the best I can do. 8/20.

[r] It was all games til I brought the mags out, blacked out and never knew when to stop (6/10)
'Cause whenever I start the shootin’ I’m an opportunist, everyone in your crew gets a shot (6/10)

I hope I don’t sound overly petty here because I get what you’re going for, but that’s not what opportunism means to me. I’ve always thought of an opportunist as someone who abandons his or her principles to capitalize on some opportunity that’s arisen. So, this just doesn’t work for me. The rhyming was crisp though and I get the general idea, so it’s not a total flop. 12/20.

Yes, your chests need vests, flex these techs like Charli XCX, I pop artists (7.5/10)
Where’s the tool at? After that BOOM, CLAP, that’s the sound of his heart stoppin’ (7.5/10)

I had to consult Google again. And I kinda want to penalize you just for making me listen to this song. But, after sitting through the entire song, I definitely like the bars—if not the song. It wasn’t a haymaker, but it was dope. Really good internal rhymes too. 15/20

[S] Get toe tagged; I ain’t here to share my lane with these powder puffs (4/10)
It's so bad; got the right to control the game like a Power Glove (4/10)

After a quick Google search, this one fell flat for me. If I’m not misunderstanding something, it’s basically just saying “I have the right to control the game like an obscure type of video game controller.” I like the little “right” double meaning, but I still wasn’t feeling the bars. 8/20.


And I shouldn't mention it, but I paid for this, and I'm not payin' for joke acts (8.5/10)
Plus, I'm an environmentalist--I won't contribute to Smoke stacks (9/10)

This was the only real haymaker of the verse imo. I thought the setup was a little sloppy with the double use of “pay”, but that doesn’t take much away from the bars. This was a great closer. 17.5/20


So, overall: 176.5/320 = 5.52 points per bar

This was an above average verse, but I honestly expected a little more from Seanzo and riffic. They just lacked the haymakers to go along with a consistent verse. Even where things fell a little flat, there were no bars that stood out as being blatantly terrible or anything, but I just kept waiting for something crazy and never got anything approaching that until the closer. Part of it may have to do with the number of references that I didn’t get without the help of Google. Generally speaking, I struggle with pop culture, wrestling, and video game references, so this was pretty much a perfect storm for me. Obviously, it’s not as if you can cater your writing to every single reader (especially since pop culture is, by definition, not obscure to most people), but that probably had some impact on my judgment.
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JOBone & Smokenstein

(S) There's a Chance the Rapper, riffic think he the best rapp-in(rapping) overall(pants). (2/10)
He don't want this extended clip, dat xxl mag get involved (7/10)
Headshot,problem solved make sure rffic wont pick up a pin(pen) again at all like a gutter ball. (5/10)

Structure always seems to be the main problem in Smoke’s writing and this three bar grouping right off the bat doesn’t particularly help. I thought the Chance the Rapper line was really forced, but the extended clip/XXL mag shit was dope. The pin/pen wordplay in the last bar was nice too. I’m not a bowler, but picking up a pin doesn’t seem like the right terminology to me though, so that might be a little bit of a stretch. 14/30.

(J) Fuck if ya hatin, we got bars filled with guns like an old west saloon (7/10)
Have ya kid crying once we pop like The Red Balloon (7/10)
I'll put the pump to your ride and fill it with Shell(s), Sean (6.5)
Shots'll set his whip on fire like Simon Belmont fighting hellspawn (7/10)

The first two bars were simple, but effective. Nothing crazy, but I thought they were creative and well put together. Job did use the same basic Shell/pump concept that I used against him in the first round of this tournament, but it’s not a totally unique idea and that was about a month and a half ago by now, so I don’t think it was intentional—I will knock a half point off just because of the circumstances though. But, in any case, it was just a setup and worked perfectly with the punch. I had to Google it, but it’s very dope. This four bar “pod” is on point all the way through. 27.5/40

(S) Ill pay to get seanzo killed, I got that murder captial, but never been to Chiraq. (5/10)
Couple of shooters,couple of rugers,have his blood running rapid like a kayak. (3/10)

The first bar was cool, but the second fell flat for me. I don’t mean to be too nitpicky, but I don’t think anyone would say kayaks “run rapids.” So, all it really is is an association between rapids and kayaks—which is there, but needs to be worded better to really work. 8/20.

When I let that 44 go on riffic and seanzo, y'all watch the gay-show. Cause they a couple of Queer as(ass) folk. (2/10)
Y'all must be watching westerns if u thinking u can gun-smoke (3/10)

These two bars didn’t hit at all for me. The setup’s pretty sloppy and the punch jusn’t isn’t worded very well. Plus the single syllable rhyme really lessened its impact. 5/20

(J) Get this whore riffic(horrific)'s torture porn fetish isn't based on gore or sex (9/10)
With his formula, we already know the drill, and end up being bored to death (9/10)

Fire. The setup relates perfectly to the punch—which incorporates a simple, but really effective double meaning. 18/20

Cremate Sean's remains; the Flossed Out championships was your high water mark (6/10)
Then put his portrait on the side of a vase with his ashes and call it mod urn art (7/10)

I know these types of bars are kinda hit or miss, and I can see why people would think it’s kinda cheesy, but I like lines like this. It’s obviously not the most sophisticated wordplay in the world, but it works for me. The setup is a little disjointed though. Bringing up Flossed Out split the cremation idea and seems like it’s only there to produce the water mark/mod urn art rhyme. So, I’ll have to knock the setup down a little bit. 13/20


(S) Prepare for the bloodshed, me and jo left enough dead. (4/10)
Bout to ripp seanzo arrogance to shreds, (4/10)
cause when I draw lead it's a caricature when I'm airing ya .you getting bodied cause of ya big head. (5/10)

Again, I’m not a fan of these three bar groupings. The punch itself utilizes a great concept, but I didn’t think it was executed particularly well. The wording doesn’t really work as a full double meaning. So, I thought the idea could’ve been utilized much better. It was still a pretty nice bar though. 13/30

(J) Fuck Seanzo's ego, fuck favoritism, fuck the pretentious bars, fuck the status quo (4/10)
We can't sufffer the agony of defeat since we possess such calloused soles (4/10)
They may seem gigantic, larger than life with a polished team dynamic (5/10)
But they have no chants, like they losing with homefield advantage (5/10)

I like the angle here since I think everyone had Job and Smoke pegged as underdogs, but the bars weren’t great. I just can’t give too many points for a defeat/da feet line. It was a good one for what it’s worth, but it’s not worth a whole lot… And the closing punch just didn’t do it for me. The chants/chance wordplay is cool, but the bar just wasn’t impactful. 18/40


(S) Y'all plans of winning,are tony montana at his desk at the ending,blow-up-in-ya-face. (5/10)
Physically I can fight'em,but i got the 40 like a collectors item (4/10)
Jus' in-case, like desperado at a gutair recital (4/10)
Ill hit every organ that's vital on my opposing rivals. (4/10)

There are some more good ideas here, but the wording’s a little weird and the rhyme scheme’s way off. If Smoke would’ve executed some of these ideas better, these four bars could’ve been great, but they turned out pretty lackluster imo. 17/40

(J) What the fuck is the point of a Hy-per-link? Must be some sort of white-nerd-thing (6/10)
So many references seem really odd to me, your lack of penmenship should include a bibliography (6/10)

I’m not a huge fan of these bars, but, after having to Google so many of Seanzo and riffic’s bars, I probably wouldn’t mind if their verse had a bibliography. So, I have to give some points for that. 12/20


Seanzo beggin for commisary when he gets put in Twitter jail, press Riffic if I lift the iron (6/10)
This bodybag reads like a polygraph; you can examine these lines and tell me if I'm lyin (7/10)

This was a dope closer. It wasn’t the type of haymaker Seanzo had to finish out their verse, but it was a nice way to finish. The setup’s a little weird though. It seems like “press Riffic if I lift the iron” was just thrown on there to rhyme. There’s really no gun bar component to this angle except for that little phrase that’s just hanging out there at the end of the line. So, I’ll knock down the setup a little bit for that. 13/20.

So, overall: 158.5/300 = 5.28 points per bar

This was another above average verse that just didn’t quite have the standout bars to push it over the top. I think Job and Smoke could’ve taken this if Smoke would’ve just tightened up his writing a little bit—removing the three bar groupings and wording some of his bars a little better. Still, all in all this was a really close battle. The scoring here mostly reflects my initial impressions. Seanzo and riffic were just more consistent all the way through. I’m not sure if I’ll do this type of breakdown at all in the future (since it leads to me being overly critical of really minute details), but it was an interesting way to arrive at a winner here since I was undecided otherwise. Good battle.
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Feel free to pay that penance for taking some of the steam out of my lines predicting they'd do it again after they've been doing it most of the tourney.
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[r] Let's take a poll: who thinks Smoke here’s a legend?
You’re both light; you’ll win the day Smoke writes a coherent sentence
Intro bars +0.5

[S] Smoke’s line’s? all bitten; if the line’s dope I bet it’s either stolen or bought
I've got a premonition: I 4-c your bars are ones you hope we all 4-got
Don't get the meaning of "4" here but still somewhat effective +0.5

[r] I don’t want whatever stein’s Smokin’, ‘cause what he’s hotboxin’ is not chronic
Drop the rope Smoke, you ain’t dope cuz you sound like you’re nodding off on it
RapBattles, RMBVA, you’re wack usin’ any textcee standards—watch ‘em stumble and fall
When I read your shit, I'm stupid sexy Flanders: I’m feelin’ nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all…
Still waiting for the verse to pick up, but the Flanders line ended the scheme together well +1.25

[S] So they fam now? Well they can dream 'bout writing their cute lines forever
'Til I’ll turn this to Oktoberfest, 'n celebrate by cracking two steins together
Team in the buildin’, gutter shit, you winning? I'm lettin’ off a Thundercat laugh
‘cause if you win I got the .30 waitin’ for you outside; this a lumberjack match
Liked both of the punches here but thought the Thundercat laugh reference/link wasn't too effective +1.25

[S] And I heard Job got obsessed studyin' for this battle, lookin’ for an unmentioned fatality
It’s a shame with all that digging you never found an actual personality
Coulda flowed a bit better +0.5

[r] Job, you’ll find Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter
‘fore someone reads your manifestos like “what an incredible author!”
You’re the George RR Martin of battles, ‘cept no one would care if you got the Throne
‘Cause you’ve typed a billion characters but never had a character of your own
First two lines were fire. Second punch would've connected harder if it rhymed better but I like the scheme +1.5

...and when RM went the Titanic route—Job was the one at the endin’ that froze
Except he never met Rose; he just stared at old threads and said he’d never let go
Dope +0.75


[S] He Arthur Dent, no question, his world destroyed; wonders why he the bastard who’s perishin’
Make ‘em all repent, so don’t panic, boy, got that 40 to (42) give you the answer to everything
So welcome to the big league’s, pip squeek, see this black glove? Your fate
Alistair Overeem, see what happens when you try and punch above your weight?
First two lines were very well-written but the punch didn't rhyme well enough to move me. The "punching above your weight" idiom could've been used a lot better too +1.0

[r] It was all games til I brought the mags out, blacked out and never knew when to stop
'Cause whenever I start the shootin’ I’m an opportunist, everyone in your crew gets a shot
Yes, your chests need vests, flex these techs like Charli XCX, I pop artists
Where’s the tool at? After that BOOM, CLAP, that’s the sound of his heart stoppin’
Mmm, some of the best bars yet +1.75

[S] Get toe tagged; I ain’t here to share my lane with these powder puffs
It's so bad; got the right to control the game like a Power Glove
And I shouldn't mention it, but I paid for this, and I'm not payin' for joke acts
Plus, I'm an environmentalist--I won't contribute to Smoke stacks
Strong finish, just had to dock a little for the second set up being a bit wordy +1.25

@JOBone & @Smokinstein

(S) There's a Chance the Rapper, riffic think he the best rapp-in(rapping) overall(pants).
He don't want this extended clip, dat xxl mag get involved
Headshot,problem solved make sure rffic wont pick up a pin(pen) again at all like a gutter ball.
A little bit sloppy but I'm feeling most of this +1.25

(J) Fuck if ya hatin, we got bars filled with guns like an old west saloon
Have ya kid crying once we pop like The Red Balloon
I'll put the pump to your ride and fill it with Shell(s), Sean
Shots'll set his whip on fire like Simon Belmont fighting hellspawn
Feeling the first two bars, but "light ya whip on fire"/Spawn bars are kinda played out to me +1.25

(S) Ill pay to get seanzo killed, I got that murder captial, but never been to Chiraq.
Couple of shooters,couple of rugers,have his blood running rapid like a kayak.
When I let that 44 go on riffic and seanzo, y'all watch the gay-show. Cause they a couple of Queer as(ass) folk.
Y'all must be watching westerns if u thinking u can gun-smoke
First punch was okay but almost a stretch, 2nd set-up and punch were just bad. +0.75

(J) Get this whore riffic(horrific)'s torture porn fetish isn't based on gore or sex
With his formula, we already know the drill, and end up being bored to death
Cremate Sean's remains; the Flossed Out championships was your high water mark
Then put his portrait on the side of a vase with his ashes and call it mod urn art
First two lines were really good, would've rated the 2nd punch more if you acknowledged beforehand it was gonna be a bad bar +1.25

(S) Prepare for the bloodshed, me and jo left enough dead.
Bout to ripp seanzo arrogance to shreds,
cause when I draw lead it's a caricature when I'm airing ya .you getting bodied cause of ya big head.
Everything was sloppy here but the punch +1.0

(J) Fuck Seanzo's ego, fuck favoritism, fuck the pretentious bars, fuck the status quo
We can't sufffer the agony of defeat since we possess such calloused soles
They may seem gigantic, larger than life with a polished team dynamic
But they have no chants, like they losing with homefield advantage
Mmm, this was really good +1.50

(S) Y'all plans of winning,are tony montana at his desk at the ending,blow-up-in-ya-face.
Physically I can fight'em,but i got the 40 like a collectors item
Jus' in-case, like desperado at a gutair recital
Ill hit every organ that's vital on my opposing rivals.
Again, very sloppy but there was enough here to salvage average marks +1.0

(J) What the fuck is the point of a Hy-per-link? Must be some sort of white-nerd-thing
So many references seem really odd to me, your lack of penmenship should include a bibliography
Seanzo beggin for commisary when he gets put in Twitter jail, press Riffic if I lift the iron
This bodybag reads like a polygraph; you can examine these lines and tell me if I'm lyin
You're kinda all over the place here with your angles and rhyme structure but I like the general theme and the final punch was pretty good +1.25
Final Scores

Seanzo and riffic: 10.25
JobOne and Smoke: 9.25

Bar-for-bar this was pretty even, I think the winning team really won off just having a few more lines in their verse.

Vote: Seanzo and riffic
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[r] Let's take a poll: who thinks Smoke here’s a legend?
You’re both light; you’ll win the day Smoke writes a coherent sentence
Lol okay, not bad for an opener. Simple and to the point. Pretty true sometimes too cuz Smokes words his stuff weird sometimes
[S] Smoke’s line’s? all bitten; if the line’s dope I bet it’s either stolen or bought
I've got a premonition: I 4-c your bars are ones you hope we all 4-got
Meh this didnt really hit for me. Not bad for an opening bar to get things started though
[r] I don’t want whatever stein’s Smokin’, ‘cause what he’s hotboxin’ is not chronic
Drop the rope Smoke, you ain’t dope cuz you sound like you’re nodding off on it
RapBattles, RMBVA, you’re wack usin’ any textcee standards—watch ‘em stumble and fall
When I read your shit, I'm stupid sexy Flanders: I’m feelin’ nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all… nothin’ at all…
Feelin the Flanders bar, the 1st two was just average. The Smokinstein doin hard drugs idea has been done before multiple times

[S] So they fam now? Well they can dream 'bout writing their cute lines forever
'Til I’ll turn this to Oktoberfest, 'n celebrate by cracking two steins together
Team in the buildin’, gutter shit, you winning? I'm lettin’ off a Thundercat laugh
‘cause if you win I got the .30 waitin’ for you outside; this a lumberjack match
Okay I was feelin this 4 especially the cracking two steins together line.. Simple but effective and this flowed real good for me

[S] And I heard Job got obsessed studyin' for this battle, lookin’ for an unmentioned fatality
It’s a shame with all that digging you never found an actual personality
This was just alright. I see what you were going for and this may have hit harder if it was worded differently/expanded upon. Still decent though

[r] Job, you’ll find Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter
‘fore someone reads your manifestos like “what an incredible author!”
You’re the George RR Martin of battles, ‘cept no one would care if you got the Throne
‘Cause you’ve typed a billion characters but never had a character of your own
...and when RM went the Titanic route—Job was the one at the endin’ that froze
Except he never met Rose; he just stared at old threads and said he’d never let go
Hahaha the last few lines is pure comedy. Elliot Rodger in bed with your daughter though? lmao good shit all around here

[S] He Arthur Dent, no question, his world destroyed; wonders why he the bastard who’s perishin’
Make ‘em all repent, so don’t panic, boy, got that 40 to (42) give you the answer to everything
So welcome to the big league’s, pip squeek, see this black glove? Your fate
Alistair Overeem, see what happens when you try and punch above your weight?
The last line didnt really finish things off like I was waiting for. I fucks with the 40 to/42 bar though that shit was nice.

[r] It was all games til I brought the mags out, blacked out and never knew when to stop
'Cause whenever I start the shootin’ I’m an opportunist, everyone in your crew gets a shot
Yes, your chests need vests, flex these techs like Charli XCX, I pop artists
Where’s the tool at? After that BOOM, CLAP, that’s the sound of his heart stoppin’
lmao at that last line. Good multis here though and that opportunity/everyone in your crew gets a shot bar was mean

[S] Get toe tagged; I ain’t here to share my lane with these powder puffs
It's so bad; got the right to control the game like a Power Glove
And I shouldn't mention it, but I paid for this, and I'm not payin' for joke acts
Plus, I'm an environmentalist--I won't contribute to Smoke stacks
Okay not bad for a closer. Power glove shit was decent and that environmentalist scheme was a pretty good way to end things off.

Overall some pretty nice material in here, theres only a select few I would pick out as average. Ya'll showed up for the finals in a big way and kept it consistent. Good shit

@JOBone & @Smokinstein

(S) There's a Chance the Rapper, riffic think he the best rapp-in(rapping) overall(pants).
He don't want this extended clip, dat xxl mag get involved
Headshot,problem solved make sure rffic wont pick up a pin(pen) again at all like a gutter ball.
Flow is a little wonky on this one. To me it seems like the final line should end with 'again at all' but I was diggin the scheme it just needed to be worded differently.

(J) Fuck if ya hatin, we got bars filled with guns like an old west saloon
Have ya kid crying once we pop like The Red Balloon
I'll put the pump to your ride and fill it with Shell(s), Sean
Shots'll set his whip on fire like Simon Belmont fighting hellspawn
mmmmmmmm

(S) Ill pay to get seanzo killed, I got that murder captial, but never been to Chiraq.
Couple of shooters,couple of rugers,have his blood running rapid like a kayak.
When I let that 44 go on riffic and seanzo, y'all watch the gay-show. Cause they a couple of Queer as(ass) folk.
Y'all must be watching westerns if u thinking u can gun-smoke
Yet again the flow is a little off here. Didnt really like the kayak bar, and the last 2 was just okay.

(J) Get this whore riffic(horrific)'s torture porn fetish isn't based on gore or sex
With his formula, we already know the drill, and end up being bored to death
Cremate Sean's remains; the Flossed Out championships was your high water mark
Then put his portrait on the side of a vase with his ashes and call it mod urn art
Okay Job came to play, this was overall a pretty mean 4. The first 2 could have been improved a little with some expansion on the scheme but I fucks with the mod urn art punch, shit was nice.

(S) Prepare for the bloodshed, me and jo left enough dead.
Bout to ripp seanzo arrogance to shreds,
cause when I draw lead it's a caricature when I'm airing ya .you getting bodied cause of ya big head.
This was just okay.. I thought you were going to multi up after the bloodshed/enough dead bar but then it was just shreads/lead/head sounded pretty basic although multis arent always needed... dont get me wrong. Caricature line could have been so much better but it was still alright.

(J) Fuck Seanzo's ego, fuck favoritism, fuck the pretentious bars, fuck the status quo
We can't sufffer the agony of defeat since we possess such calloused soles
They may seem gigantic, larger than life with a polished team dynamic
But they have no chants, like they losing with homefield advantage
Start of this 4 was a little slow but picked up as it went on. I was really diggin the last 2 though that shit read real well and finished off the scheme nicely.

(S) Y'all plans of winning,are tony montana at his desk at the ending,blow-up-in-ya-face.
Physically I can fight'em,but i got the 40 like a collectors item
Jus' in-case, like desperado at a gutair recital
Ill hit every organ that's vital on my opposing rivals.
I wasnt feelin the first line but the last 3 flowed so well that it was enough to get a nice hit in. The last line is kinda basic though, you could really benefit from wording your lines better and expanding a little more on your ideas because you got potential building and it ends off with a basic punch.. Shit loses effectiveness.

(J) What the fuck is the point of a Hy-per-link? Must be some sort of white-nerd-thing
So many references seem really odd to me, your lack of penmenship should include a bibliography
Seanzo beggin for commisary when he gets put in Twitter jail, press Riffic if I lift the iron
This bodybag reads like a polygraph; you can examine these lines and tell me if I'm lyin
Nice ending to the battle, the twitter jail shit was funny but the press riffic if I lift the iron seems like it was just thrown in there. That last line was nice though and finished off the 4 pretty well.

Yeah this is a real good battle definitely deserving of the finals like I said before. I gotta stick with my original decision on the 1st read and lean towards Seanzo and riffic takin the win. The main reason they got it is because they stayed relatively consistent while Smoke was a little weak at parts and struggled to keep up with what Job was bringing. Job definitely had the best material out of all 4 battlers though, real good performance.
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Hey guys im not one for full breakdowns and this one would be like transcribing shakespeare but i had seanzo and riffic taking this in the end. I dont think smoke and Job did bad at all they had a lot of good stuff too but in this long of a battle it was a harder read a couple times through and seanzo and riffics had some good punches that hit harder but all in all I feel like all 4 of you have done better but you guys had a lot going on recently but good shit everybody
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Shout outs to @riffic for the best bars from our team in this battle. Sexy Flander is the bar of the year imo.
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